<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:comic sans ms,sans-serif;font-size:large"><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:107%;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">Dear Team,</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:107%;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">I have a few comments viz:</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:107%;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b> Clarity and Precision:</b> The extract should be clear and
precise in the language in order to prevent misinterpretation and ambiguity, especially
during the evaluation and objection process. It should be reviewed to ensure
that it conveys the intended meaning accurately. </p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:107%;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b>Inclusion of Specific Legal References:</b> specifically on "internationally recognized principles of
law," it would be beneficial to specify which principles are being
referred to and provide appropriate legal references for transparency and
consistency.</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:107%;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b>Linking to Detailed Sections:</b> The paragraph references other
sections within the AGB (Applicant Guidebook), and it is crucial to ensure that
the hyperlinks are accurate and lead to the relevant sections for easy access
and comprehension.</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:107%;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><br></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:107%;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">Above for your information, please.</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:107%;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><br></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:107%;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">Kind regards.</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:107%;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><br></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:107%;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b>Engr. Kunle Olorundare, SMIEEE</b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:107%;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b>Acting President, Internet Society Nigeria Chapter /</b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:107%;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b>Coordinator, Nigerian School on Internet Governance.</b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:107%;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><b>Mobile:+2348036551591</b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:107%;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">URL:<a href="https://2023.sig.ng/team/">https://2023.sig.ng/team/</a><b><br></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:0in 0in 8pt;line-height:107%;font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">URL: <a href="https://isoc.ng/about/executive-council/acting-president-kunle-olorundare/">https://isoc.ng/about/executive-council/acting-president-kunle-olorundare/</a><br></p></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Tue, Jul 25, 2023 at 1:13 AM Juan Manuel Rojas <<a href="mailto:0000048934d5d033-dmarc-request@listserv.syr.edu">0000048934d5d033-dmarc-request@listserv.syr.edu</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div><div style="font-family:"Helvetica Neue",Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif;font-size:13px"><div><div dir="ltr">Dear all, <br><div>As you already know some of us are working as a part of SubPro IRT, currently the WG is discussing about Predictability and for our next meeting (tomorrow 25th at 20 UTC) the Freedom of Expression is being introduced. As a team we would like to know what are your concerns with the writing of the following paragraph, having into account that is a Draft to start the discussion,:</div><div><br></div><div dir="ltr">"<div>Applicant Freedom of Expression - proposed AGB text<br><div>DRAFT AGB TEXT START</div><div><br></div>"ICANN respects the freedom of expression rights of applicants that are protected under internationally recognized principles of law. Applicants can apply for any available gTLD other than those restricted based on technical standards, pre-established reserved name lists, and other restrictions detailed in the AGB. Applicants should be mindful of limitations to free expression [hyperlink to LPI section] when submitting an application as detailed in the AGB. Applications are subject to an evaluation and objection process [hyperlink] as described in the AGB and will be unsuccessful should an applied-for string be found to violate<br>applicable laws or other rights and requirements specified in the AGB. The evaluation of applications, including decisions on objections, will be performed by independent third party vendors who will take into account freedom of expression considerations together with other relevant factors. Please see the relevant sections of this guidebook for more information on the evaluation [hyperlink] and dispute resolution process. [hyperlink]."</div><div><br></div><div dir="ltr">Excuse the timing but that draft was sent out until today. We will be waiting your observations at this topic. <br></div></div></div><div><br></div><div><div style="font-size:13px;font-family:Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif"><div><div id="m_-8962594763436407136ydpbc80bd55yui_3_16_0_ym19_1_1467397914851_28423"><span style="font-size:small"><b>JUAN MANUEL ROJAS P.</b><br style="color:rgb(69,69,69)"></span><div><span style="font-size:small"><font style="background-color:inherit" size="2" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" color="#808080"><span id="m_-8962594763436407136ydpbc80bd55yui_3_16_0_ym19_1_1467397914851_29214">Director - MINKA DIGITAL Colombia</span></font></span></div></div><div id="m_-8962594763436407136ydpbc80bd55yui_3_16_0_ym19_1_1467397914851_28423" dir="ltr"><font size="2" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" color="#808080"><span style="font-size:small">NPOC Policy Chair - NCSG/GNSO<br></span></font></div><div dir="ltr"><span><div dir="ltr"><font size="2" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" color="#808080"><span style="font-size:small"><span><span style="font-size:small"><font style="background-color:inherit" size="2" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" color="#808080"><span id="m_-8962594763436407136ydpbc80bd55yui_3_16_0_ym19_1_1467397914851_29214">Founding member - ISOC Colombia</span></font></span></span><br></span></font></div></span></div><div id="m_-8962594763436407136ydpbc80bd55yui_3_16_0_ym19_1_1467397914851_28423" dir="ltr"><span style="font-size:small;color:rgb(128,128,128);font-family:Helvetica,Arial,sans-serif">Master IT candidate, UNAD</span><br></div><div dir="ltr"><font size="2" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" color="#808080"><span style="font-size:small"><span><font style="background-color:inherit" size="2" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" color="#808080"><span style="font-size:small">Registered Linux User No.<b><span>533108.</span></b></span></font></span><br></span></font></div><div id="m_-8962594763436407136ydpbc80bd55yui_3_16_0_ym19_1_1467397914851_28423" dir="ltr"><span style="font-size:small"><br></span></div><div id="m_-8962594763436407136ydpbc80bd55yui_3_16_0_ym19_1_1467397914851_28423" dir="ltr"><span style="font-size:small"><font style="background-color:inherit" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif"><i>Cel. +57 301 743 56 00<br>Instagram/Twitter: <a href="http://www.twitter.com/jmanurojas" id="m_-8962594763436407136ydpbc80bd55yui_3_16_0_ym19_1_1467397914851_28445" style="margin:0px;padding:0px;color:blue;outline:currentcolor none medium;background-color:transparent;background-image:none;background-size:auto" rel="nofollow" target="_blank">@JmanuRojas</a></i></font><br id="m_-8962594763436407136ydpbc80bd55yui_3_16_0_ym19_1_1467397914851_29244" style="color:rgb(69,69,69)"></span></div></div><div><br></div><div style="font-size:13px;font-family:arial,helvetica,clean,sans-serif"><br><br><br><br></div> </div></div></div></div></div></blockquote></div><br clear="all"><div><br></div><span class="gmail_signature_prefix">-- </span><br><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div>Kunle Olorundare (MNSE, PRINCE2)</div><div>+2348036551591</div></div></div>