<div dir="ltr"><div>Hi Farell,</div><div><br></div><div>thanks for the feedback.</div><div>I don't think the format can be an issue, the policy staff has still to go through the submitted document and link each comment to recommendation, question or part of the report. I believe that the document explicitly indicates which recommendation or question we are commenting which make things easier for staff for compilation and WG members for review.</div><div>EPDP is a particular case as the public comment was through a google form. Some WGs can ask to follow a different format for submission e.g. questionnaire.</div><div><br></div><div>Best,</div><div><br></div><div>Rafik</div><div><br></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">Le jeu. 31 janv. 2019 à 17:20, Farell FOLLY <<a href="mailto:farell@benin2point0.org">farell@benin2point0.org</a>> a écrit :<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div style="overflow-wrap: break-word;">That is a very good comment. Apart from some minor typos, I have no additional input. I thank the drafters, they did a very good job.<div><br></div><div>However; the format is rather different from recent comments we wrote, and for coherence I suggest that in the future we always try to stick to a similar template (paragraphs, numbering style, etc.), otherwise our targets/intended recipients could get confused about our style (i.e to easily identify where we analyse, where we conclude and where we opine, etc.) when they receive two or more consecutive feedbacks from us. Nevertheless, the document is good and well written.</div><div><br></div><div>@Rafik, I recall that a DIFFERENT feedback submission format has been recently used for EPDP, and here; we had also agreed on a kind of template (style, paragraphs, information, fields) to include in our NCSG comments, consequently; do you think that we can merge both and suggest that to ICANN as PC submission template? Or simply adapt it for our own use (and of course, formalize it through our operations procedures)</div><div><div>
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<div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div>On 31 Jan 2019, at 06:52, Rafik Dammak <<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@GMAIL.COM" target="_blank">rafik.dammak@GMAIL.COM</a>> wrote:</div><br class="gmail-m_855122900698282962Apple-interchange-newline"><div><div dir="ltr"><div>Thanks Tatiana and Ayden, looking for other PC members to review.</div><div><br></div><div>Rafik</div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">Le jeu. 31 janv. 2019 à 08:26, Tatiana Tropina <<a href="mailto:tatiana.tropina@gmail.com" target="_blank">tatiana.tropina@gmail.com</a>> a écrit :<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr">My support for submission and my thanks to Bruna and everyone who drafted it, too. <div>Cheers,</div><div>Tanya </div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Thu, 31 Jan 2019 at 00:17, Ayden Férdeline <<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" target="_blank">icann@ferdeline.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div>I support the submission of this comment; thanks to Bruna et al for drafting it!<br></div><div><br></div><div class="gmail-m_855122900698282962gmail-m_-3103892384109858800gmail-m_-6699106760467795903protonmail_signature_block"><div class="gmail-m_855122900698282962gmail-m_-3103892384109858800gmail-m_-6699106760467795903protonmail_signature_block-user"><div>Ayden <br></div></div><div class="gmail-m_855122900698282962gmail-m_-3103892384109858800gmail-m_-6699106760467795903protonmail_signature_block-proton gmail-m_855122900698282962gmail-m_-3103892384109858800gmail-m_-6699106760467795903protonmail_signature_block-empty"><br></div></div><div><br></div><div>‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐<br></div><div> On Tuesday, January 29, 2019 6:48 AM, Rafik Dammak <<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" target="_blank">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><div> <br></div><blockquote type="cite" class="gmail-m_855122900698282962gmail-m_-3103892384109858800gmail-m_-6699106760467795903protonmail_quote"><div dir="ltr"><div>Hi all,<br></div><div><br></div><div>we have this draft comment to review quickly , regarding WT5 initial report.<br></div><div>it is a critical track in subpro WG.<br></div><div><br></div><div>Best,<br></div><div><br></div><div><div>Rafik<br></div><div><br></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr"><div>---------- Forwarded message ---------<br></div><div>From: <b>Bruna Martins dos Santos</b> <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:bruna.mrtns@gmail.com" target="_blank">bruna.mrtns@gmail.com</a>></span><br></div><div>Date: mar. 29 janv. 2019 à 20:35<br></div><div>Subject: [NCSG-Discuss] Proposed Comment on the Geographic Names at the Top Level - Supplemental Initial Report<br></div><div>To: <<a href="mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS@listserv.syr.edu" target="_blank">NCSG-DISCUSS@listserv.syr.edu</a>><br></div></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div>Dear all, <br></div><div><br></div><div>I would like to share with you the proposed comment to the <span><span style="background-color:transparent"><span><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman""><i>Work Track 5 on Geographic Names at the Top Level - Supplemental Initial Report of the New gTLD Subsequent Procedures Policy Development Process. </i></span></span></span></span><span style="color:rgb(39,39,40)"><span style="font-family:-apple-system,sans-serif">Submissions are due in just over three days time (feb 1st as a deadline), so I’m sharing this on our mailing list today for your speedy review and suggested edits. </span></span><br></div><div><span style="color:rgb(39,39,40)"><span style="font-family:-apple-system,sans-serif"><span style="font-size:14px"></span></span></span><br></div><div><span style="color:rgb(39,39,40)"><span style="font-family:-apple-system,sans-serif">The proposed comment can be found here: </span></span><span style="font-family:-apple-system,sans-serif"><span style="color:rgb(39,39,40)"><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EyQ_D37jbIpKByOyknOVwrBO0-GLKVdyFI_64_s2l9U/edit" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EyQ_D37jbIpKByOyknOVwrBO0-GLKVdyFI_64_s2l9U/edit</a></span></span><br></div><div><span style="font-family:-apple-system,sans-serif"><span style="color:rgb(39,39,40)"><span style="font-size:14px"></span></span></span><br></div><div><span style="font-family:-apple-system,sans-serif"><span style="color:rgb(39,39,40)">Ps. Thanks to Farzaneh and all the others who volunteered to work on this comment.<span style="font-size:14px"> </span></span></span><br></div><div><span style="font-family:-apple-system,sans-serif"><span style="color:rgb(39,39,40)"><span style="font-size:14px"></span></span></span><br></div><div><div>Best, <br></div><div>-- <br></div><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div><b><i>Bruna Martins dos Santos </i></b><br></div><div><br></div><div><div>Skype ID: bruna.martinsantos<br></div><div>@boomartins<br></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></blockquote><div><br></div>_______________________________________________<br>
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