[NCSG-PC] Review Comment on Draft ICANN Africa Strategic Plan 2016-2020 Version 3.0

Tue Sep 11 10:47:01 EEST 2018

Well done Rafik and thanks.

@__f_f__

Best Regards
____________________________________

(Ekue) Farell FOLLY
NCUC Rep. to the NCSG Policy Committee
linkedin.com/in/farellf 

> On 11 Sep 2018, at 01:08, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi all,
> 
> in absence of objection, I submitted the comment on Africa Strategy (draft attached).
> 
> Best,
> 
> Rafik
> 
> 
> Le lun. 10 sept. 2018 à 07:59, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> a écrit :
> Thanks for the review and support.
> there was a team of volunteers and Farell was the penholder and coordinator for the effort.
> 
> Best,
> 
> Rafik
> 
> Le lun. 10 sept. 2018 à 05:00, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com <mailto:icann at ferdeline.com>> a écrit :
> Hi all,
> 
> I’m sorry that I did not get around to reviewing this document sooner.
> 
> I have just reviewed the proposed comment, and I think it is great. My sincere thanks to the drafters for their time taken preparing it. I support its submission.
> 
> Best wishes,
> 
> Ayden Férdeline
> 
>> On 9 Sep 2018, at 05:34, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi all,
>> 
>> Reminder about  reviewing the public comment https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GGTNxgct2a01Z4lAKdt5m-pxx3Lyemc8lZ0sgAoA65E/edit <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GGTNxgct2a01Z4lAKdt5m-pxx3Lyemc8lZ0sgAoA65E/edit> 
>> 
>> Best,
>> 
>> Rafik 
>> 
>> ---------- Forwarded message ---------
>> From: Farell FOLLY <farell at benin2point0.org <mailto:farell at benin2point0.org>>
>> Date: Wed, Sep 5, 2018, 3:26 AM
>> Subject: Re: [NCSG-Discuss] [Public Comments] Call for Volunteers for Comment on Draft ICANN Africa Strategic Plan 2016-2020 Version 3.0
>> To: <NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu <mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu>>
>> 
>> 
>> As a reminder, the link to the PC is: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GGTNxgct2a01Z4lAKdt5m-pxx3Lyemc8lZ0sgAoA65E/edit <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GGTNxgct2a01Z4lAKdt5m-pxx3Lyemc8lZ0sgAoA65E/edit> 
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>> 
>>> On 4 Sep 2018, at 19:19, Farell FOLLY <farell at BENIN2POINT0.ORG <mailto:farell at BENIN2POINT0.ORG>> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Dear All,
>>> 
>>> Following this message from Rafik regarding the Public Comment on ICANN Strategy for Africa, many volunteers and I drafted our comment as NCSG. I, therefore, invite everybody to take a look and make some suggestions and or comments.
>>> 
>>> May people have already provided some inputs but I haven’t resolved any. I prefer to not alter them and let the list check first.
>>> 
>>> I would also like to remind us that the deadline is set on 10th of September, let’s say in one week.
>>> 
>>> Thanks for your usual cooperation.
>>> 
>>> @__f_f__
>>> 
>>> Best Regards
>>> ____________________________________
>>> 
>>> (Ekue) Farell FOLLY
>>> NCUC Rep. to the NCSG Policy Committee
>>> linkedin.com/in/farellf <http://linkedin.com/in/farellf> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>>> On 31 Jul 2018, at 02:23, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at GMAIL.COM <mailto:rafik.dammak at GMAIL.COM>> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> Hi all,
>>>> 
>>>> ICANN published a new public comment, this time on the ICANN Africa Strategic Plan 2016-2020.  Regional strategies started few year ago, in Prague meeting 2012 in ad-hoc way and the first strategy was for Africa.
>>>> 
>>>> This public comment is an opportunity for NCSG as stakeholder group to give input in the draft strategy and to see there is any area of concern or improvement. It is also an opportunity for our members from Africa to influence it and draft a comment. You can find more details about the background of this public comment and the report  here  . https://www.icann.org/public-comments/africa-strategic-plan-2018-07-30-en  <https://www.icann.org/public-comments/africa-strategic-plan-2018-07-30-en>
>>>> 
>>>> To kick-off the discussion I created this google doc to be used during the drafting by the volunteers to populate it: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GGTNxgct2a01Z4lAKdt5m-pxx3Lyemc8lZ0sgAoA65E/edit?usp=sharing <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GGTNxgct2a01Z4lAKdt5m-pxx3Lyemc8lZ0sgAoA65E/edit?usp=sharing>  
>>>> 
>>>> Please let me know offlist if you want to volunteer for the drafting. It is good to have several people to volunteer together and work as team so they can share the tasks such as analyzing the report, conducting some research, find previous work, proofreading and so on. I will support you during the drafting if you need any help during the whole process. 
>>>> 
>>>> You can find previous public comment submitted by NCSG here https://community.icann.org/display/gnsononcomstake/Public+Comments+-+2018 <https://community.icann.org/display/gnsononcomstake/Public+Comments+-+2018> and listing those who drafted them. We submitted 3 responses to 3 public comments last Friday and I want to thank all the drafters and reviewers for the work done there in such short time to ensure that NCSG gives input on those consultations.
>>>> 
>>>> Best Regards,
>>>> 
>>>> Rafik Dammak
>>>> 
>>>> NCSG Policy Committee Chair 
>>> 
>> 
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