<html><head><meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body dir="auto">I do not want to delay submission of this input document so would advise submitting if all our EPDP representatives (our subject matter experts) are happy with its content!<br><br><div id="AppleMailSignature" dir="ltr">Sent from my iPhone</div><div dir="ltr"><br>On 08 Jul 2019, at 00:52, Ayden Férdeline <<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com">icann@ferdeline.com</a>> wrote:<br><br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div dir="ltr"><div>I did not resolve the comments in the Google Doc by pressing the 'resolve' button, but I did respond to the comment offering a suggested path forward, i.e. refer broadly to Article 6 of the GDPR. Please let me know if this alternative language would work? But I agree it would be great to get all members of the EPDP team to look over this document to make sure its sound, so I hope others can review it as a matter of priority.<br></div><div><br></div><div class="protonmail_signature_block"><div class="protonmail_signature_block-user"><div>Best wishes, Ayden <br></div></div><div class="protonmail_signature_block-proton protonmail_signature_block-empty"><br></div></div><div><br></div><div>‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐<br></div><div> On Sunday, 7 July 2019 23:49, farzaneh badii <<a href="mailto:farzaneh.badii@gmail.com">farzaneh.badii@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><div> <br></div><blockquote class="protonmail_quote" type="cite"><div><div dir="auto">(Observer) I have commented on this draft. I don't see my comments responded to and resolved. Basically I think if Stephanie with her expertise in data protection doesn’t get the time to look at it to see if the answers that have invoked GDPR are correct, then we run the risk of having answered the questions invoking the wrong articles and providing the wrong rational. we can submit without answering those questions that invoke GDPR specific articles. I think I have flagged them in the document but will have a look again. <br></div></div><div><div><br></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr">On Sat, Jul 6, 2019 at 12:11 PM Ayden Férdeline <<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com">icann@ferdeline.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex" class="gmail_quote"><div>Hi,<br></div><div><br></div><div>I have not endorsed the contents of this document because I was involved in drafting it.<br></div><div><br></div><div>But I hope other members of the Policy Committee can review it as a matter of priority and advise if it can be submitted or not. The due date is Monday, 8 July. Thanks.<br></div><div><br></div><div>Best wishes, Ayden <br></div><div class="m_2603805657220858100protonmail_signature_block"><div class="m_2603805657220858100protonmail_signature_block-proton m_2603805657220858100protonmail_signature_block-empty"><br></div></div><div><br></div><div>‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐<br></div><div>On Wednesday, 3 July 2019 23:45, Rafik Dammak <<a target="_blank" href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><div><br></div><blockquote type="cite" class="m_2603805657220858100protonmail_quote"><div dir="ltr"><div>Hi all,<br></div><div><br></div><div>this need a swift action from PC: review and endorsment by deadline (which was already extended)<br></div><div><br></div><div>Best,<br></div><div><br></div><div><div>Rafik<br></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr"><div>---------- Forwarded message ---------<br></div><div>De : <b>Ayden Férdeline</b> <span dir="auto"><<a target="_blank" href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com">icann@ferdeline.com</a>></span><br></div><div>Date: jeu. 4 juil. 2019 à 07:43<br></div><div>Subject: [NCSG-Discuss] [feedback requested] EPDP Phase 2 Input Document<br></div><div>To: <<a target="_blank" href="mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS@listserv.syr.edu">NCSG-DISCUSS@listserv.syr.edu</a>><br></div></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>Dear all,<br></div><div><br></div><div>As you might be aware, the EPDP (the working group looking at how Whois can be reformed to better safeguard privacy) has now commenced phase 2 of its work.<br></div><div><br></div><div>The NCSG has been invited to offer its input to help inform the EPDP Team’s deliberations for phase 2 of its work, which will focus on 1) the system for accessing personal information, 2) the Annex to the Temporary Specification, and 3) issues deferred from phase 1.<br></div><div><br></div><div>The NCSG's representatives to the EPDP have prepared a first draft to this input document, and we welcome your input here. Please take a look at the document here, and please let us know if you have any concerns, questions, or suggested edits: <a target="_blank" href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rK5gp2hjABl29lLMzdlqSR0jWIOSQa-Oc4R_nzrUmqo/edit?usp=sharing">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rK5gp2hjABl29lLMzdlqSR0jWIOSQa-Oc4R_nzrUmqo/edit?usp=sharing</a><br></div><div><br></div><div>Our deadline for submitting this to the EPDP team is Monday, 8 July, so your prompt review would be greatly appreciated. Thank you for your understanding.<br></div><div><br></div><div>Kind regards,<br></div><div><br></div><div>Ayden Férdeline<br></div><div>on behalf of the NCSG's representatives to the EPDP<br></div></div></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>_______________________________________________<br></div><div> NCSG-PC mailing list<br></div><div> <a target="_blank" href="mailto:NCSG-PC@lists.ncsg.is">NCSG-PC@lists.ncsg.is</a><br></div><div> <a target="_blank" rel="noreferrer" href="https://lists.ncsg.is/mailman/listinfo/ncsg-pc">https://lists.ncsg.is/mailman/listinfo/ncsg-pc</a><br></div></blockquote></div></div><div>-- <br></div><div data-smartmail="gmail_signature" dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div><span style="font-family:verdana, sans-serif">Farzaneh</span><br></div></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div></div></blockquote><blockquote type="cite"><div dir="ltr"><span>_______________________________________________</span><br><span>NCSG-PC mailing list</span><br><span><a href="mailto:NCSG-PC@lists.ncsg.is">NCSG-PC@lists.ncsg.is</a></span><br><span><a href="https://lists.ncsg.is/mailman/listinfo/ncsg-pc">https://lists.ncsg.is/mailman/listinfo/ncsg-pc</a></span><br></div></blockquote></body></html>