[PC-NCSG] [NCSG-Discuss] Draft NCSG response to “Enhancing ICANN’s Accountability”-process.

Maria Farrell maria.farrell
Tue May 27 14:56:06 EEST 2014


Hi all,

Are Niels and Gabrielle happy with the current draft of the document at
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit?

As Rafik has pointed out, we have another couple of days to finalise. So
I'd just like to check if the interested people are still working on the
draft / or satisfied with it?

All the best, Maria



On 26 May 2014 06:34, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi Marilia,
>
> thanks for the review and commenting. the deadline to submit was Tuesday
> 23:59 UTC but checking the announcement, we get 3 additional days because
> the technical issuers with migration to new website (
> https://www.icann.org/public-comments/enhancing-accountability-2014-05-06-en
> ).
>
> Policy Committee should endorse asap. I think that Maria will handle the
> last call as PC chair. then having the green light I will submit before the
> deadline.
>
> there will be reply period after this and I think we can expand with
> another comment about missing parts or clarifying others, in addition to
> commenting the contributions of other groups.
>
> Niels and Gabrielle are working on resolving remaining questions in the
> document.
>
> Best Regards,
>
> Rafik
>
>
> 2014-05-26 8:03 GMT+09:00 Marilia Maciel <mariliamaciel at gmail.com>:
>
> Thanks, Rafik. Made a few comments, mostly on top of others.
>> Good contribution. Thanks to folks of Article 19 and others who worked on
>> it.
>> Best,
>> Mar?lia
>>
>>
>> On Fri, May 23, 2014 at 2:42 AM, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com>wrote:
>>
>>> Hi Avri,
>>>
>>> Niels and Gabrielle will answers comments soon. and yes we should
>>> lockdown on language soon. hope that next comments would propose some
>>> wording.
>>> I think we will be more efficient than ITU.. hopefully :)
>>>
>>> Best Regards,
>>>
>>> Rafik
>>>
>>> 2014-05-23 1:55 GMT+09:00 Avri Doria <avri at acm.org>:
>>>
>>> hi,
>>>>
>>>> had already indicated it in comments.  have now added words to Rafik's
>>>> added words.
>>>>
>>>> added some other weasel words too in response to some of Milton's
>>>> concerns.
>>>>
>>>> when do we get  a lock down on the language and a removal of brackets.
>>>>
>>>> [we have become so ITU.]
>>>>
>>>> avri
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On 22-May-14 10:47, Maria Farrell wrote:
>>>> > Hi guys,
>>>> >
>>>> > No final call has yet been made. Avri, would you mind marking up the
>>>> > text with your suggestions and re-circulating?
>>>> >
>>>> > Many thanks, Maria
>>>> >
>>>> >
>>>> > On 22 May 2014 13:22, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com
>>>> > <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> wrote:
>>>> >
>>>> >     Hi Rudi,
>>>> >
>>>> >     no, Niels shared the document two days ago and we are getting
>>>> >     comments now.
>>>> >
>>>> >     Rafik
>>>> >
>>>> >
>>>> >     2014-05-22 17:08 GMT+09:00 Rudi Vansnick <rudi.vansnick at isoc.be
>>>> >     <mailto:rudi.vansnick at isoc.be>>:
>>>> >
>>>> >         If I?m not wrong we agreed on the content of the proposed
>>>> >         document (googledoc) a week ago.
>>>> >
>>>> >         Maria, can you proceed ?
>>>> >
>>>> >         Kind regards,
>>>> >
>>>> >         Rudi Vansnick
>>>> >         NPOC chair Policy Committee
>>>> >         NPOC treasurer
>>>> >         rudi.vansnick at npoc.org <mailto:rudi.vansnick at npoc.org>
>>>> >         Tel : +32 (0)9 329 39 16<tel:%2B32%20%280%299%20329%2039%2016>
>>>> >         Mobile : +32 (0)475 28 16 32<tel:%2B32%20%280%29475%2028%2016%2032>
>>>> >         www.npoc.org <http://www.npoc.org>
>>>> >
>>>> >         Op 20-mei-2014, om 13:06 heeft Rafik Dammak
>>>> >         <rafik.dammak at gmail.com <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> het
>>>> >         volgende geschreven:
>>>> >
>>>> >>         Hi everyone,
>>>> >>
>>>> >>         We have this draft commenting ICANN accountability. The
>>>> >>         comment deadline is 27th may.
>>>> >>         I count on PC to act quickly.
>>>> >>
>>>> >>         Best Regards,
>>>> >>
>>>> >>         Rafik
>>>> >>
>>>> >>         ---------- Forwarded message ----------
>>>> >>         From: "Niels ten Oever" <lists at digitaldissidents.org
>>>> >>         <mailto:lists at digitaldissidents.org>>
>>>> >>         Date: May 20, 2014 7:58 PM
>>>> >>         Subject: [NCSG-Discuss] Draft NCSG response to ?Enhancing
>>>> >>         ICANN?s Accountability?-process.
>>>> >>         To: <NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu
>>>> >>         <mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu>>
>>>> >>         Cc:
>>>> >>
>>>> >>         Dear all,
>>>> >>
>>>> >>         Gabrielle and I, with the great comments from Brenden and
>>>> >>         Avri, have
>>>> >>         drafted a potential NCSG response to the ?Enhancing ICANN?s
>>>> >>         Accountability?-process. You can find it and comment here:
>>>> >>
>>>> >>
>>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit?usp=sharing
>>>> >>
>>>> >>         The deadline is Tuesday next week, so it would be great if
>>>> you
>>>> >>         could
>>>> >>         share your comments before Monday the 26th.
>>>> >>
>>>> >>         Best,
>>>> >>
>>>> >>         Niels
>>>> >>
>>>> >>
>>>> >>         Niels ten Oever
>>>> >>         Acting Head of Digital
>>>> >>
>>>> >>         Article 19
>>>> >>         www.article19.org <http://www.article19.org/>
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