[NCSG-PC] WS2 Transparency - comments from NCSG

[Matthew Shears]

Hi all

We are late with this submission but it is important that it be submitted.

I have accepted most of the suggested additions/changes and cleaned up 
this text.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xLCMDHoAqdo6pShdTEThHPDvsNYXpTkv1eaHFDMMwBI/edit?usp=sharing

Please review carefully.   Michael - would appreciate your read through 
as well.

I would like to submit this at the latest on Friday so please review and 
make final comments/edits by 23:59 UTC Thursday 20 April.

Please indicate your support for the comments to the PC list or in the doc.

Thanks!

Matthew


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