NCSG Comment on ICANN's Whois Privacy & Proxy Abuse Study

[Amr Elsadr]

Thanks for looking over it, Milton. I initially didn’t open editing rights to keep track of changes, but have changed that so that anyone can edit it now. I will insert some responses to your comments, and if you have the time to look over them and give more feedback, I’d really appreciate it.

Thanks again.

Amr

On Nov 12, 2013, at 10:32 PM, Milton L Mueller <mueller at SYR.EDU> wrote:

> Amr:
> 
> I have looked over the comments and would make some suggestions. I would edit it directly but I am not authorized on this doc so I have inserted some comments
> 
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> Subject: Re: [NCSG-Discuss] NCSG Comment on ICANN's Whois Privacy & Proxy Abuse Study
> 
> Thanks McTim,
> 
> I’ve replaced “more study of Whois privacy and proxy abuse should be conducted” with “more Whois privacy and proxy abuse research should be conducted” in the last paragraph. I hope that’s what you were referring to.
> 
> Thanks again.
> 
> Amr
> 
> On Nov 11, 2013, at 1:27 PM, McTim <dogwallah at GMAIL.COM> wrote:
> 
>> Hi,
>> 
>> On Fri, Nov 8, 2013 at 8:05 AM, Amr Elsadr <aelsadr at egyptig.org> wrote:
>>> Hi,
>>> 
>>> I’ve taken a stab at drafting a comment on the ICANN Whois Privacy & Proxy
>>> Abuse Study. The public comment period is over, but we have until November
>>> 13th to submit a statement during the reply period. At this point, I would
>>> like to know if members of the NCSG as well as the policy committee are
>>> willing to endorse this statement, and whether or not there are any
>>> suggested changes anyone feels need to be made.
>>> 
>>> I’ve drafted the statement on a Google doc, which you can find here:
>>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RS5Ze_0TU4ymdq0N8tROKrr2Vg-SpBp5ZEXTLUr7j84/edit?usp=sharing
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> Instead of "Whois privacy and proxy service abuse should be conducted"
>> 
>> I think you need to add the word "research" so it becomes:
>> 
>> "Whois privacy and proxy service abuse research should be conducted"
>> 
>> 
>> Then it is fine by me.
>> 
>> --
>> Cheers,
>> 
>> McTim
>> "A name indicates what we seek. An address indicates where it is. A
>> route indicates how we get there."  Jon Postel