<div dir="ltr"><div>Thanks Stephanie for sharing this.</div><div>while this will come to council for adoption, it is critical to review and make changes at DT level. I would like ask everyone to review and see if there is any area of concern.</div><div><br></div><div>Rafik</div><div><br></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">Le lun. 15 juil. 2019 à 22:37, Stephanie Perrin <<a href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca">stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca</a>> a écrit :<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
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<div class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651moz-forward-container">I must confess that I have missed the last couple of meetings on this issue. As you can see, the final draft is nearly ready, we need to comment asap. Please, folks who participated more closely in the IANA review, take
a look. Or tell me who I should forward this to to take a look.<br>
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<div class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651moz-forward-container">cheers Steph<br>
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<td>[Gnso-bylaws-dt] FOR FINAL REVIEW: Revised Guidelines & Motion Template - Section 1.3 Approval Action Community Forum (11 July 2019)</td>
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<td>Thu, 11 Jul 2019 21:04:56 +0000</td>
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<td>Julie Hedlund <a class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:julie.hedlund@icann.org" target="_blank">
<julie.hedlund@icann.org></a></td>
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<td><a class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:gnso-bylaws-dt@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-bylaws-dt@icann.org</a>
<a class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:gnso-bylaws-dt@icann.org" target="_blank"><gnso-bylaws-dt@icann.org></a></td>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">Dear DT members,</span><span style="color:black"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="color:black">Per action item 2 below from the meeting on 10 July, please review the revised version of the GUIDELINES & MOTION TEMPLATE: SECTION 1.3 APPROVAL ACTION COMMUNITY FORUM DRAFT (11 July 2019) at:<span class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651apple-converted-space"> <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1v5qtCO0Ocrbkk6o2YVrsuIWwjTQsprdEmWBYD35OH6o/edit?usp=sharing" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1v5qtCO0Ocrbkk6o2YVrsuIWwjTQsprdEmWBYD35OH6o/edit?usp=sharing</a></span></span><span class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651apple-converted-space">.
The document also is attached in Word with redlines.<span style="color:black"> </span>
</span><span style="color:black"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="color:black"> <u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="color:black">The document will be on the agenda <b><i>for finalization/approval
</i></b>at the next meeting on<span class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651apple-converted-space"> </span><b>Wednesday, 24 July at 21:00 UTC</b>. In the meantime, DT members are encouraged to make suggested edits and comments in the Google document or in the Word document.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="color:black"> <u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="color:black">Thank you very much for your consideration.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<span style="color:black">Kind regards,<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px">
<span style="color:black">Julie<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px">
<span style="color:black">Julie Hedlund, Policy Director<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="color:black">From: </span></b><span style="color:black">Gnso-bylaws-dt
<a class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:gnso-bylaws-dt-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank"><gnso-bylaws-dt-bounces@icann.org></a> on behalf of Julie Hedlund
<a class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:julie.hedlund@icann.org" target="_blank"><julie.hedlund@icann.org></a><br>
<b>Date: </b>Thursday, July 11, 2019 at 4:59 PM<br>
<b>To: </b><a class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:gnso-bylaws-dt@icann.org" target="_blank">"gnso-bylaws-dt@icann.org"</a>
<a class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:gnso-bylaws-dt@icann.org" target="_blank"><gnso-bylaws-dt@icann.org></a><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[Gnso-bylaws-dt] Actions & Notes: GNSO Drafting Team Meeting 10 July 21:00 UTC<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Dear all,<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> <u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">Please see below the action items</span> and notes<span style="color:black"> captured by staff from the<span class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651apple-converted-space"> </span>GNSO Drafting Team meeting held on<span class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651apple-converted-space"> </span></span>10
July <span style="color:black">2019<span class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651apple-converted-space"> </span>(21:00-22:00 UTC). Staff have posted
</span>these <span style="color:black">to the wiki space. <b><i>Please note that these<span class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651apple-converted-space"> </span>are<span class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651apple-converted-space"> </span>high-level notes and are not meant as a substitute for the recording, chat room,
or transcript</i></b><i>.</i> The recording, AC chat,<span class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651apple-converted-space"> </span>transcript<span class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651apple-converted-space"> </span>and attendance records are posted on the wiki</span><span class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651apple-converted-space"> at:
<a href="https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=111387729" target="_blank">
https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=111387729</a>. </span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> <u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Please note that all versions of the guidelines may be found on the wiki at:
<a href="https://community.icann.org/display/GBIDT/Templates+and+Guidelines+Depository" target="_blank">
https://community.icann.org/display/GBIDT/Templates+and+Guidelines+Depository</a>.
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<span style="color:black"> </span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<span style="color:black">Best Regards,</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px">
<span style="color:black">Julie</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;word-spacing:0px">
<span style="color:black">Julie Hedlund, Policy Director</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black"> </span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b>Actions Items:</b><u></u><u></u></p>
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<ol style="margin-top:0in" type="1" start="1">
<li class="MsoNormal"><u>Joint ccNSO/GNSO Initiation of a Special IFR</u>: Staff will check on the status of questions to ICANN Legal, specifically on whether the GNSO and ccNSO can jointed initiate a Special IFR. (DONE – see
response in separate message.)<u></u><u></u></li><li class="MsoNormal"><u>Section 1.3 Approval Action Community Forum</u>: Staff will accept the grammatical edits in the document from Heather Forrest and generate a new version with the flagged issues/comments called out for
DT consideration (see below), including a timeline for the GNSO Council actions. (DONE – see documents for review in separate message.)<u></u><u></u></li><li class="MsoNormal"><u>Preparation for 24 July Meeting</u>: Staff will circulate for DT review the draft of Section 2.2 Petition Process for Specified Actions and Section 2.3 Rejection Action Community Forum. (DONE – see documents
for review in separate message.)<u></u><u></u></li></ol>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>Notes:</b><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">1. Updates to Statements of Interest (SOIs): None provided.<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> <u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">2. Section 18.12 Special IFRs -- Brief Update re: 15 July joint GRC/DT meeting on Guidelines for GNSO-ccNSO Consultation on Initiating a Special IFR:<a href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1ol8461abkOqzXSahZKkuLL-2D7GxDWklmA0wnK1CKwfgY_edit-3Fusp-3Dsharing&d=DwMGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=adDIs0WEx_lLwFfrsdovxTYY8GkRHo5ibc8SR3Npdh8&m=RfYmWnCQSyLL0EsBnWmD6gb5eu50atShEcYcuw1NcLg&s=aQxrVGGlnlFIhJqK6BXgA3NWGE0zel27UR03KM5AROE&e=" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ol8461abkOqzXSahZKkuLL-7GxDWklmA0wnK1CKwfgY/edit?usp=sharing
[docs.google.com]</a><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">-- What do we expect from the meeting on 15 July and how do we move forward? Could the GRC be satisfied from the call on Monday, or would there be additional deliberations? <u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">-- Expectation that it is a matter of clarification and coming to a common understanding of the questions. The GRC and DT can finish their documents and they would have two common approaches.<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b> </b><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b>ACTION ITEM:</b> <b>Staff will check on the status of questions to ICANN Legal, particularly as to whether the GNSO and ccNSO can jointly initiate a Special IFR.</b><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">3. Discussion/Edits re: Section 1.3 Approval Action Community Forum:
<a href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1tR6YeATOl-2D-5F6ig7XKKluR3jwY8cLPYKoLCB-2Dt6GhVNc_edit-3Fusp-3Dsharing&d=DwMGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=adDIs0WEx_lLwFfrsdovxTYY8GkRHo5ibc8SR3Npdh8&m=sbkfLm_KS_6kkvPCW33WPWzEqKV0o0RQ_pxSldlvwrw&s=b2S5eYTIFBKQ9F6ZQVRjv1LGZuYnfgHf-hFZ_XSd5uU&e=" target="_blank">
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tR6YeATOl-_6ig7XKKluR3jwY8cLPYKoLCB-t6GhVNc/edit?usp=sharing </a><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">-- Staff and David McCauley noted that there is a real-time example of the anticipated use of the Approval Action Community Forum to consider the ccNSO’s request for a Fundamental Bylaws Amendment regarding the IANA Naming Function Review
Team's Composition. See: <a href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.icann.org_public-2Dcomments_bylaws-2Damend-2Diana-2Dnaming-2Dfunction-2D2019-2D06-2D10-2Den&d=DwMGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=adDIs0WEx_lLwFfrsdovxTYY8GkRHo5ibc8SR3Npdh8&m=5VHwARxTSP3PsyJJ-5TsXhC-aJ7h8NXUJdIjfi89Kpg&s=Yb4Kf5QFfGYTcUVHIKbC6T3MT0aMgQq4CKR8jzUp-lg&e=" target="_blank">
https://www.icann.org/public-comments/bylaws-amend-iana-naming-function-2019-06-10-en [icann.org]</a>. <u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">-- Staff also noted that the EC Administration has accordingly requested, per the Bylaws, that an Approval Action Community Forum should be scheduled to take place during ICANN66 in Montreal.<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> <u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Edits/Comments for DT Consideration in the Google Doc (as called out in the revised version dated 11 July):<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> <u></u><u></u></p>
<ol style="margin-top:0in" type="1" start="1">
<li class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in">Noting that although the current representative to the EC Administration is the GNSO Council Chair, there is nothing to prevent the GNSO Council from choosing a different person as
its representative. Thus, it is suggested that references to the GNSO Council Chair in the document should be changed to GNSO Representative to the EC Administration (see page 4 and onward). Maxim Alzoba also inserted a comment relating to this issue, so
we request that he should review this suggested edit. <u></u><u></u></li><li class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in">4.3.1 Consultation Mechanism:
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<span>a.<span style="font:7pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span>Change “If such a consultation is scheduled” to “If such a consultation occurs”.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<span>b.<span style="font:7pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span>In response to a point made by David McCauley about ensuring that the GNSO Council can meet the decision deadline of 21 days as specified in the Bylaws, add to the last sentence, “and in no event later than the 21-day Approval Action
Decision Period per Section 1.4 Annex D of the Bylaws.”<u></u><u></u></p>
<ol style="margin-top:0in" type="1" start="3">
<li class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in">4.3.2 GNSO Council Decision and Informing the EC Administration:
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<span>a.<span style="font:7pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span>The DT discussed how to ensure that the GNSO Council’s actions to decide on whether to support, object to, or abstain from the Approval Action are completed within the above-mentioned 21-day period. Staff suggested adding a timeline
showing the timing of the activities. In addition, staff has added the excerpt from the Bylaws with the relevant details.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<span>b.<span style="font:7pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span>On 11 July Wolf-Ulrich Knoben suggested edits to combine sections 4.3.2 and 4.3.3 into one section. Staff has included those edits in the version dated 11 July.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<li class="gmail-m_3139037413978317651MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in">Staff also accepted all of the grammatical changes provided by Heather Forrest.<u></u><u></u></li></ol>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>ACTION ITEM: Staff will accept the grammatical edits in the document from Heather Forrest and generate a new version with the flagged issues/comments called out for DT consideration, including a timeline for the GNSO Council actions.</b><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">4. Next Meeting: 24 July: The DT will finalize its review of Section 1.3, and begin review of Section 2.2 Petition Process for Specified Actions and Section 2.3 Rejection Action Community Forum.<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>ACTION ITEM: Staff will circulate for DT review the draft of Section 2.2 Petition Process for Specified Actions and Section 2.3 Rejection Action Community Forum. </b>
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