[PC-NCSG] Draft comments to the AoC/Organisational review schedule public comment

Amr Elsadr aelsadr
Mon Jul 6 15:44:09 EEST 2015


I think so too.

Thanks.

Amr

On Jul 5, 2015, at 11:23 PM, Avri Doria <avri at acm.org> wrote:

> good idea
> 
> avri
> 
> On 05-Jul-15 17:20, Rafik Dammak wrote:
>> Hi everyone,
>> 
>> while we got the extension to 8th july, I assume there was no changes
>> in the latest version. I will submit the comment today to close this task.
>> 
>> Best,
>> 
>> Rafik
>> 
>> 
>> 2015-07-03 6:37 GMT+09:00 Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com
>> <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>>:
>> 
>>    Hi,
>>    It sounds that the public comment period was extended to 8th july
>>    https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-2015-07-02-en
>> 
>>    Rafik
>> 
>>    On Jul 3, 2015 3:36 AM, "Avri Doria" <avri at acm.org
>>    <mailto:avri at acm.org>> wrote:
>> 
>>        Hi,
>> 
>>        I just made some changes to that papra.
>> 
>>        hope it makes sense now.
>> 
>>        avri
>> 
>> 
>>        On 02-Jul-15 10:12, Stephanie Perrin wrote:
>>> I put some comments/edits in the document, there is one para
>>        that
>>> several of us have queried that is still awkward (I cannot
>>        figure out
>>> quite what we are trying to say) so would suggest the author
>>        take
>>> another look at it to try to simplify it....review on review
>>        after
>>> review etc.
>>> Thanks for the opportunity and kudos to the authors,
>>        especially James
>>> for initiating!  So much to do at the moment.....
>>> Stephanie
>>> 
>>> On 2015-07-02 8:20, Amr Elsadr wrote:
>>>> Thanks Ed. That?s really helpful. I can?t argue with any of
>>        your
>>>> rationale, especially regarding the organisational reviews.
>>        I would
>>>> personally probably also endorse a statement pointing out
>>        your views.
>>>> The only issues I have a strong opinion on here are
>>        probably the ATRT
>>>> and WHOIS review.
>>>> 
>>>> I very much take Avri?s point to heart. If initiation of
>>        ATRTs are
>>>> delayed because there are too many moving parts in ICANN,
>>        they?ll
>>>> never get done.
>>>> 
>>>> Thanks again.
>>>> 
>>>> Amr
>>>> 
>>>> On Jul 2, 2015, at 1:48 PM, Edward Morris
>>        <egmorris1 at toast.net <mailto:egmorris1 at toast.net>> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>>> Hi Amr.
>>>>> 
>>>>> I've modified my views a bit after thinking a bit about
>>        the impact
>>>>> of the accountability reforms on the SOAC's. All of these
>>        groups
>>>>> could be very different creatures depending upon the form
>>>>> accountability will take. Will they become legal persons?
>>        If so,
>>>>> charters will need to be redone and, in some cases,
>>        created. Will
>>>>> there be accountability requirements imposed upon the
>>        groups? If so,
>>>>> we may be reviewing an organization much different than
>>        what it is
>>>>> to become. I'm not sure how valuable a review would be in
>>        that case.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Initially I was going to suggest a postponement of the
>>        ATRT reviews
>>>>> as well, but a post by Avri where she wrote that something was
>>>>> always going on in ICANN-land (my words, not hers) and
>>        stressed the
>>>>> importance of the Accountability reviews caused me to
>>        reconsider.
>>>>> 
>>>>> If we are going ahead with the org reviews I do think at large
>>>>> should go first because it arguably has the most to reform
>>        and is
>>>>> larger than the other two.
>>>>> 
>>>>> I'm happy to support a statement with views different than
>>        my own
>>>>> because there are a number of reasonable positions on this
>>        matter.
>>>>> There is a lot more in the proposed submission that I
>>        agree with
>>>>> than not - my own views were submitted in a personal
>>        comment so will
>>>>> be represented in the staff report - so do support
>>        submission in
>>>>> whatever way you deem appropriate.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Ed
>>>>> 
>>>>> Sent from my iPhone
>>>>> 
>>>>>> On Jul 2, 2015, at 12:44 PM, Amr Elsadr
>>        <aelsadr at egyptig.org <mailto:aelsadr at egyptig.org>> wrote:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Thanks Ed. Appreciate the support despite some difference
>>        in views?
>>>>>> Can I ask why you believe org reviews should be halted? I
>>        thought
>>>>>> you wanted (at least) for the At-Large review to not be
>>        delayed?
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Thanks again.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Amr
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> On Jul 1, 2015, at 7:45 PM, Edward Morris
>>        <egmorris1 at toast.net <mailto:egmorris1 at toast.net>>
>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> My views are a bit different than those in the document:
>>        basically
>>>>>>> halt organizational reviews until the ACCT bylaws
>>        changes are done
>>>>>>> but proceed with the ATRT reviews, albeit possibly on a more
>>>>>>> relaxed schedule. If the organizational reviews are to
>>        go forward
>>>>>>> I would prioritize the at large review given the relative
>>>>>>> importance of the group to proposed reforms.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> That said, I have no strong objection to the document as
>>        is and
>>>>>>> there is a lot of good stuff in it. Happy for it to go
>>        forward if
>>>>>>> others support it.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Ed
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Sent from my iPhone
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> On Jul 1, 2015, at 9:05 AM, Amr Elsadr
>>        <aelsadr at egyptig.org <mailto:aelsadr at egyptig.org>> wrote:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Hi,
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Thanks for the reminder, Rafik. Now would be a good
>>        time to start
>>>>>>>> getting comments/endorsements for this. We will need to
>>        submit it
>>>>>>>> before July 2nd, UTC 23:59.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> I am generally supportive of the document, but have some
>>>>>>>> concerns. The main one is recommending another WHOIS
>>        review at
>>>>>>>> this time when the post-EWG PDP will be starting. It
>>        doesn?t make
>>>>>>>> much sense to me to perform a WHOIS review when the
>>        WHOIS may
>>>>>>>> change significantly. Also not sure how many volunteers
>>        would
>>>>>>>> want to focus on working with a WHOIS review team while the
>>>>>>>> post-EWG PDP is going on.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Thanks.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Amr
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> On Jul 1, 2015, at 1:59 PM, Rafik Dammak
>>>>>>>>> <rafik.dammak at gmail.com
>>        <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> wrote:
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Hi,
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> this is a reminder about the comment to be submitted
>>        by NCSG.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Best,
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Rafik
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> 2015-06-29 13:43 GMT+09:00 Rafik Dammak
>>        <rafik.dammak at gmail.com <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>>:
>>>>>>>>> Hi everyone,
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> we got this comment initiated by James
>>>>>>>>> 
>>        https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LLCWNYombphjN5Pxob4IVEXNMjyuNim8YPUNCQVdx3g/edit?usp=sharing
>>>>>>>>> and which received some edits. please review it so
>>        NCSG PC can
>>>>>>>>> endorse it . the deadline is 2nd July 23:59.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> so please review, comments and help with edits.
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Best,
>>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>>> Rafik
>>>>>>>>> 
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