Introduction of Freedom of Expression Topic on SubPro IRT

[James Olorundare]

Dear Team,

I have a few comments viz:

* Clarity and Precision:* The extract should be clear and precise in the
language in order to prevent misinterpretation and ambiguity, especially
during the evaluation and objection process. It should be reviewed to
ensure that it conveys the intended meaning accurately.



*Inclusion of Specific Legal References:* specifically on  "internationally
recognized principles of law," it would be beneficial to specify which
principles are being referred to and provide appropriate legal references
for transparency and consistency.



*Linking to Detailed Sections:* The paragraph references other sections
within the AGB (Applicant Guidebook), and it is crucial to ensure that the
hyperlinks are accurate and lead to the relevant sections for easy access
and comprehension.


Above for your information, please.


Kind regards.


*Engr. Kunle Olorundare, SMIEEE*

*Acting President, Internet Society Nigeria Chapter /*

*Coordinator, Nigerian School on Internet Governance.*

*Mobile:+2348036551591*

URL:https://2023.sig.ng/team/

URL:
https://isoc.ng/about/executive-council/acting-president-kunle-olorundare/

On Tue, Jul 25, 2023 at 1:13 AM Juan Manuel Rojas <
0000048934d5d033-dmarc-request at listserv.syr.edu> wrote:

> Dear all,
> As you already know some of us are working as a part of SubPro IRT,
> currently the WG is discussing about Predictability and for our next
> meeting (tomorrow 25th at 20 UTC) the Freedom of Expression is being
> introduced. As a team we would like to know what are your concerns with the
> writing of the following paragraph, having into account that is a Draft to
> start the discussion,:
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> "
> Applicant Freedom of Expression - proposed AGB text
> DRAFT AGB TEXT START
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> "ICANN respects the freedom of expression rights of applicants that are
> protected under internationally recognized principles of law. Applicants
> can apply for any available gTLD other than those restricted based on
> technical standards, pre-established reserved name lists, and other
> restrictions detailed in the AGB. Applicants should be mindful of
> limitations to free expression [hyperlink to LPI section] when submitting
> an application as detailed in the AGB. Applications are subject to an
> evaluation and objection process [hyperlink] as described in the AGB and
> will be unsuccessful should an applied-for string be found to violate
> applicable laws or other rights and requirements specified in the AGB. The
> evaluation of applications, including decisions on objections, will be
> performed by independent third party vendors who will take into account
> freedom of expression considerations together with other relevant factors.
> Please see the relevant sections of this guidebook for more information on
> the evaluation [hyperlink] and dispute resolution process. [hyperlink]."
>
> Excuse the timing but that draft was sent out until today. We will be
> waiting your observations at this topic.
>
> *JUAN MANUEL ROJAS P.*
> Director - MINKA DIGITAL Colombia
> NPOC Policy Chair - NCSG/GNSO
> Founding member - ISOC Colombia
> Master IT candidate, UNAD
> Registered Linux User No.*533108.*
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> *Cel. +57 301 743 56 00Instagram/Twitter: @JmanuRojas
> <http://www.twitter.com/jmanurojas>*
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Kunle Olorundare (MNSE, PRINCE2)
+2348036551591
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