<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class="">I support the comment, Thanks Bruna!<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Martin<br class=""><div class=""><br class=""><div><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On 31 Jan 2019, at 13:59, Elsa S <<a href="mailto:elsa.saade@gmail.com" class="">elsa.saade@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:georgia,serif;font-size:small">Hey all,</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:georgia,serif;font-size:small"><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:georgia,serif;font-size:small">Reviewed the comment and added some thoughts to it. Thanks to all those who worked on it, particularly Bruna and Farzi, it looks very well studied.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:georgia,serif;font-size:small"><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:georgia,serif;font-size:small">As for the style of comments, I think it very much depends on the topic and how the WG requires the comment to be structured. For instance, in the last subpro comment, Bruna and I discovered that the drafted comment was not going to be taken into proper consideration because it did not adhere to the WG's standards of the subpro comments' structures. So our draft was put under general reviews rather than specific sub-reviews as it would have been most efficient.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:georgia,serif;font-size:small"><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:georgia,serif;font-size:small">So we shouldn't be wary about how unified our presentation of NCSG comments is, rather how compatible it is with the WG's subject I'd say!</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:georgia,serif;font-size:small"><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:georgia,serif;font-size:small">Thanks,</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:georgia,serif;font-size:small"><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:georgia,serif;font-size:small">E.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:georgia,serif;font-size:small">--</div></div><br class=""><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Thu, Jan 31, 2019 at 8:30 AM Rafik Dammak <<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" class="">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br class=""></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class="">Hi Farell,</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">thanks for the feedback.</div><div class="">I don't think the format can be an issue, the policy staff has still to go through the submitted document and link each comment to recommendation, question or part of the report. I believe that the document explicitly indicates which recommendation or question we are commenting which make things easier for staff for compilation and WG members for review.</div><div class="">EPDP is a particular case as the public comment was through a google form. Some WGs can ask to follow a different format for submission e.g. questionnaire.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Best,</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Rafik</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">Le jeu. 31 janv. 2019 à 17:20, Farell FOLLY <<a href="mailto:farell@benin2point0.org" target="_blank" class="">farell@benin2point0.org</a>> a écrit :<br class=""></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div class="">That is a very good comment. Apart from some minor typos, I have no additional input. I thank the drafters, they did a very good job.<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">However; the format is rather different from recent comments we wrote, and for coherence I suggest that in the future we always try to stick to a similar template (paragraphs, numbering style, etc.), otherwise our targets/intended recipients could get confused about our style (i.e to easily identify where we analyse, where we conclude and where we opine, etc.) when they receive two or more consecutive feedbacks from us. Nevertheless, the document is good and well written.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">@Rafik, I recall that a DIFFERENT feedback submission format has been recently used for EPDP, and here; we had also agreed on a kind of template (style, paragraphs, information, fields) to include in our NCSG comments, consequently; do you think that we can merge both and suggest that to ICANN as PC submission template? Or simply adapt it for our own use (and of course, formalize it through our operations procedures)</div><div class=""><div class="">
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<div class=""><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On 31 Jan 2019, at 06:52, Rafik Dammak <<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@GMAIL.COM" target="_blank" class="">rafik.dammak@GMAIL.COM</a>> wrote:</div><br class="gmail-m_5037358215468922414gmail-m_855122900698282962Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class="">Thanks Tatiana and Ayden, looking for other PC members to review.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Rafik</div><br class=""><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">Le jeu. 31 janv. 2019 à 08:26, Tatiana Tropina <<a href="mailto:tatiana.tropina@gmail.com" target="_blank" class="">tatiana.tropina@gmail.com</a>> a écrit :<br class=""></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr" class="">My support for submission and my thanks to Bruna and everyone who drafted it, too. <div class="">Cheers,</div><div class="">Tanya </div></div><br class=""><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Thu, 31 Jan 2019 at 00:17, Ayden Férdeline <<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" target="_blank" class="">icann@ferdeline.com</a>> wrote:<br class=""></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div class="">I support the submission of this comment; thanks to Bruna et al for drafting it!<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="gmail-m_5037358215468922414gmail-m_855122900698282962gmail-m_-3103892384109858800gmail-m_-6699106760467795903protonmail_signature_block"><div class="gmail-m_5037358215468922414gmail-m_855122900698282962gmail-m_-3103892384109858800gmail-m_-6699106760467795903protonmail_signature_block-user"><div class="">Ayden <br class=""></div></div><div class="gmail-m_5037358215468922414gmail-m_855122900698282962gmail-m_-3103892384109858800gmail-m_-6699106760467795903protonmail_signature_block-proton gmail-m_5037358215468922414gmail-m_855122900698282962gmail-m_-3103892384109858800gmail-m_-6699106760467795903protonmail_signature_block-empty"><br class=""></div></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐<br class=""></div><div class=""> On Tuesday, January 29, 2019 6:48 AM, Rafik Dammak <<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" target="_blank" class="">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br class=""></div><div class=""> <br class=""></div><blockquote type="cite" class="gmail-m_5037358215468922414gmail-m_855122900698282962gmail-m_-3103892384109858800gmail-m_-6699106760467795903protonmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class="">Hi all,<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">we have this draft comment to review quickly , regarding WT5 initial report.<br class=""></div><div class="">it is a critical track in subpro WG.<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Best,<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><div class="">Rafik<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class="">---------- Forwarded message ---------<br class=""></div><div class="">From: <b class="">Bruna Martins dos Santos</b> <span dir="ltr" class=""><<a href="mailto:bruna.mrtns@gmail.com" target="_blank" class="">bruna.mrtns@gmail.com</a>></span><br class=""></div><div class="">Date: mar. 29 janv. 2019 à 20:35<br class=""></div><div class="">Subject: [NCSG-Discuss] Proposed Comment on the Geographic Names at the Top Level - Supplemental Initial Report<br class=""></div><div class="">To: <<a href="mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS@listserv.syr.edu" target="_blank" class="">NCSG-DISCUSS@listserv.syr.edu</a>><br class=""></div></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class="">Dear all, <br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">I would like to share with you the proposed comment to the <span class=""><span style="background-color:transparent" class=""><span class=""><span style="font-family:"Times New Roman"" class=""><i class="">Work Track 5 on Geographic Names at the Top Level - Supplemental Initial Report of the New gTLD Subsequent Procedures Policy Development Process. </i></span></span></span></span><span style="color:rgb(39,39,40)" class=""><span style="font-family:-apple-system,sans-serif" class="">Submissions are due in just over three days time (feb 1st as a deadline), so I’m sharing this on our mailing list today for your speedy review and suggested edits. </span></span><br class=""></div><div class=""><span style="color:rgb(39,39,40)" class=""><span style="font-family:-apple-system,sans-serif" class=""><span style="font-size:14px" class=""></span></span></span><br class=""></div><div class=""><span style="color:rgb(39,39,40)" class=""><span style="font-family:-apple-system,sans-serif" class="">The proposed comment can be found here: </span></span><span style="font-family:-apple-system,sans-serif" class=""><span style="color:rgb(39,39,40)" class=""><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EyQ_D37jbIpKByOyknOVwrBO0-GLKVdyFI_64_s2l9U/edit" target="_blank" class="">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EyQ_D37jbIpKByOyknOVwrBO0-GLKVdyFI_64_s2l9U/edit</a></span></span><br class=""></div><div class=""><span style="font-family:-apple-system,sans-serif" class=""><span style="color:rgb(39,39,40)" class=""><span style="font-size:14px" class=""></span></span></span><br class=""></div><div class=""><span style="font-family:-apple-system,sans-serif" class=""><span style="color:rgb(39,39,40)" class="">Ps. Thanks to Farzaneh and all the others who volunteered to work on this comment.<span style="font-size:14px" class=""> </span></span></span><br class=""></div><div class=""><span style="font-family:-apple-system,sans-serif" class=""><span style="color:rgb(39,39,40)" class=""><span style="font-size:14px" class=""></span></span></span><br class=""></div><div class=""><div class="">Best, <br class=""></div><div class="">-- <br class=""></div><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><b class=""><i class="">Bruna Martins dos Santos </i></b><br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><div class="">Skype ID: bruna.martinsantos<br class=""></div><div class="">@boomartins<br class=""></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></blockquote><div class=""><br class=""></div>_______________________________________________<br class="">
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