[PC-NCSG] [NCSG-Discuss] Draft NCSG response to “Enhancing ICANN’s Accountability”-process.

Rafik Dammak rafik.dammak
Tue Jun 3 12:34:34 EEST 2014


Hi Maria,

Thanks!adding niels and gabrielle in cc.
With your proposed timeline I can submit  by 5th june?

Rafik
On Jun 3, 2014 6:16 PM, "Maria Farrell" <maria.farrell at gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi all,
>
> Following the 1-week extension by ICANN to submission of comments, we now
> need to finalise and submit ours.
>
> Any final revisions need to be submitted by midnight GMT tomorrow, Weds, 4
> June. The final version will be submitted to ICANN 24 hours after that.
>
> So 1) if you have final revisions, make them to this doc (and note your
> rationale), or send direct to Niels and Gabrielle.
>
> 2) Niels/Gabrielle, please send me the final version by midnight GMT,
> Thurs 5 June.
>
> All the best, Maria
>
>
> On 27 May 2014 13:05, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> Hi Maria,
>>
>> Niels and Gabrielle are going to work in the comments today to resolve
>> the comments. I guess we can have clean version by tomorrow?
>> I can confirm with them
>>
>> Rafik
>>
>>
>> 2014-05-27 20:56 GMT+09:00 Maria Farrell <maria.farrell at gmail.com>:
>>
>> Hi all,
>>>
>>> Are Niels and Gabrielle happy with the current draft of the document at
>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit
>>> ?
>>>
>>> As Rafik has pointed out, we have another couple of days to finalise. So
>>> I'd just like to check if the interested people are still working on the
>>> draft / or satisfied with it?
>>>
>>> All the best, Maria
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> On 26 May 2014 06:34, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Hi Marilia,
>>>>
>>>> thanks for the review and commenting. the deadline to submit was
>>>> Tuesday 23:59 UTC but checking the announcement, we get 3 additional days
>>>> because the technical issuers with migration to new website (
>>>> https://www.icann.org/public-comments/enhancing-accountability-2014-05-06-en
>>>> ).
>>>>
>>>> Policy Committee should endorse asap. I think that Maria will handle
>>>> the last call as PC chair. then having the green light I will submit before
>>>> the deadline.
>>>>
>>>> there will be reply period after this and I think we can expand with
>>>> another comment about missing parts or clarifying others, in addition to
>>>> commenting the contributions of other groups.
>>>>
>>>> Niels and Gabrielle are working on resolving remaining questions in the
>>>> document.
>>>>
>>>> Best Regards,
>>>>
>>>> Rafik
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> 2014-05-26 8:03 GMT+09:00 Marilia Maciel <mariliamaciel at gmail.com>:
>>>>
>>>> Thanks, Rafik. Made a few comments, mostly on top of others.
>>>>> Good contribution. Thanks to folks of Article 19 and others who worked
>>>>> on it.
>>>>> Best,
>>>>> Mar?lia
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> On Fri, May 23, 2014 at 2:42 AM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>>> Hi Avri,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Niels and Gabrielle will answers comments soon. and yes we should
>>>>>> lockdown on language soon. hope that next comments would propose some
>>>>>> wording.
>>>>>> I think we will be more efficient than ITU.. hopefully :)
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Best Regards,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Rafik
>>>>>>
>>>>>> 2014-05-23 1:55 GMT+09:00 Avri Doria <avri at acm.org>:
>>>>>>
>>>>>> hi,
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> had already indicated it in comments.  have now added words to
>>>>>>> Rafik's
>>>>>>> added words.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> added some other weasel words too in response to some of Milton's
>>>>>>> concerns.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> when do we get  a lock down on the language and a removal of
>>>>>>> brackets.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> [we have become so ITU.]
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> avri
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> On 22-May-14 10:47, Maria Farrell wrote:
>>>>>>> > Hi guys,
>>>>>>> >
>>>>>>> > No final call has yet been made. Avri, would you mind marking up
>>>>>>> the
>>>>>>> > text with your suggestions and re-circulating?
>>>>>>> >
>>>>>>> > Many thanks, Maria
>>>>>>> >
>>>>>>> >
>>>>>>> > On 22 May 2014 13:22, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com
>>>>>>> > <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> wrote:
>>>>>>> >
>>>>>>> >     Hi Rudi,
>>>>>>> >
>>>>>>> >     no, Niels shared the document two days ago and we are getting
>>>>>>> >     comments now.
>>>>>>> >
>>>>>>> >     Rafik
>>>>>>> >
>>>>>>> >
>>>>>>> >     2014-05-22 17:08 GMT+09:00 Rudi Vansnick <
>>>>>>> rudi.vansnick at isoc.be
>>>>>>> >     <mailto:rudi.vansnick at isoc.be>>:
>>>>>>> >
>>>>>>> >         If I?m not wrong we agreed on the content of the proposed
>>>>>>> >         document (googledoc) a week ago.
>>>>>>> >
>>>>>>> >         Maria, can you proceed ?
>>>>>>> >
>>>>>>> >         Kind regards,
>>>>>>> >
>>>>>>> >         Rudi Vansnick
>>>>>>> >         NPOC chair Policy Committee
>>>>>>> >         NPOC treasurer
>>>>>>> >         rudi.vansnick at npoc.org <mailto:rudi.vansnick at npoc.org>
>>>>>>> >         Tel : +32 (0)9 329 39 16
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>>>>>>> >         www.npoc.org <http://www.npoc.org>
>>>>>>> >
>>>>>>> >         Op 20-mei-2014, om 13:06 heeft Rafik Dammak
>>>>>>> >         <rafik.dammak at gmail.com <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>>
>>>>>>> het
>>>>>>> >         volgende geschreven:
>>>>>>> >
>>>>>>> >>         Hi everyone,
>>>>>>> >>
>>>>>>> >>         We have this draft commenting ICANN accountability. The
>>>>>>> >>         comment deadline is 27th may.
>>>>>>> >>         I count on PC to act quickly.
>>>>>>> >>
>>>>>>> >>         Best Regards,
>>>>>>> >>
>>>>>>> >>         Rafik
>>>>>>> >>
>>>>>>> >>         ---------- Forwarded message ----------
>>>>>>> >>         From: "Niels ten Oever" <lists at digitaldissidents.org
>>>>>>> >>         <mailto:lists at digitaldissidents.org>>
>>>>>>> >>         Date: May 20, 2014 7:58 PM
>>>>>>> >>         Subject: [NCSG-Discuss] Draft NCSG response to ?Enhancing
>>>>>>> >>         ICANN?s Accountability?-process.
>>>>>>> >>         To: <NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu
>>>>>>> >>         <mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu>>
>>>>>>> >>         Cc:
>>>>>>> >>
>>>>>>> >>         Dear all,
>>>>>>> >>
>>>>>>> >>         Gabrielle and I, with the great comments from Brenden and
>>>>>>> >>         Avri, have
>>>>>>> >>         drafted a potential NCSG response to the ?Enhancing
>>>>>>> ICANN?s
>>>>>>> >>         Accountability?-process. You can find it and comment here:
>>>>>>> >>
>>>>>>> >>
>>>>>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit?usp=sharing
>>>>>>> >>
>>>>>>> >>         The deadline is Tuesday next week, so it would be great
>>>>>>> if you
>>>>>>> >>         could
>>>>>>> >>         share your comments before Monday the 26th.
>>>>>>> >>
>>>>>>> >>         Best,
>>>>>>> >>
>>>>>>> >>         Niels
>>>>>>> >>
>>>>>>> >>
>>>>>>> >>         Niels ten Oever
>>>>>>> >>         Acting Head of Digital
>>>>>>> >>
>>>>>>> >>         Article 19
>>>>>>> >>         www.article19.org <http://www.article19.org/>
>>>>>>> >>
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