[NCSG-PC] Fwd: [NCSG-Discuss] [Public Comments] Draft NCSG Comment on SSAC2 Review Draft Final Report

[Rafik Dammak]

Hi Ayden,

Thanks.
we didn't raise many concerns in the first comment. I will follow-up anyway
and see if there is any gap.

Best,

Rafii

Le mar. 20 nov. 2018 à 20:04, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> a
écrit :

> The new comment is very thin on content.
>
> Is that because the many concerns we previously raised have been addressed?
>
> Ayden
>
>
> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
> On Tuesday, 20 November 2018 12:02, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
> yes, it was Tomslin and Joanna who wrote the previous comment. of course,
> the drafter of the current comment is Tomslin too.
>
> Best,
>
> Rafik
> Le mar. 20 nov. 2018 à 19:57, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> a
> écrit :
>
>> I don't think Farell was the penholder for this comment; I think you
>> might be thinking about the CCT report? But maybe I am mistaken.
>>
>> Best wishes, Ayden
>>
>>
>> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
>> On Tuesday, 20 November 2018 11:02, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>>
>> yes, Farell who lead the drafting did and he was the penholder for the
>> previous reports.
>>
>> Best,
>>
>> Rafik
>>
>>
>> Le mar. 20 nov. 2018 à 18:59, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> a
>> écrit :
>>
>>> Has anyone reviewed our previous comment (on the previous draft report)
>>> to see whether the the report was subsequently revised to address the
>>> concerns we raised then?
>>>
>>> Many thanks, Ayden
>>>
>>>
>>> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
>>> On Tuesday, 20 November 2018 07:03, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>> Hi all,
>>>
>>> we have another draft comment to review. the deadline for submission is
>>> 3rd December
>>>
>>> Best,
>>>
>>> Rafik
>>>
>>> ---------- Forwarded message ---------
>>> From: *Tomslin Samme-Nlar* <mesumbeslin at gmail.com>
>>> Date: mar. 20 nov. 2018 à 14:38
>>> Subject: [NCSG-Discuss] [Public Comments] Draft NCSG Comment on SSAC2
>>> Review Draft Final Report
>>> To: <NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu>
>>>
>>>
>>> Hi all,
>>>
>>> As you may know, the comment period of the SSAC2 review Draft Final
>>> Report (
>>> https://www.icann.org/public-comments/ssac-review-final-2018-10-15-en)
>>> is coming to an end.  I have drafted a comment on the draft final report
>>> which can be found here:
>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fSi1SLEqk0QcWHmq-R1MBRWZJZ4MpsX2thXfI4sUjXA/edit
>>> ,  following our previous comment
>>> <https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/79429792/SSAC2%20review%20-%20NCSG%20comment.pdf?version=1&modificationDate=1539198745000&api=v2>
>>> on the Assessment Report.
>>> I would like to request your input, comments, edits and additions before
>>> the Policy committee runs with it.
>>>
>>> Cheers,
>>> Tomslin
>>> Fingerprint: 4D72 D735 DE42 D9FA 2453 8784 3C05 E338 5BBB 1D5C
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>
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