[PC-NCSG] .Travel public comment

[David Cake]

Looks great to me. A strong statement of the problem as done here is just what is needed.

Cheers

David

> On 21 Jun 2015, at 5:49 pm, Robin Gross <robin at ipjustice.org> wrote:
> 
> Excellent work, Ed and Stephanie!   Thank you so much for pulling this together in time for submission.
> 
> Best,
> Robin
> 
> On Jun 21, 2015, at 1:41 PM, Edward Morris wrote:
> 
>> Thanks Stephanie!
>> 
>> More input welcome...
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> 
>> Ed
>> 
>> Sent from my iPhone
>> 
>>> On Jun 21, 2015, at 4:58 PM, Stephanie Perrin <stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca> wrote:
>>> 
>>> I have made a few editorial revisions...I am taking on board the idea that this should be a strong condemnation of staff free-wheeling, but it is pretty direct.   I like it though, and thanks for whipping it up so quickly...one more thing, the title should have something in there about what it is, too vague right now....
>>> attached in markup
>>> Steph
>>>> On 2015-06-21 16:45, Edward Morris wrote:
>>>> HI all,
>>>> 
>>>> Attached find a rather rushed public comment proposed for NCSG to submit on .travel. Please take a look, correct, make better etc. If we're going to get something in we need to approve it at tonight's meeting and submit before 8 p.m. Argentina time tonight.
>>>> 
>>>> Thanks,
>>>> 
>>>> Ed
>>> 
>>> <draft .travel pcsp.docx>
>> 
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