[PC-NCSG] .Travel public comment

[Edward Morris]

Thanks Stephanie!

More input welcome...

Thanks,

Ed

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> On Jun 21, 2015, at 4:58 PM, Stephanie Perrin <stephanie.perrin at mail.utoronto.ca> wrote:
> 
> I have made a few editorial revisions...I am taking on board the idea that this should be a strong condemnation of staff free-wheeling, but it is pretty direct.   I like it though, and thanks for whipping it up so quickly...one more thing, the title should have something in there about what it is, too vague right now....
> attached in markup
> Steph
>> On 2015-06-21 16:45, Edward Morris wrote:
>> HI all,
>> 
>> Attached find a rather rushed public comment proposed for NCSG to submit on .travel. Please take a look, correct, make better etc. If we're going to get something in we need to approve it at tonight's meeting and submit before 8 p.m. Argentina time tonight.
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> 
>> Ed
> 
> <draft .travel pcsp.docx>