[PC-NCSG] PC deliberation: NCSG statement on Geographic Regions - 22/03

[Marilia Maciel]

Thanks Bill. Very good suggestions. I will include them and since the
deadline has passed without objections, i will prepare the document and
send it as ncsg contribution.
Thank you all
Marilia
Em 24/04/2016 04:19, "William Drake" <wjdrake at gmail.com> escreveu:

Hi

Thanks Marilia, good changes. I think anachronic geo-political ?structures?
or ?arrangements?  would be clearer than ?realities? but as you like. And
the 'supports further discussion? is better than 'support a radical
overhaul? that we?ve not explained.

One small thought over morning coffee: we often in these things use terms
like NCSG ?opposes? and ?rejects? xyz, which to some sets of eyes might
seem a piece with cherished distorted images that new evidence is only
slowly altering. It might seem a little less hot to say ?supports? / ?does
not support??

Best

Bill

On Apr 23, 2016, at 17:08, Marilia Maciel <mariliamaciel at gmail.com> wrote:

Hello everyone,

@Matt, I incorporated most of your suggestions. Can you take a look at the
document with the track changes and see if it you agree? @Bill, the "empire
thinking" part has been changed. Matt's suggestions also pointed out the
same thing.

Best!
Mar?lia

On Tue, Apr 19, 2016 at 8:45 AM, Matthew Shears <mshears at cdt.org> wrote:

> Hi all - have made some comments in the doc.  I think it is a good piece -
> I am just quibbling with a couple of points.
>
> Matthew
>
> On 4/17/2016 3:39 AM, Marilia Maciel wrote:
>
> Hello everyone,
>
> Here is the link to the (proposed) statement on modifications to ICANN?s
> geographic regions framework for PC review and deliberation:
> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uPklUc8RCJhzoOmYEc7L6RAmudundJkyW5101uAVPlA/edit?usp=sharing>
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uPklUc8RCJhzoOmYEc7L6RAmudundJkyW5101uAVPlA/edit?usp=sharing
>
>
> The PC should discuss this draft, propose any amendments if necessary, and
> consider making it an NCSG contribution to the public comment period *until
> 22/03 11:59 UTC*.
>
> You can read the final report of the Working Group here:
> https://www.icann.org/public-comments/geo-regions-2015-12-23-en
>
> All the best wishes,
> Mar?lia
>
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Pesquisadora Gestora - Centro de Tecnologia e Sociedade - FGV Direito Rio
Researcher and Coordinator - Center for Technology & Society - FGV Law
School
http://direitorio.fgv.br/cts
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