[PC-NCSG] [NCSG-Discuss] Draft NCSG response to “Enhancing ICANN’s Accountability”-process.
Maria Farrell
maria.farrell
Tue Jun 3 12:16:21 EEST 2014
Hi all,
Following the 1-week extension by ICANN to submission of comments, we now
need to finalise and submit ours.
Any final revisions need to be submitted by midnight GMT tomorrow, Weds, 4
June. The final version will be submitted to ICANN 24 hours after that.
So 1) if you have final revisions, make them to this doc (and note your
rationale), or send direct to Niels and Gabrielle.
2) Niels/Gabrielle, please send me the final version by midnight GMT, Thurs
5 June.
All the best, Maria
On 27 May 2014 13:05, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:
> Hi Maria,
>
> Niels and Gabrielle are going to work in the comments today to resolve the
> comments. I guess we can have clean version by tomorrow?
> I can confirm with them
>
> Rafik
>
>
> 2014-05-27 20:56 GMT+09:00 Maria Farrell <maria.farrell at gmail.com>:
>
> Hi all,
>>
>> Are Niels and Gabrielle happy with the current draft of the document at
>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit
>> ?
>>
>> As Rafik has pointed out, we have another couple of days to finalise. So
>> I'd just like to check if the interested people are still working on the
>> draft / or satisfied with it?
>>
>> All the best, Maria
>>
>>
>>
>> On 26 May 2014 06:34, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>>> Hi Marilia,
>>>
>>> thanks for the review and commenting. the deadline to submit was Tuesday
>>> 23:59 UTC but checking the announcement, we get 3 additional days because
>>> the technical issuers with migration to new website (
>>> https://www.icann.org/public-comments/enhancing-accountability-2014-05-06-en
>>> ).
>>>
>>> Policy Committee should endorse asap. I think that Maria will handle the
>>> last call as PC chair. then having the green light I will submit before the
>>> deadline.
>>>
>>> there will be reply period after this and I think we can expand with
>>> another comment about missing parts or clarifying others, in addition to
>>> commenting the contributions of other groups.
>>>
>>> Niels and Gabrielle are working on resolving remaining questions in the
>>> document.
>>>
>>> Best Regards,
>>>
>>> Rafik
>>>
>>>
>>> 2014-05-26 8:03 GMT+09:00 Marilia Maciel <mariliamaciel at gmail.com>:
>>>
>>> Thanks, Rafik. Made a few comments, mostly on top of others.
>>>> Good contribution. Thanks to folks of Article 19 and others who worked
>>>> on it.
>>>> Best,
>>>> Mar?lia
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On Fri, May 23, 2014 at 2:42 AM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
>>>> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Hi Avri,
>>>>>
>>>>> Niels and Gabrielle will answers comments soon. and yes we should
>>>>> lockdown on language soon. hope that next comments would propose some
>>>>> wording.
>>>>> I think we will be more efficient than ITU.. hopefully :)
>>>>>
>>>>> Best Regards,
>>>>>
>>>>> Rafik
>>>>>
>>>>> 2014-05-23 1:55 GMT+09:00 Avri Doria <avri at acm.org>:
>>>>>
>>>>> hi,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> had already indicated it in comments. have now added words to Rafik's
>>>>>> added words.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> added some other weasel words too in response to some of Milton's
>>>>>> concerns.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> when do we get a lock down on the language and a removal of brackets.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> [we have become so ITU.]
>>>>>>
>>>>>> avri
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On 22-May-14 10:47, Maria Farrell wrote:
>>>>>> > Hi guys,
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > No final call has yet been made. Avri, would you mind marking up the
>>>>>> > text with your suggestions and re-circulating?
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > Many thanks, Maria
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > On 22 May 2014 13:22, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com
>>>>>> > <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> wrote:
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > Hi Rudi,
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > no, Niels shared the document two days ago and we are getting
>>>>>> > comments now.
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > Rafik
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > 2014-05-22 17:08 GMT+09:00 Rudi Vansnick <rudi.vansnick at isoc.be
>>>>>> > <mailto:rudi.vansnick at isoc.be>>:
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > If I?m not wrong we agreed on the content of the proposed
>>>>>> > document (googledoc) a week ago.
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > Maria, can you proceed ?
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > Kind regards,
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > Rudi Vansnick
>>>>>> > NPOC chair Policy Committee
>>>>>> > NPOC treasurer
>>>>>> > rudi.vansnick at npoc.org <mailto:rudi.vansnick at npoc.org>
>>>>>> > Tel : +32 (0)9 329 39 16
>>>>>> <tel:%2B32%20%280%299%20329%2039%2016>
>>>>>> > Mobile : +32 (0)475 28 16 32
>>>>>> <tel:%2B32%20%280%29475%2028%2016%2032>
>>>>>> > www.npoc.org <http://www.npoc.org>
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> > Op 20-mei-2014, om 13:06 heeft Rafik Dammak
>>>>>> > <rafik.dammak at gmail.com <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>>
>>>>>> het
>>>>>> > volgende geschreven:
>>>>>> >
>>>>>> >> Hi everyone,
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> We have this draft commenting ICANN accountability. The
>>>>>> >> comment deadline is 27th may.
>>>>>> >> I count on PC to act quickly.
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> Best Regards,
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> Rafik
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
>>>>>> >> From: "Niels ten Oever" <lists at digitaldissidents.org
>>>>>> >> <mailto:lists at digitaldissidents.org>>
>>>>>> >> Date: May 20, 2014 7:58 PM
>>>>>> >> Subject: [NCSG-Discuss] Draft NCSG response to ?Enhancing
>>>>>> >> ICANN?s Accountability?-process.
>>>>>> >> To: <NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu
>>>>>> >> <mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu>>
>>>>>> >> Cc:
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> Dear all,
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> Gabrielle and I, with the great comments from Brenden and
>>>>>> >> Avri, have
>>>>>> >> drafted a potential NCSG response to the ?Enhancing ICANN?s
>>>>>> >> Accountability?-process. You can find it and comment here:
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit?usp=sharing
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> The deadline is Tuesday next week, so it would be great if
>>>>>> you
>>>>>> >> could
>>>>>> >> share your comments before Monday the 26th.
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> Best,
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> Niels
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> Niels ten Oever
>>>>>> >> Acting Head of Digital
>>>>>> >>
>>>>>> >> Article 19
>>>>>> >> www.article19.org <http://www.article19.org/>
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