[PC-NCSG] Draft NCSG response to “Enhancing ICANN’s Accountability”-process. : PC endorsment

William Drake wjdrake
Wed May 28 11:14:18 EEST 2014


I?m utterly slammed today but added some quick comments. It?s crazy that such an important topic is given such a short time line?

BTW NCUC and Robin will both have workshops on accountability and the AoC at IGF, this doc could serve as a background paper and basis for further interventions there and elsewhere.

BD


On May 28, 2014, at 5:16 AM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi Maria,
> 
> Gabrielle and Niels worked on the comments and made the edits in the document. so we have an updated version https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit
> 
> I circulated the document again in NCSG  mailing list. I would like to ask kindly NCSG PC members to review the document and getting consensus with due diligence to submit this comment.
> 
> can you please set the start and end date for last call? as reminder the deadline for submission is 30th May 23:59UTC. getting the green light after the confirmation of last call, I will submit the comment on behalf of NCSG.
> 
> we have then later the reply period  where I think we can work to add additional comments and responding to other groups submissions
> 
> Best Regards,
> 
> Rafik
> 
> 
> 2014-05-27 20:56 GMT+09:00 Maria Farrell <maria.farrell at gmail.com>:
> Hi all,
> 
> Are Niels and Gabrielle happy with the current draft of the document at https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit ?
> 
> As Rafik has pointed out, we have another couple of days to finalise. So I'd just like to check if the interested people are still working on the draft / or satisfied with it?
> 
> All the best, Maria
> 
> 
> 
> On 26 May 2014 06:34, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:
> Hi Marilia,
> 
> thanks for the review and commenting. the deadline to submit was Tuesday 23:59 UTC but checking the announcement, we get 3 additional days because the technical issuers with migration to new website (https://www.icann.org/public-comments/enhancing-accountability-2014-05-06-en). 
> 
> Policy Committee should endorse asap. I think that Maria will handle the last call as PC chair. then having the green light I will submit before the deadline.
> 
> there will be reply period after this and I think we can expand with another comment about missing parts or clarifying others, in addition to commenting the contributions of other groups. 
> 
> Niels and Gabrielle are working on resolving remaining questions in the document.
> 
> Best Regards,
> 
> Rafik
> 
> 
> 
> 2014-05-26 8:03 GMT+09:00 Marilia Maciel <mariliamaciel at gmail.com>:
> 
> Thanks, Rafik. Made a few comments, mostly on top of others.
> Good contribution. Thanks to folks of Article 19 and others who worked on it.
> Best,
> Mar?lia
> 
> 
> On Fri, May 23, 2014 at 2:42 AM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:
> Hi Avri,
> 
> Niels and Gabrielle will answers comments soon. and yes we should lockdown on language soon. hope that next comments would propose some wording.
> I think we will be more efficient than ITU.. hopefully :)
> 
> Best Regards,
> 
> Rafik 
> 
> 2014-05-23 1:55 GMT+09:00 Avri Doria <avri at acm.org>:
> 
> hi,
> 
> had already indicated it in comments.  have now added words to Rafik's
> added words.
> 
> added some other weasel words too in response to some of Milton's concerns.
> 
> when do we get  a lock down on the language and a removal of brackets.
> 
> [we have become so ITU.]
> 
> avri
> 
> 
> On 22-May-14 10:47, Maria Farrell wrote:
> > Hi guys,
> >
> > No final call has yet been made. Avri, would you mind marking up the
> > text with your suggestions and re-circulating?
> >
> > Many thanks, Maria
> >
> >
> > On 22 May 2014 13:22, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com
> > <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> wrote:
> >
> >     Hi Rudi,
> >
> >     no, Niels shared the document two days ago and we are getting
> >     comments now.
> >
> >     Rafik
> >
> >
> >     2014-05-22 17:08 GMT+09:00 Rudi Vansnick <rudi.vansnick at isoc.be
> >     <mailto:rudi.vansnick at isoc.be>>:
> >
> >         If I?m not wrong we agreed on the content of the proposed
> >         document (googledoc) a week ago.
> >
> >         Maria, can you proceed ?
> >
> >         Kind regards,
> >
> >         Rudi Vansnick
> >         NPOC chair Policy Committee
> >         NPOC treasurer
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> >         www.npoc.org <http://www.npoc.org>
> >
> >         Op 20-mei-2014, om 13:06 heeft Rafik Dammak
> >         <rafik.dammak at gmail.com <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> het
> >         volgende geschreven:
> >
> >>         Hi everyone,
> >>
> >>         We have this draft commenting ICANN accountability. The
> >>         comment deadline is 27th may.
> >>         I count on PC to act quickly.
> >>
> >>         Best Regards,
> >>
> >>         Rafik
> >>
> >>         ---------- Forwarded message ----------
> >>         From: "Niels ten Oever" <lists at digitaldissidents.org
> >>         <mailto:lists at digitaldissidents.org>>
> >>         Date: May 20, 2014 7:58 PM
> >>         Subject: [NCSG-Discuss] Draft NCSG response to ?Enhancing
> >>         ICANN?s Accountability?-process.
> >>         To: <NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu
> >>         <mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu>>
> >>         Cc:
> >>
> >>         Dear all,
> >>
> >>         Gabrielle and I, with the great comments from Brenden and
> >>         Avri, have
> >>         drafted a potential NCSG response to the ?Enhancing ICANN?s
> >>         Accountability?-process. You can find it and comment here:
> >>
> >>         https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit?usp=sharing
> >>
> >>         The deadline is Tuesday next week, so it would be great if you
> >>         could
> >>         share your comments before Monday the 26th.
> >>
> >>         Best,
> >>
> >>         Niels
> >>
> >>
> >>         Niels ten Oever
> >>         Acting Head of Digital
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