[NCSG-PC] First draft - Community Travel Support Guidelines

[Rafik Dammak]

Hi Ayden,

I suggested 24hours last time and that is passed already. The comment can
be shared , PC members can still review and comment.

Best,

Rafik

On Sat, Jun 30, 2018, 8:22 AM Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> wrote:

> Hi all,
>
> Just a reminder, we have two weeks until this public comment window
> closes. We need to share this with members soon for their input as well.
> Please can you review the comment and advise when it can be shared on the
> NCSG list. Thanks!
>
>
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FEWgze1lVbMlB5if0EnfZE2BxGreHoQ6SKaj6ya7sZY/edit?usp=sharing
>
> Best,
>
> Ayden
>
>
> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
> On 18 June 2018 4:30 PM, Dr. Tatiana Tropina <t.tropina at mpicc.de> wrote:
>
> Thanks Rafik and Ayden,
>
> I will go through the document in the next 23 hours (that's what left from
> suggested 24h) :-) I might propose some edits, I see that the document is,
> indeed, different from what is used to be a week ago, but may be some
> surgery is still required (not a major one, but I would love to soften the
> language a wee bit bit in parts - Ayden hope you forgive me! :))
>
> Okay, the clocks start ticking for me - 23 hours.
>
> Cheers,
>
> Tanya
>
> On 18/06/18 16:04, Ayden Férdeline wrote:
>
> Thanks, Rafik; please note that I have reviewed and edited the Google Doc
> in order to resolve many of the comments that had been left already. So it
> might not be the same version that you reviewed a week or two ago. So
> please take a look when you can; I would like to get this out to NCSG
> members for their input sooner rather than later.
>
> Best wishes, Ayden
>
>
> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
> On 18 June 2018 4:01 PM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>
> <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:
>
> Hi Ayden,
>
> I would like to defer sharing this for 24 hours, I think there were
> several edits and we can review again. after that 24 horus passed, we can
> share the draft to NCSF list.
>
> Best,
>
> Rafik
>
> Le lun. 18 juin 2018 à 22:56, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> a
> écrit :
>
>> Hi
>>
>> Are there any objections to sharing this on the NCSG-Discuss list? I
>> presume not as it is just a draft, and not final, but if we share it today
>> we can give members four weeks to look over it and potentially comment,
>> before the PC needs to review the final version.
>>
>> Thanks, Ayden
>>
>>
>> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
>> On 12 June 2018 2:55 AM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>> Hi Ayden,
>>
>> Thanks  again for the draft.
>> as there are several comments and edits, I think it should be tidy-up
>> first before as second round of review or comments.
>> after that, we can share it in NCSG list.
>>
>> Best,
>>
>> Rafik
>>
>> Le mar. 12 juin 2018 à 02:33, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> a
>> écrit :
>>
>>> I have made further edits to the draft comment now. Unfortunately I did
>>> not realise until half-way through that I was not in 'suggestion' mode, but
>>> all my substantive, non-grammatical edits are in suggestion mode. The
>>> comment is in good shape now, I think. Unless there are any concerns I
>>> think we could share this with the NCSG list?
>>>
>>> -Ayden
>>>
>>>
>>> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
>>> On 10 June 2018 3:32 PM, Ayden Férdeline <icann at ferdeline.com> wrote:
>>>
>>> Thanks Kathy, great edits!
>>>
>>> Ayden
>>>
>>>
>>> ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐
>>> On 10 June 2018 3:23 PM, Kathy Kleiman <kathy at kathykleiman.com> wrote:
>>>
>>> My edits now added. Kudos to all leading this for working so far ahead!
>>>
>>> On 6/9/2018 6:32 PM, Ayden Férdeline wrote:
>>>
>>> I've added some text to our comment on the proposed Community Travel
>>> Support Guidelines:
>>>
>>>
>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FEWgze1lVbMlB5if0EnfZE2BxGreHoQ6SKaj6ya7sZY/edit?usp=sharing
>>>
>>> The deadline for submission of this comment is still six weeks away, but
>>> please can you review this rough draft and add your comments/edits so that
>>> we can share this with members soon (this week ideally).
>>>
>>> Best wishes, Ayden
>>>
>>>
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