<div dir="ltr"><div>Greetings friends.</div><div><br></div><div>Letting you know that Benjamin (now added) has also offered to help with this. Also be mindful that there are only 10 days left now to the deadline and the NCSG community/PC is required to review the comment before it is submitted. So, forgive me if it sounds like I am pushing but can we have something soon for review?<br></div><div><div><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div><br></div><div>Warmly,<br></div>Tomslin<div><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:12.8px"></span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:12.8px">@LinkedIn: <a href="https://www.linkedin.com/in/tomslin/" target="_blank">https://www.linkedin.com/in/tomslin/</a><br></span></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div><br></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Sun, 30 Oct 2022 at 07:52, Tomslin Samme-Nlar <<a href="mailto:mesumbeslin@gmail.com">mesumbeslin@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div>Hi everyone,</div><div><br></div><div>I suppose you know that the deadline for submission of this comment was extended to 21 November? When do you think you'll have something ready to share for review? Let's try to give ample time for that process.<br></div><div><div><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div><br></div><div>Warmly,<br></div>Tomslin<div><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:12.8px"></span></div><div><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:12.8px">@LinkedIn: <a href="https://www.linkedin.com/in/tomslin/" target="_blank">https://www.linkedin.com/in/tomslin/</a><br></span></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div><br></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Mon, 17 Oct 2022 at 18:55, Bolutife Adisa <<a href="mailto:adisabolutifeo@gmail.com" target="_blank">adisabolutifeo@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div dir="auto">Hi Juan,<div><br></div><div>Thanks for taking the lead on this. </div><div><br></div><div>Kindly grant access to the Google doc so that we can drop our comments on there. </div><div><br></div><div>Best,</div><div>Bolutife. </div><div><div dir="ltr"><br></div><div dir="ltr"><br><blockquote type="cite">On 8. Oct 2022, at 00:56, Juan Manuel Rojas <<a href="mailto:jumaropi@yahoo.com" target="_blank">jumaropi@yahoo.com</a>> wrote:<br><br></blockquote></div><blockquote type="cite"><div dir="ltr">
<p>Hi Tomslin, and all, <br>
</p>
<p>I'm sorry I have totally forgotten this topic. I think the
important thing is to start read the document opened to comments
and start from there. I also was part of a team what drafted one
comment on this related topic, here is the link:
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1g4VtzmTe9qTSC8h8RPuT4HMb0c83odIN75wBdDA2VVg/edit" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1g4VtzmTe9qTSC8h8RPuT4HMb0c83odIN75wBdDA2VVg/edit</a>
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<p>I think I could be the penholder on this topic. I have created
this document to start our draft, it is relevant to check the past
comments from NCSG and review whether or not our concerns still
are there and then start to write our comment from Non-Commercial
Stakeholder Group concerns. <br>
</p>
<p><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/13cZ0Nk5jO5H8ruQYaQlhb_ZovsfiuNOaAxJ5ccXTLvg/edit" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/13cZ0Nk5jO5H8ruQYaQlhb_ZovsfiuNOaAxJ5ccXTLvg/edit</a></p>
<p>I think one more week is fair to check the info what you sent and
I hope we could start write on next Friday to be able to share
with the rest of the community for review before to send it.</p>
<p>You can write your comments or thoughts (or questions) related on
the same doc what I created to moving us forward. <br>
</p>
<p>Best Regards,<br>
Juan Manuel<br>
</p>
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<div>Just checking how you're going and when you think the draft
comment can be shared with the rest of the community for
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Tomslin
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<div><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:12.8px">@LinkedIn:
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Bolutife Adisa <<a href="mailto:adisabolutifeo@gmail.com" target="_blank">adisabolutifeo@gmail.com</a>>
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<div>These shared links are beneficial, I believe we can
take it from there.</div>
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<div>Cheers!</div>
<div>Bolutife.</div>
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10:20 PM Tomslin Samme-Nlar <<a href="mailto:mesumbeslin@gmail.com" target="_blank">mesumbeslin@gmail.com</a>>
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<div>Hi all,</div>
<div>Thanks for volunteering for this. As requested by
Bolutife, the comment is due for consideration on
Thursday 20 October 2022.</div>
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<div>Some history: NCSG has had related comments to this
policy in the past as seen below. They might help in
the drafting of this one.</div>
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<div>Our comment to
<a href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/epdp-phase-2a-initial-report-2021-06-03-en" rel="nofollow" target="_blank">Initial Report of the
Expedited Policy Development Process (EPDP) on the
Temporary Specification for gTLD Registration Data
Team – PHASE 2A</a> last year drafted by Stephanie
and Manju is here - <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pWA92_Lt_91J3xwqQIiWUuNz37NkxohSc284z8MkqYw/edit" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pWA92_Lt_91J3xwqQIiWUuNz37NkxohSc284z8MkqYw/edit</a></div>
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<div>Our comment on <a href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/epdp-2-policy-recs-board-2021-02-08-en" rel="nofollow" target="_blank">EPDP Phase 2 Policy
Recommendations for Board Consideration</a> drafted
by Stephanie is here - <a href="https://drive.google.com/file/d/1PtjHTSLFKXUwShxQkJqy9aic4aYNLpjE/view?usp=sharing" target="_blank">https://drive.google.com/file/d/1PtjHTSLFKXUwShxQkJqy9aic4aYNLpjE/view?usp=sharing</a></div>
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<div>Our comment on <a href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/policy-recommendations-epdp-phase-2-2020-12-03-en" rel="nofollow" target="_blank">Priority 2 Policy
Recommendations for ICANN Board Consideration from
EPDP Phase 2</a> drafted by Milton is here - <a href="https://mm.icann.org/pipermail/comments-policy-recommendations-epdp-phase-2-03dec20/2021q1/000008.html" target="_blank">https://mm.icann.org/pipermail/comments-policy-recommendations-epdp-phase-2-03dec20/2021q1/000008.html</a></div>
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<div>Our comment on Phase 1 <a href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/epdp-recs-2019-03-04-en" rel="nofollow" target="_blank">GNSO Expedited Policy
Development Process (EPDP) on the Temporary
Specification for gTLD Registration Data Policy
Recommendations for ICANN Board Consideration</a>
drafted by <span><span><span><span style="color:rgb(32,33,36)">Louise Marie Hurel</span></span></span></span>
is here - <a href="https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/102141506/GNSO%20Expedited%20Policy%20Development%20Process%20%28EPDP%29%20on%20the%20Temporary%20Specification%20for%20gTLD%20Registration%20Data%20Policy%20Recommendations%20for%20ICANN%20Board%20Consideration%20-%20NCSG%20Comment.pdf?version=1&modificationDate=1556628246000&api=v2" target="_blank">https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/102141506/GNSO%20Expedited%20Policy%20Development%20Process%20%28EPDP%29%20on%20the%20Temporary%20Specification%20for%20gTLD%20Registration%20Data%20Policy%20Recommendations%20for%20ICANN%20Board%20Consideration%20-%20NCSG%20Comment.pdf?version=1&modificationDate=1556628246000&api=v2</a></div>
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<div>Our comment on <a href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/epdp-gtld-registration-data-specs-initial-2018-11-21-en" rel="nofollow" target="_blank">Initial Report of the
Expedited Policy Development Process (EPDP) on the
Temporary Specification for gTLD Registration Data
Team</a> drafted by Milton is here <a href="https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/79429792/NCSG%20EPDP%20Comment.pdf?version=1&modificationDate=1545432717000&api=v2" target="_blank">https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/79429792/NCSG%20EPDP%20Comment.pdf?version=1&modificationDate=1545432717000&api=v2</a></div>
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Tomslin
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<div><span style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:12.8px">@LinkedIn:
<a href="https://www.linkedin.com/in/tomslin/" target="_blank">https://www.linkedin.com/in/tomslin/</a><br>
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at 17:28, Bolutife Adisa <<a href="mailto:adisabolutifeo@gmail.com" target="_blank">adisabolutifeo@gmail.com</a>>
wrote:<br>
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<div dir="ltr">Hi Muriel,
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<div>I think we can start by reading up on the
initial documents and comments, to inform the
direction of our current draft.</div>
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<div>Also <a class="gmail_plusreply" id="m_7292074110405126967m_764051126559718203m_-1486780843771377168m_257341801820147867m_-7270315319511856896plusReplyChip-0" href="mailto:mesumbeslin@gmail.com" target="_blank">@Tomslin
Samme-Nlar</a> , can you please share the time
frame for this comment so that we can also set a
timeline for each stage of this drafting.</div>
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<div>Best,</div>
<div>- Bolutife.</div>
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<div dir="auto">Yes we are</div>
<div dir="auto">So, how do you think we can do
the work?</div>
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sept. 2022 à 17:38, Bolutife Adisa <<a href="mailto:adisabolutifeo@gmail.com" target="_blank">adisabolutifeo@gmail.com</a>>
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<div dir="auto">Hi Muriel,
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<div>I’m great, and you?</div>
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<div>Happy to join you as well. Is it
just the two of us ?<br>
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<div dir="ltr">- Bolutife </div>
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<blockquote type="cite">On 22. Sep
2022, at 16:54, alapini muriel
<<a href="mailto:muriel.alapini@gmail.com" target="_blank">muriel.alapini@gmail.com</a>>
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<div dir="auto">Hi Tomslim, </div>
<div dir="auto">It's seems like we
are now two volunteers. </div>
<div dir="auto">Hello Bolu, </div>
<div dir="auto">How are you doing.
Very happy to join you</div>
<div dir="auto">Muriel</div>
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22 sept. 2022 à 10:11,
Tomslin Samme-Nlar <<a href="mailto:mesumbeslin@gmail.com" target="_blank">mesumbeslin@gmail.com</a>>
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<div>Hi Alapini,</div>
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<div>Are you happy to
start drafting the
comment on your own?<br>
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Tomslin
<div><span style="font-size:12.8px;color:rgb(0,0,0)"></span></div>
<div><span style="font-size:12.8px;color:rgb(0,0,0)">@LinkedIn:
<a href="https://www.linkedin.com/in/tomslin/" target="_blank">https://www.linkedin.com/in/tomslin/</a><br>
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Tue, 6 Sept 2022 at
09:59, Tomslin
Samme-Nlar <<a href="mailto:mesumbeslin@gmail.com" target="_blank">mesumbeslin@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br>
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<div dir="auto">That
would be awesome!
There are no other
volunteers yet,
but I will be
asking some
experts to join as
well. I'll keep
you updated. <br>
<br>
<div dir="auto">Warmly,
<br>
Tomslin</div>
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2022, 01:10
alapini muriel,
<<a href="mailto:muriel.alapini@gmail.com" target="_blank">muriel.alapini@gmail.com</a>>
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<div>Dear
Tomslin, <br>
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<div>My name
is Muriel
ALAPINI. I am
a new-commer
from Benin
Republic and I
would like to
join this
working group
if it's
possible. <br>
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<div>Best
regards, <br>
</div>
<div>Muriel<br>
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<div>Dear
members,<br>
<br>
The public
comment period
on a proposed
Registration
Data Consensus
Policy for
gTLDs is now
open. <br>
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</div>
<div>If you
still
remember, the
genesis of
this policy is
the first-ever
Expedited
Policy
Development
Process (EPDP)
initiated by
the GNSO
Council to
determine if
the Temp Spec
for gTLD
Registration
Data
should become
an ICANN
consensus
policy as-is
or with
modifications,
whose
recommendations
ICANN board
adopted in
2019. As ICANN
Org rightly
notes, this
"draft
Registration
Data Policy is
like no other
policy in
ICANN's
history....
The policy
touches on
some of the
most
important,
complex, and
challenging
issues facing
the Internet
ecosystem". <br>
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<div>The
Registration
Data Policy
Implementation
Plan Public
Comment
encompasses 34
policy
recommendations
from 3 ICANN
Board
Resolutions:<br>
<br>
<ol>
<li> EPDP
Phase 1: Board
Resolution in
May 2019 (29
recommendations)</li>
<li> EPDP
Phase 2: Board
Resolution in
June 2021 (4
recommendations)</li>
<li>
Supplemental
Recommendation
12: Board
Resolution in
February 2022
(1
recommendation)</li>
</ol>
NCSG was very
active and
vocal about
its positions
on these WGs.<br>
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</div>
<div>The
Policy
Committee is
now calling
for volunteers
to draft an
NCSG
comment/response
for this
proceeding
which is due
for
consideration
on Thursday 20
October 2022
to allow time
for filling
and submitting
the new public
comment form.<br>
<br>
Please let me
know off-list
if you'd like
to volunteer
for the
comment
drafting.
It'll be nice
to have more
than one
volunteer,
including
new-commers
who can use
this as an
opportunity to
learn and be
familiar with
policy work. <br>
<br>
More
information
about the
policy status
report can be
found here : <a href="https://www.icann.org/en/public-comment/proceeding/registration-data-consensus-policy-for-gtlds-24-08-2022" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://www.icann.org/en/public-comment/proceeding/registration-data-consensus-policy-for-gtlds-24-08-2022</a><br>
<br>
A draft Google
doc for the
comment in the
guided format
can be found
here: <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LLeXNvC1wba47TTloZi73zwxs22tJWRvCiFBjtO-8Kg/edit?usp=sharing" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LLeXNvC1wba47TTloZi73zwxs22tJWRvCiFBjtO-8Kg/edit?usp=sharing</a><br>
<br>
You can find
previous NCSG
comments here:
<a href="https://community.icann.org/display/gnsononcomstake/Public+Comments+-+2022" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://community.icann.org/display/gnsononcomstake/Public+Comments+-+2022</a><br>
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See below some
best practices
for the
penholder:<br>
<br>
<ul>
<li>
Provide the
first draft on
the mailing
list in by day
21 of the
comment period</li>
<li> Try to
resolve the
comments
throughout the
duration of
comment period
</li>
<li> Make
sure that the
commenter has
seen how
comment has
been resolved
(contact them
directly if
necessary)</li>
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Tomslin
<div><span style="font-size:12.8px;color:rgb(0,0,0)"></span></div>
<div><span style="font-size:12.8px;color:rgb(0,0,0)">@LinkedIn:
<a href="https://www.linkedin.com/in/tomslin/" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://www.linkedin.com/in/tomslin/</a><br>
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<div><font style="color:rgb(0,0,255)">Muriel
ALAPINI <br>
E-mail: <a href="mailto:muriel.alapini@gmail.com" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">muriel.alapini@gmail.com</a><br>
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