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    <p>Hi Elsa,</p>
    <p>With the deadline still pending last week, I went ahead, printed
      off the 300 page report, and spent hours digging into it. I also
      participated in Subgroup 2 -- Legal and Regulatory -- and was
      dismayed by the lack of data, systematic analysis, or serious
      consideration of views other than those being directly represented
      by members of the subgroup (nearly all active members representing
      large, incumbent New gTLD Registries who want to register hundreds
      (or more) New gTLDs). <br>
    </p>
    <p>I remember our goals in the first Applicant Guidebook in the late
      2000's -- how excited we were to see Internationalized Domain
      Names, and our great hope that Applicants for New gTLDs would be
      from countries and regions underrepresented (and, in some cases,
      completely unrepresented) as registries in the existing (legacy)
      gTLDs. In this next round (or the many next rounds the SubPro
      Working Group envisions), I see many of these hopes being dashed
      and am very concerned. <br>
    </p>
    <p>The devil is in the details -- in the very procedural rules they
      are setting out. I am deeply concerned that with insufficient
      notice and guidance, smaller and more diverse entities will not be
      able to apply. I'm equally concerned that with no limits to
      applications, or even the proposed "first-come, first-served"
      system (which I'll rename "the all you can gobble" approach),
      there will be no time for the Global South to catch up --
      everything could well be given away by then.</p>
    <p>Extensive comments!  More can be added, particularly on the
      issues you and Bruna highlighted.  If you can link these
      principles and important discussion to specific sections of the
      Initial Report in which they are discussed, it will help to ensure
      that our comments, and your important thoughts, will receive the
      credit they deserve when comments are compiled by staff into a
      report.</p>
    <p>I'm out of the office for this last week of summer, but otherwise
      around. Best, Kathy<br>
    </p>
    <br>
    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 8/25/2018 8:53 PM, Elsa S wrote:<br>
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        <div dir="auto">Hi all,</div>
        <div dir="auto"><br>
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        <div dir="auto">Any chance we could meet this coming week to fix
          the document? I’ll touch base with Robin and maybe Kathy to
          see if they could join us to answer some of our questions on
          the doc. In the meantime, I’ll be reviewing the doc and seeing
          if we could add any further points.</div>
        <div dir="auto"><br>
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        <div dir="auto">Let me know if interested! I can set up a google
          doc.</div>
        <div dir="auto"><br>
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        <div dir="auto">E.</div>
        <div dir="auto">—</div>
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        <div class="gmail_quote">
          <div>On Thu, Aug 23, 2018 at 7:27 PM Rafik Dammak <<a
              href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com"
              moz-do-not-send="true">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>>
            wrote:<br>
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            <div>Thanks Farzaneh, that is good for us.
              <div>I touched base few days ago with Elsa and Bruna
                regarding the status of our draft and we are currently
                progressing.  I think Kathy is also helping for the
                review and Robin will be consulted too.</div>
              <div>as reminder we organized few weeks ago a NCSG webinar
                (<a
                  href="https://community.icann.org/display/gnsononcomstake/NCSG+Webinars"
                  target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">https://community.icann.org/display/gnsononcomstake/NCSG+Webinars</a>)
                on the report presented by Robin where she highlighted
                the most important and relevant topics for us, I advice
                everyone to listen to it. while the report is 300 pages
                (there are appendices etc), it can be easier to listen
                to the webinar and check the spreadsheet made by the WG
                with all the recommendations and questions organized by
                topic.</div>
              <div><br>
              </div>
              <div>Best,</div>
              <div><br>
              </div>
              <div>Rafik<br>
                <br>
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                  <div>Le ven. 24 août 2018 à 01:31, farzaneh badii <<a
                      href="mailto:farzaneh.badii@gmail.com"
                      target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">farzaneh.badii@gmail.com</a>>
                    a écrit :<br>
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                      <div style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">we got
                        some time for this huge document to comment on.
                        A big Phew.</div>
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                            <div><font face="verdana, sans-serif">Farzaneh
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                      <div class="gmail_quote">
                        <div>---------- Forwarded message ---------<br>
                          From: <strong class="gmail_sendername"
                            dir="auto">Emily Barabas</strong> <br>
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                                style="font-size:11pt">Dear Farzaneh,</span></p>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                style="font-size:11pt"> </span></p>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                style="font-size:11pt">We are writing to
                                let you know that the
                                <a
href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/gtld-subsequent-procedures-initial-2018-07-03-en"
                                  target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">
                                  public comment period</a> for the New
                                gTLD Subsequent Procedures PDP WG
                                Initial Report has been extended. Public
                                comments will now be accepted through
                                <b>26 September 2018</b>. Can you kindly
                                assist in sharing this information with
                                the relevant members of your group?</span></p>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                style="font-size:11pt"> </span></p>
                            <p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt"><span
                                style="color:black">Best regards,</span></p>
                            <p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt"><span
                                style="color:black">Cheryl Langdon-Orr
                                and Jeff Neuman (WG Co-Chairs)</span></p>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                style="font-size:11pt"> </span></p>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                style="font-size:11pt"> </span></p>
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                              <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
                                    style="color:black">From: </span></b><span
                                  style="color:black">Nathalie Peregrine
                                  <<a
                                    href="mailto:nathalie.peregrine@icann.org"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">nathalie.peregrine@icann.org</a>><br>
                                  <b>Date: </b>Wednesday, 4 July 2018
                                  at 04:50<br>
                                  <b>To: </b>farzaneh badii <<a
                                    href="mailto:farzaneh.badii@gmail.com"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">farzaneh.badii@gmail.com</a>><br>
                                  <b>Cc: </b>"<a
                                    href="mailto:jeff.neuman@comlaude.com"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">jeff.neuman@comlaude.com</a>"
                                  <<a
                                    href="mailto:jeff.neuman@comlaude.com"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">jeff.neuman@comlaude.com</a>>,
                                  Cheryl Langdon-Orr <<a
                                    href="mailto:langdonorr@gmail.com"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">langdonorr@gmail.com</a>>,
                                  Steve Chan <<a
                                    href="mailto:steve.chan@icann.org"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">steve.chan@icann.org</a>>,
                                  Julie Hedlund <<a
                                    href="mailto:julie.hedlund@icann.org"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">julie.hedlund@icann.org</a>>,
                                  Emily Barabas <<a
                                    href="mailto:emily.barabas@icann.org"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">emily.barabas@icann.org</a>>,
                                  Maryam Bakoshi <<a
                                    href="mailto:maryam.bakoshi@icann.org"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">maryam.bakoshi@icann.org</a>>,
                                  "<a href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">gnso-secs@icann.org</a>"
                                  <<a
                                    href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org"
                                    target="_blank"
                                    moz-do-not-send="true">gnso-secs@icann.org</a>><br>
                                  <b>Subject: </b>New gTLD Subsequent
                                  Procedures PDP WG Initial Report -
                                  Public Comment</span></p>
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                            <p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt"><span
                                style="color:black">Dear</span>
                              Farzaneh,
                            </p>
                            <p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt"> </p>
                            <p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt"><span
                                style="color:black">We write to you as
                                the Co-Chairs of the GNSO’s New gTLD
                                Subsequent Procedures Working Group
                                (WG), which is tasked with calling upon
                                the community’s collective experiences
                                from the 2012 New gTLD Program round to
                                consider potential changes that may be
                                needed to the existing 2007 Introduction
                                of New Generic Top-Level Domains policy
                                recommendations and implementation. We
                                are pleased to share that the Working
                                Group has reached an important milestone
                                by publishing its <a
href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.icann.org_public-2Dcomments_gtld-2Dsubsequent-2Dprocedures-2Dinitial-2D2018-2D07-2D03-2Den&d=DwMGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=PDd_FX3f4MVgkEIi9GHvVoUhbecsvLhgsyXrxgtbL10DTBs0i1jYiBM_uTSDzgqG&m=4gYyCwhtEI98RlWT6m_3FasU_W94CPJVbYvXvdaDxws&s=TwT7TfmDQ6Na2XFI7TKEFTn4pi5z-7JSXypjqAP6rRE&e="
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                                  Initial Report for Public Comment
                                  [icann.org]</a>. We would like to
                                strongly encourage you to review this
                                report and provide feedback through
                                public comment on the draft preliminary
                                recommendations, options, and questions
                                for community feedback. Your input is
                                essential to the success of this PDP.</span></p>
                            <p
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                              <b><span style="color:black">1. <span
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                                  </span>Background on the New gTLD
                                  Subsequent Procedures PDP WG</span></b></p>
                            <p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt"><span
                                style="color:black">The GNSO’s New gTLD
                                Subsequent Procedures Working Group
                                (WG), which was chartered by the GNSO
                                Council to conduct a Policy Development
                                Process (PDP), is seeking to determine
                                what, if any, changes may need to be
                                made to the existing</span><a
href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__gnso.icann.org_en_issues_new-2Dgtlds_pdp-2Ddec05-2Dfr-2Dparta-2D08aug07.htm&d=DwMGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=PDd_FX3f4MVgkEIi9GHvVoUhbecsvLhgsyXrxgtbL10DTBs0i1jYiBM_uTSDzgqG&m=4gYyCwhtEI98RlWT6m_3FasU_W94CPJVbYvXvdaDxws&s=fAYAOAlC7DqbvB0WyYMiIOXAkUC6kzqPgR62nsJhHCQ&e="
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                                </span><i><span
                                    style="color:rgb(17,85,204)">Introduction
                                    of New Generic Top-Level Domains</span></i>
                                [gnso.icann.org]</a><i><span
                                  style="color:black">
                                </span></i><span style="color:black">policy
                                recommendations from 8 August 2007 as
                                well as the final</span><a
href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__newgtlds.icann.org_en_applicants_agb&d=DwMGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=PDd_FX3f4MVgkEIi9GHvVoUhbecsvLhgsyXrxgtbL10DTBs0i1jYiBM_uTSDzgqG&m=4gYyCwhtEI98RlWT6m_3FasU_W94CPJVbYvXvdaDxws&s=iK3CVAc8mCe_CJRGZTBv2B_bDcoekw7F1Tg2uNLpbsI&e="
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                                </span><span
                                  style="color:rgb(17,85,204)">Applicant
                                  Guidebook</span> [newgtlds.icann.org]</a><span
                                style="color:black"> dated June 2012. As
                                the original policy recommendations as
                                adopted by the GNSO Council and ICANN
                                Board have “been designed to produce
                                systemized and ongoing mechanisms for
                                applicants to propose new top-level
                                domains,” those policy recommendations
                                remain in place for subsequent rounds of
                                the New gTLD Program unless the GNSO
                                Council would decide to modify those
                                policy recommendations via a policy
                                development process. The PDP WG created
                                5 Work Tracks that are responsible for
                                considering the subjects within its
                                charter. The PDP WG sought community
                                input through two community comment
                                periods. The Working Group has produced
                                its Initial Report, which includes
                                material from the full Working Group and
                                Work Tracks 1-4. Work Track 5, focused
                                on Geographic Names at the Top-Level,
                                was established later than the other
                                Work Tracks and will produce a separate
                                Initial Report.</span></p>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"> </p>
                            <p
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                              <b><span style="color:black">2. <span
class="m_-5051817785915982835gmail-m_2506395340310723665m_2047545855745330147apple-tab-span">  
                                  </span>Information about the Initial
                                  Report and the Public Comment</span></b></p>
                            <p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt"><span
                                style="color:black">The objective of
                                this Initial Report is to document the
                                Working Group’s deliberations on charter
                                issues and preliminary recommendations,
                                potential options for recommendations,
                                as well as specific questions for which
                                the Working Group is seeking input.
                                Given the large number of issues, and
                                the thousands of hours spent on
                                addressing the 2012 New gTLD Program and
                                improvements that can be made to the
                                program moving forward, unlike other
                                Initial Reports, this one does not
                                contain a “Statement of level of
                                consensus for the recommendations
                                presented in the Initial Report.” The
                                Co-Chairs not only believed that it was
                                premature to measure the level of
                                consensus of the Working Group members
                                of dozens of recommendations contained
                                within the Initial Report, but that
                                doing so could have the unintended
                                consequence of locking Working Group
                                members into positions of support or
                                opposition prior to soliciting public
                                comment from the community on those
                                recommendations. To form such definitive
                                positions at this early of a stage could
                                have the adverse effect of being less
                                open to modifications to those positions
                                as a result of community input.</span></p>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"> </p>
                            <p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt"><span
                                style="color:black">In addition, though
                                many of the preliminary recommendations
                                were generally agreed to by members that
                                participated in the different Work
                                Tracks, support has not been assessed
                                amongst the members of the overall
                                Working Group. The Overall Working Group
                                has not sought to form definitive
                                positions on each of these issues at
                                this stage. Therefore, any language in
                                this report that suggests that the
                                Working Group or any of its Work Tracks
                                is making a recommendation should be
                                read as merely a rough assessment by the
                                Working Group Co-Chairs or Work Track
                                leads.  </span></p>
                            <p class="MsoNormal"> </p>
                            <p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0.0001pt"><span
                                style="color:black">After a
                                comprehensive review of public comments
                                received on this report, the Working
                                Group will deliberate further on the
                                preliminary recommendations contained
                                within the Initial Report. It is
                                possible that as a result of the
                                deliberations, there may be supplemental
                                reports released by the Working Group
                                seeking additional public comments. Once
                                all of that is completed, the Co-Chairs
                                will conduct any formal consensus
                                call(s) at the plenary level, on all
                                recommendations before the Working Group
                                issues its Final Report. </span>
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                                style="color:black">Thank you for your
                                consideration of this request. We look
                                forward to any comments and any input
                                that you and the organization you Chair
                                are able to provide to our WG. While we
                                of course welcome input on any area of
                                the report, we would like to stress that
                                given the extensive number of topics and
                                preliminary outcomes, you should not
                                feel compelled to respond to every
                                single preliminary recommendation,
                                option, and question. If possible,
                                please submit your comments and input to
                                us by 5 September 2018 so that we may
                                fully consider it in our further
                                deliberations.</span></p>
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                                style="color:black">Best regards,</span></p>
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                                style="color:black">Cheryl Langdon-Orr
                                and Jeff Neuman (WG Co-Chairs)</span></p>
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