<html><head></head><body>I have no specific suggestions.<div class=""><br class=""/></div><div class="">If others do, please do share them.<br class=""/><div class=""><br class=""/></div><div class="">Many thanks, Ayden<br class=""/><div><br class=""/><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On 15 Aug 2018, at 18:51, Cláudio Lucena <<a href="mailto:claudiokilla@gmail.com" class="">claudiokilla@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"/><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class="">Thanks Ayden,<div class="">Did we have any specific suggestion as to the overlapping issue from the last question?</div><div class="">Cláudio<br clear="all" class=""/><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><p style="margin:0cm 0cm 0pt" class=""><span style="border-collapse:collapse;font-family:arial,sans-serif" class=""></span></p><div style="font-size:13px" class=""><font size="2" class="">--</font></div><div style="color:rgb(80,0,80);font-size:13px" class=""><div class=""><font color="#B42347" size="2" class="">Cláudio S. de Lucena Neto</font></div><div class=""><br class=""/></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;" class=""><img width="270" height="71" src="cid:image001.png@01D14C92.0E2E5A30" alt="cid:image001.png@01D03AE9.ED675EB0" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-size:14.6667px;line-height:16.8667px" class=""/><span style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-size:14.6667px;line-height:16.8667px" class=""> </span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;" class=""><span style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-size:14.6667px;line-height:16.8667px" class=""> </span><img width="149" height="58" src="cid:image002.jpg@01D14C92.0E2E5A30" alt="http://www.fd.lisboa.ucp.pt/site/resources/design/fdlogo-researchcenter.jpg" style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;font-size:14.6667px;line-height:16.8667px" class=""/><img src="https://docs.google.com/uc?export=download&id=0B5yKrIiEhsdaNmItdUtHWGRRdE0&revid=0B5yKrIiEhsdaZHJaVFRYWVJPcDdCNms2NXpGRVVveUIrT1QwPQ" width="200" height="67" class=""/></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;" class=""><span style="color:rgb(180,35,71);font-family:'Lucida Grande',Verdana,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:11px" class=""><br class=""/></span></div><div style="color:rgb(34,34,34);font-size:12.8px" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div style="font-size:13px;color:rgb(80,0,80)" class=""><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;" class=""><span style="color:rgb(180,35,71);font-family:"Lucida Grande",Verdana,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:11px" class="">Visiting Research Fellow</span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;" class=""><span style="color:rgb(180,35,71);font-family:"Lucida Grande",Verdana,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:11px" class="">The Center for Cyber, Law and Policy, University of <span class="">Haifa</span>, Israel</span></div></div></div></div></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;" class=""><span style="color:rgb(180,35,71);font-family:"Lucida Grande",Verdana,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:11px" class="">*</span><span style="color:rgb(180,35,71);font-family:"Lucida Grande",Verdana,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:11px" class="">*</span><br class=""/></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;" class=""><span style="color:rgb(180,35,71);font-family:'Lucida Grande',Verdana,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:11px" class="">PhD Candidate, Research Centre for the Future of Law</span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;" class=""><span style="color:rgb(180,35,71);font-family:'Lucida Grande',Verdana,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:11px" class="">Católica Global School of Law, </span><span style="color:rgb(180,35,71);font-family:'Lucida Grande',Verdana,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:11px" class="">Universidade Católica Portuguesa</span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;" class=""><span style="color:rgb(180,35,71);font-family:'Lucida Grande',Verdana,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:11px" class="">*</span></div><div style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;" class=""><span style="color:rgb(180,35,71);font-family:'Lucida Grande',Verdana,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:11px" class="">Researcher, </span><span style="color:rgb(180,35,71);font-family:'Lucida Grande',Verdana,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:11px" class="">Fundação para a Ciência e a Tecnologia</span></div><div style="color: rgb(34, 34, 34); 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I will take this forward to the SCBO mailing list at 15:00 UTC today, to allow a little extra time for further inputs.<div class=""><br class=""/></div><div class="">Best wishes, Ayden<br class=""/><div class=""><br class=""/><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On 15 Aug 2018, at 08:52, Tatiana Tropina <<a href="mailto:tatiana.tropina@gmail.com" target="_blank" class="">tatiana.tropina@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="m_8520675541299517667Apple-interchange-newline"/><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class="">Hi all,<div class="">I took the liberty to propose amendments to the sentence about ccNSO based on Rafik and Martin's comment and to another sentence about granular approach. Dunno if it's helpful. Thank a lot, Ayden!</div><div class="">Cheers,</div><div class="">Tanya </div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br class=""/><div class="gmail_quote">On 15 August 2018 at 08:08, Arsène Tungali <span dir="ltr" class=""><<a href="mailto:arsenebaguma@gmail.com" target="_blank" class="">arsenebaguma@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br class=""/><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="auto" class="">I too agree with the suggested answers and agree with both Rafik and Martin’s comments and suggested edits. With these included, the comment is ready to go!<br class=""/><br class=""/><div id="m_8520675541299517667m_-7546155953941118119AppleMailSignature" class=""><div class="">-----------------</div><div class="">Arsène Tungali,</div><div class=""><a href="http://about.me/ArseneTungali" target="_blank" class="">about.me/ArseneTungali</a></div><div class="">+243 993810967</div><div class="">GPG: 523644A0</div><div class="">Goma, Democratic Republic of Congo</div><div class=""><br class=""/></div>Sent from my iPhone (excuse typos)</div><div class=""><div class="m_8520675541299517667h5"><div class=""><br class=""/>On Aug 15, 2018, at 3:23 AM, Martin Pablo Silva Valent <<a href="mailto:mpsilvavalent@gmail.com" target="_blank" class="">mpsilvavalent@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br class=""/><br class=""/></div><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">I support the answers, I agree with Rafik on the collaboration with CCNSO, I would roll it out right away. Other than that go for it.<div class=""><br class=""/></div><div class="">Cheers,</div><div class="">Martín<br class=""/><div class=""><br class=""/><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On 14 Aug 2018, at 22:14, Rafik Dammak <<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" target="_blank" class="">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="m_8520675541299517667m_-7546155953941118119Apple-interchange-newline"/><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class="">Hi Ayden,<div class=""><br class=""/></div><div class="">Thanks for the reminder.</div><div class="">I made some comments on the draft.</div><div class=""><br class=""/></div><div class="">Best,</div><div class=""><br class=""/></div><div class="">Rafik</div><div class=""><br class=""/><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="">Le mer. 15 août 2018 à 01:41, Ayden Férdeline <<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" target="_blank" class="">icann@ferdeline.com</a>> a écrit :<br class=""/></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div class="">Dear all,<div class=""><br class=""/></div><div class="">The NCSG needs to provide input to the Council’s Standing Committee on Budget and Operations urgently.<div class=""><br class=""/></div><div class="">I have drafted a response in this Google Doc: <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VZD5r114eNS94Qh7Is1R9h_k8BXvcfcwFdFDSJK64tU/edit?usp=sharing" target="_blank" class="">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VZD5r114eNS94Qh7Is1R9h_k8BXvcfcwFdFDSJK64tU/edit?usp=sharing</a></div><div class=""><br class=""/></div><div class="">Can you please review and provide feedback <b class="">today</b> if possible, or tomorrow by the latest.</div><div class=""><br class=""/></div><div class="">Please note, this is not a formal comment opportunity, it will only inform the SCBO’s call for next Monday, whereby the SCBO will be drafting a letter to the GNSO Council.</div><div class=""><br class=""/></div><div class="">Kind regards,</div><div class=""><br class=""/></div><div class="">Ayden Férdeline</div></div></div>_______________________________________________<br class=""/>
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