[NCSG-PC] Review Comment on Draft ICANN Africa Strategic Plan 2016-2020 Version 3.0

[Stephanie Perrin]

I think it is a great comment, I am sorry I did not review it earlier as 
there are a few typos but it is a very strong comment.

Stephanie

On 2018-09-08 23:34, Rafik Dammak wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> Reminder about  reviewing the public comment 
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GGTNxgct2a01Z4lAKdt5m-pxx3Lyemc8lZ0sgAoA65E/edit
>
> Best,
>
> Rafik
>
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> From: *Farell FOLLY* <farell at benin2point0.org 
> <mailto:farell at benin2point0.org>>
> Date: Wed, Sep 5, 2018, 3:26 AM
> Subject: Re: [NCSG-Discuss] [Public Comments] Call for Volunteers for 
> Comment on Draft ICANN Africa Strategic Plan 2016-2020 Version 3.0
> To: <NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu <mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu>>
>
>
> As a reminder, the link to the PC is: 
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GGTNxgct2a01Z4lAKdt5m-pxx3Lyemc8lZ0sgAoA65E/edit 
>
>
>
>> On 4 Sep 2018, at 19:19, Farell FOLLY <farell at BENIN2POINT0.ORG 
>> <mailto:farell at BENIN2POINT0.ORG>> wrote:
>>
>> Dear All,
>>
>> Following this message from Rafik regarding the Public Comment on 
>> ICANN Strategy for Africa, many volunteers and I drafted our comment 
>> as NCSG. I, therefore, invite everybody to take a look and make some 
>> suggestions and or comments.
>>
>> May people have already provided some inputs but I haven’t resolved 
>> any. I prefer to not alter them and let the list check first.
>>
>> *I would also like to remind us that the deadline is set on 10th of 
>> September, let’s say in one week.*
>>
>> Thanks for your usual cooperation.
>>
>> @__f_f__
>>
>> Best Regards
>> ____________________________________
>>
>> (Ekue) Farell FOLLY
>> NCUC Rep. to the NCSG Policy Committee
>> linkedin.com/in/farellf <http://linkedin.com/in/farellf>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>> On 31 Jul 2018, at 02:23, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at GMAIL.COM 
>>> <mailto:rafik.dammak at GMAIL.COM>> wrote:
>>>
>>> Hi all,
>>>
>>> ICANN published a new public comment, this time on the ICANN Africa 
>>> Strategic Plan 2016-2020. Regional strategies started few year ago, 
>>> in Prague meeting 2012 in ad-hoc way and the first strategy was for 
>>> Africa.
>>>
>>> This public comment is an opportunity for NCSG as stakeholder group 
>>> to give input in the draft strategy and to see there is any area of 
>>> concern or improvement. It is also an opportunity for our members 
>>> from Africa to influence it and draft a comment. You can find more 
>>> details about the background of this public comment and the report 
>>> here  . 
>>> https://www.icann.org/public-comments/africa-strategic-plan-2018-07-30-en 
>>> <https://www.icann.org/public-comments/africa-strategic-plan-2018-07-30-en>
>>>
>>> To kick-off the discussion I created this google doc to be used 
>>> during the drafting by the volunteers to populate it: 
>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GGTNxgct2a01Z4lAKdt5m-pxx3Lyemc8lZ0sgAoA65E/edit?usp=sharing 
>>>
>>>
>>> Please let me know offlist if you want to volunteer for the 
>>> drafting. It is good to have several people to volunteer together 
>>> and work as team so they can share the tasks such as analyzing the 
>>> report, conducting some research, find previous work, proofreading 
>>> and so on. I will support you during the drafting if you need any 
>>> help during the whole process.
>>>
>>> You can find previous public comment submitted by NCSG here 
>>> https://community.icann.org/display/gnsononcomstake/Public+Comments+-+2018 and 
>>> listing those who drafted them. We submitted 3 responses to 3 public 
>>> comments last Friday and I want to thank all the drafters and 
>>> reviewers for the work done there in such short time to ensure that 
>>> NCSG gives input on those consultations.
>>>
>>> Best Regards,
>>>
>>> Rafik Dammak
>>>
>>> NCSG Policy Committee Chair
>>
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