[NCSG-PC] First draft - Community Travel Support Guidelines

[Rafik Dammak]

Hi Ayden,

Thanks  again for the draft.
as there are several comments and edits, I think it should be tidy-up first
before as second round of review or comments.
after that, we can share it in NCSG list.

Best,

Rafik

Le mar. 12 juin 2018 à 02:33, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> a
écrit :

> I have made further edits to the draft comment now. Unfortunately I did
> not realise until half-way through that I was not in 'suggestion' mode, but
> all my substantive, non-grammatical edits are in suggestion mode. The
> comment is in good shape now, I think. Unless there are any concerns I
> think we could share this with the NCSG list?
>
> -Ayden
>
>
> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
> On 10 June 2018 3:32 PM, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> wrote:
>
> Thanks Kathy, great edits!
>
> Ayden
>
>
> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
> On 10 June 2018 3:23 PM, Kathy Kleiman <kathy at kathykleiman.com> wrote:
>
> My edits now added. Kudos to all leading this for working so far ahead!
>
> On 6/9/2018 6:32 PM, Ayden Férdeline wrote:
>
> I've added some text to our comment on the proposed Community Travel
> Support Guidelines:
>
>
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FEWgze1lVbMlB5if0EnfZE2BxGreHoQ6SKaj6ya7sZY/edit?usp=sharing
>
> The deadline for submission of this comment is still six weeks away, but
> please can you review this rough draft and add your comments/edits so that
> we can share this with members soon (this week ideally).
>
> Best wishes, Ayden
>
>
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