[NCSG-PC] publi comments review

[Ayden Férdeline]

I have proposed some suggested edits to the CSC comment; trimming it down to a single paragraph. I think we can keep this one short and simple. Thanks!

Ayden

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On 31 May 2018 9:50 AM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi all,
>
> this is a reminder for reviewing public comments draft, the deadline for CSC is 1st June
>
> Rafik
>
> Le lun. 28 mai 2018 à 07:40, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> a écrit :
>
>> Hi all,
>>
>> we have 2 drafts for public comments for review:
>> 1- CSC Review https://docs.google.com/document/d/18Q0SDh97XsN0m8etdGGhVby1c_vYT3omJTaeymLbfKk/edit
>> 2- RSSAC 2 review https://docs.google.com/document/d/13ZmkkZunvOv7ONkPINI3pPjhTj5CHjz1IB4fg1649fE/edit?usp=sharing
>> both were shared in NCSG list for membership consultation. the former's deadline is the 1st June which means we have to finalize within this week. it is straightforward comments as we are not raising any specific concern.
>> I am kindly asking the PC members to review and do any proof-reading of the drafts.
>> Best,
>>
>> Rafik
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