[NCSG-PC] First draft - Community Travel Support Guidelines

[Ayden Férdeline]

I have made further edits to the draft comment now. Unfortunately I did not realise until half-way through that I was not in 'suggestion' mode, but all my substantive, non-grammatical edits are in suggestion mode. The comment is in good shape now, I think. Unless there are any concerns I think we could share this with the NCSG list?

-Ayden

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On 10 June 2018 3:32 PM, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> wrote:

> Thanks Kathy, great edits!
>
> Ayden
>
> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
> On 10 June 2018 3:23 PM, Kathy Kleiman <kathy at kathykleiman.com> wrote:
>
>> My edits now added. Kudos to all leading this for working so far ahead!
>>
>> On 6/9/2018 6:32 PM, Ayden Férdeline wrote:
>>
>>> I've added some text to our comment on the proposed Community Travel Support Guidelines:
>>>
>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FEWgze1lVbMlB5if0EnfZE2BxGreHoQ6SKaj6ya7sZY/edit?usp=sharing
>>>
>>> The deadline for submission of this comment is still six weeks away, but please can you review this rough draft and add your comments/edits so that we can share this with members soon (this week ideally).
>>>
>>> Best wishes, Ayden
>>>
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