[PC-NCSG] .Travel public comment

[Stephanie Perrin]

I have made a few editorial revisions...I am taking on board the idea 
that this should be a strong condemnation of staff free-wheeling, but it 
is pretty direct.   I like it though, and thanks for whipping it up so 
quickly...one more thing, the title should have something in there about 
what it is, too vague right now....
attached in markup
Steph
On 2015-06-21 16:45, Edward Morris wrote:
> HI all,
>
> Attached find a rather rushed public comment proposed for NCSG to 
> submit on .travel. Please take a look, correct, make better etc. If 
> we're going to get something in we need to approve it at tonight's 
> meeting and submit before 8 p.m. Argentina time tonight.
>
> Thanks,
>
> Ed

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