<div dir="ltr">Hi all,<div><br></div><div>we have this draft comment for review. the deadline for submission is the 27th Nov.</div><div><br></div><div>Best,</div><div><br></div><div>Rafik<br><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr">---------- Forwarded message ---------<br>From: <strong class="gmail_sendername" dir="auto">Farell FOLLY</strong> <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:farell@benin2point0.org" target="_blank">farell@benin2point0.org</a>></span><br>Date: dim. 18 nov. 2018 à 04:04<br>Subject: [NCSG-Discuss] [Public Comments] Drafting comment on Competition, Consumer Trust, and Consumer Choice Review Team (CCT) Final Report & Recommendations<br>To:  <<a href="mailto:NCSG-DISCUSS@listserv.syr.edu" target="_blank">NCSG-DISCUSS@listserv.syr.edu</a>><br></div><br><br><div style="word-wrap:break-word;line-break:after-white-space">Dear All,<div><br></div><div>Please <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iRMb8X9mN-8cInJuVyHargHIPM9E1Ibq5LRsYcKUuJg/edit#" target="_blank">see in attach</a> our draft comment for the Call for public comments regarding the CCT-RT. The document has been elaborated by Yazid, Juan, and myself with the support of Rafik.</div><div><br></div><div>Since the deadline is also fast approaching, we would be glad to have your feedbacks (new inputs, comments, suggestions) to finalise it. You can edit the document directly. If you do not have any new input; I would essentially call upon your summarising skills since I believe that many if not most of the paragraphs should be briefer and more concise, however; we did that on purpose so that readers can first get the whole picture and all the details associated with each. Those members that have a strong background on this topic are welcome to support us.</div><div><br></div><div>If you have no background about this call, please read the following lines before you start reviewing the document.</div><div><br></div><div><b>(Calls chronology and documents)</b></div><div><br></div><div><ol><li>The call  <b>(Oct. 2018</b>) is about the <a href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/cct-final-recs-2018-10-08-en" target="_blank">final report</a> of the CCT-RT submitted to the board for approval. </li><li>It follows and finalises the call (<b>Mar. 2017</b>) for comments about the <a href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/cct-rt-draft-report-2017-03-07-en" target="_blank">draft report</a> previously submitted to the community. </li><li>Meanwhile, they also submitted a call (<b>Nov. 2017</b>) to comment on a <a href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/cct-recs-2017-11-27-en" target="_blank">new report</a> outlining some new findings (following the first draft) pertaining to DNS abuse, costs to trademark holders, parking and consumer choice related sections.</li><li>Before that and regarding the DNS Abuse, ICANN had issued a <a href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/sadag-final-2017-08-09-en" target="_blank">call</a> (<b>Aug 2017</b>) to comment on the Statistical Analysis of DNS Abuse in gTLDs (SADAG) Report which is also associated to the present call subjected to comment (especially in the new findings mentioned above). Then the CCT-RT tried to include some recommendations about that in the new findings report submitted in Nov 2017.</li></ol><div><b>(Comments chronology and archives)</b></div><div><ol><li>The initial draft enumerated 50 recommendations and we commented on that <a href="http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/comments-cct-rt-draft-report-07mar17/attachments/20170520/f90bb73f/CCTRTInitialDraftCommentsforNCSG.pdf" target="_blank">here</a>. </li><li>Then we had also commented on the (in-between) report highlighting the new findings and our comments are available in <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zvwTtxa4GGMll-OwAAqnuYYahxtff5qrOeMpUYPiuYQ/edit" target="_blank">this document</a>. </li><li>Our comment on the SADAG report is available <a href="http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/comments-sadag-final-09aug17/attachments/20171005/f9a4dc6b/StatisticalAnalysisofDNSAbuseingTLDsSADAGReportNCSGComment-0001.pdf" target="_blank">here</a>.</li></ol></div></div><div><br></div><div><b>(Current task)</b></div><div><br></div><div>The final version includes 35 recommendations versus 50 from the initial report. Our job is now to scrutinise those 35 recs, compare, and check to what extent they take our previous comments into account and recall them to the CCT-RT and ICANN board, If necessary. </div><div><br></div><div><b><u>Hint:</u></b>  It is possible to download only the initial and final recommendations from the pages above, those documents are briefer and shorter in term of number of pages and can read very quickly for comparison.</div><div><br></div><div>I wish you a good weekend.</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><div dir="auto" style="color:rgb(0,0,0);letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;text-decoration:none;word-wrap:break-word;line-break:after-white-spa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