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<div><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On 20 Nov 2018, at 12:04, Ayden Férdeline <<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" class="">icann@ferdeline.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><div class="">The new comment is very thin on content. <br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Is that because the many concerns we previously raised have been addressed?<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="protonmail_signature_block"><div class="protonmail_signature_block-user"><div class="">Ayden <br class=""></div></div><div class="protonmail_signature_block-proton protonmail_signature_block-empty"><br class=""></div></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐<br class=""></div><div class=""> On Tuesday, 20 November 2018 12:02, Rafik Dammak <<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" class="">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br class=""></div><div class=""> <br class=""></div><blockquote type="cite" class="protonmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class="">yes, it was Tomslin and Joanna who wrote the previous comment. of course, the drafter of the current comment is Tomslin too.<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Best,<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><div class="">Rafik<br class=""></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="">Le mar. 20 nov. 2018 à 19:57, Ayden Férdeline <<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" class="">icann@ferdeline.com</a>> a écrit :<br class=""></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div class="">I don't think Farell was the penholder for this comment; I think you might be thinking about the CCT report? But maybe I am mistaken.<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="m_2022367810968609721protonmail_signature_block"><div class="m_2022367810968609721protonmail_signature_block-user"><div class="">Best wishes, Ayden <br class=""></div></div><div class="m_2022367810968609721protonmail_signature_block-proton m_2022367810968609721protonmail_signature_block-empty"><br class=""></div></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐<br class=""></div><div class="">On Tuesday, 20 November 2018 11:02, Rafik Dammak <<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" target="_blank" class="">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><blockquote type="cite" class="m_2022367810968609721protonmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class="">yes, Farell who lead the drafting did and he was the penholder for the previous reports.<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Best,<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><div class="">Rafik<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="">Le mar. 20 nov. 2018 à 18:59, Ayden Férdeline <<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" target="_blank" class="">icann@ferdeline.com</a>> a écrit :<br class=""></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div class="">Has anyone reviewed our previous comment (on the previous draft report) to see whether the the report was subsequently revised to address the concerns we raised then? <br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="m_2022367810968609721m_2586100010900162823protonmail_signature_block"><div class="m_2022367810968609721m_2586100010900162823protonmail_signature_block-user"><div class="">Many thanks, Ayden <br class=""></div></div><div class="m_2022367810968609721m_2586100010900162823protonmail_signature_block-proton m_2022367810968609721m_2586100010900162823protonmail_signature_block-empty"><br class=""></div></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐<br class=""></div><div class="">On Tuesday, 20 November 2018 07:03, Rafik Dammak <<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" target="_blank" class="">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><blockquote type="cite" class="m_2022367810968609721m_2586100010900162823protonmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class="">Hi all,<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">we have another draft comment to review. the deadline for submission is 3rd December<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Best,<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><div class="">Rafik<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class="">---------- Forwarded message ---------<br class=""></div><div class="">From: <b class="">Tomslin Samme-Nlar</b> <span dir="ltr" class=""><<a href="mailto:mesumbeslin@gmail.com" target="_blank" class="">mesumbeslin@gmail.com</a>></span><br class=""></div><div class="">Date: mar. 20 nov. 2018 à 14:38<br class=""></div><div class="">Subject: [NCSG-Discuss] [Public Comments] Draft NCSG Comment on SSAC2 Review Draft Final Report<br class=""></div><div class="">To: <<a href="mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS@listserv.syr.edu" target="_blank" class="">NCSG-DISCUSS@listserv.syr.edu</a>><br class=""></div></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class="">Hi all,<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><div class="">As you may know, the comment period of the SSAC2 review Draft Final Report (<a href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/ssac-review-final-2018-10-15-en" target="_blank" class="">https://www.icann.org/public-comments/ssac-review-final-2018-10-15-en</a>) is coming to an end. I have drafted a comment on the draft final report which can be found here: <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fSi1SLEqk0QcWHmq-R1MBRWZJZ4MpsX2thXfI4sUjXA/edit" target="_blank" class="">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fSi1SLEqk0QcWHmq-R1MBRWZJZ4MpsX2thXfI4sUjXA/edit</a> , following our previous <a href="https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/79429792/SSAC2%20review%20-%20NCSG%20comment.pdf?version=1&modificationDate=1539198745000&api=v2" target="_blank" class="">comment</a> on the Assessment Report.<br class=""></div><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class="">I would like to request your input, comments, edits and additions before the Policy committee runs with it. <br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Cheers,<br class=""></div><div class="">Tomslin<br class=""></div><div class=""><span style="" class=""><span style="font-size:12.8px" class="">Fingerprint: 4D72 D735 DE42 D9FA 2453 8784 3C05 E338 5BBB 1D5C </span></span><br class=""></div><div class=""><span style="" class=""><span style="font-size:12.8px" class=""></span></span><br class=""></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></blockquote><div class=""><br class=""></div></blockquote></div></div></div></blockquote><div class=""><br class=""></div></blockquote></div></div></div></blockquote><div class=""><br class=""></div>_______________________________________________<br class="">NCSG-PC mailing list<br class=""><a href="mailto:NCSG-PC@lists.ncsg.is" class="">NCSG-PC@lists.ncsg.is</a><br class="">https://lists.ncsg.is/mailman/listinfo/ncsg-pc<br class=""></div></blockquote></div><br class=""></body></html>