[PC-NCSG] [NCSG-Discuss] Draft NCSG response to “Enhancing ICANN’s Accountability”-process.

[Avri Doria]

hi,

had already indicated it in comments.  have now added words to Rafik's
added words.

added some other weasel words too in response to some of Milton's concerns.

when do we get  a lock down on the language and a removal of brackets.

[we have become so ITU.]

avri


On 22-May-14 10:47, Maria Farrell wrote:
> Hi guys,
> 
> No final call has yet been made. Avri, would you mind marking up the
> text with your suggestions and re-circulating?
> 
> Many thanks, Maria
> 
> 
> On 22 May 2014 13:22, Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak at gmail.com
> <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> wrote:
> 
>     Hi Rudi,
> 
>     no, Niels shared the document two days ago and we are getting
>     comments now.
> 
>     Rafik 
> 
> 
>     2014-05-22 17:08 GMT+09:00 Rudi Vansnick <rudi.vansnick at isoc.be
>     <mailto:rudi.vansnick at isoc.be>>:
> 
>         If I?m not wrong we agreed on the content of the proposed
>         document (googledoc) a week ago. 
> 
>         Maria, can you proceed ?
> 
>         Kind regards,
> 
>         Rudi Vansnick
>         NPOC chair Policy Committee
>         NPOC treasurer
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>         Op 20-mei-2014, om 13:06 heeft Rafik Dammak
>         <rafik.dammak at gmail.com <mailto:rafik.dammak at gmail.com>> het
>         volgende geschreven:
> 
>>         Hi everyone,
>>
>>         We have this draft commenting ICANN accountability. The
>>         comment deadline is 27th may.
>>         I count on PC to act quickly.
>>
>>         Best Regards,
>>
>>         Rafik
>>
>>         ---------- Forwarded message ----------
>>         From: "Niels ten Oever" <lists at digitaldissidents.org
>>         <mailto:lists at digitaldissidents.org>>
>>         Date: May 20, 2014 7:58 PM
>>         Subject: [NCSG-Discuss] Draft NCSG response to ?Enhancing
>>         ICANN?s Accountability?-process.
>>         To: <NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu
>>         <mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS at listserv.syr.edu>>
>>         Cc:
>>
>>         Dear all,
>>
>>         Gabrielle and I, with the great comments from Brenden and
>>         Avri, have
>>         drafted a potential NCSG response to the ?Enhancing ICANN?s
>>         Accountability?-process. You can find it and comment here:
>>
>>         https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz9-BCYY8sMWgACs1OWxDypfQH_DXlzaqlCw-OqlAiY/edit?usp=sharing
>>
>>         The deadline is Tuesday next week, so it would be great if you
>>         could
>>         share your comments before Monday the 26th.
>>
>>         Best,
>>
>>         Niels
>>
>>
>>         Niels ten Oever
>>         Acting Head of Digital
>>
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