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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">We are getting
railroaded towards the finish line here. Here is my latest.
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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">SP </font></font><br>
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<td>Re: [Epdp-dt] EPDP Scope</td>
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<td>Stephanie Perrin
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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Ok, I will surrender
to the will of the group (as usual). Just out of interest
though, who of you who said lets all trust in good faith are
planning to work on the EPDP? there is nothing like eating
your own cooking to improve the drive for perfection.....<br>
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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">The purpose of a
well scoped Charter and set of deliverables is to make the
task of the working group clear and simple. I humbly
submit, for the record, that we have left a number of vague
terms and timing criteria in there, and it may cause
problems later. A stitch in time saves nine, as the old
proverb says.</font></font></p>
<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Cheers Stephanie
Perrin</font></font><br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2018-07-17 08:11, Erika Mann
wrote:<br>
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<blockquote type="cite"
cite="mid:29DE116C-087E-41EC-9D1A-7BF578343351@erikamann.com">
<div><span></span></div>
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<div>This group is tasked with (a) difficult goal(s). I share
Pam's concern concerning a 'harmonized access' model but
this shouldn't prevent this group from starting the work. </div>
<div id="AppleMailSignature"><br>
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<div id="AppleMailSignature">As long as we keep in mind that
we're searching for a WHOIS (access) model that is workable
- and legally acceptable - in different jurisdictions, and
as long we don't become orthodox in our approaches, we
should be able to see a solid outcome emerging.</div>
<div id="AppleMailSignature"><br>
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<div id="AppleMailSignature">Heather, framed it well in her
last email:</div>
<div id="AppleMailSignature"><br>
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<div id="AppleMailSignature"><span
style="background-color:
 rgba(255, 255, 255, 0);">"We
need to resist the temptation of usurping the work of the
EPDP Team. If language is redundant, they will work around
it. If it is not perfect, we will empower them to refine,
and come back to Council with questions where necessary.
Let's get this team started, and see if these last minute
issues are truly obstacles to their work."</span></div>
<div id="AppleMailSignature"><br>
</div>
<div id="AppleMailSignature">Kind regards,</div>
<div id="AppleMailSignature">Erika <br>
<br>
Sent from my iPhone</div>
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On Jul 16, 2018, at 9:11 PM, Austin, Donna via Epdp-dt <<a
href="mailto:epdp-dt@icann.org" moz-do-not-send="true">epdp-dt@icann.org</a>>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Very
well said Heather. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">
Epdp-dt [<a href="mailto:epdp-dt-bounces@icann.org"
moz-do-not-send="true">mailto:epdp-dt-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Heather Forrest<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, July 16, 2018 5:43 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:Epdp-dt@icann.org"
moz-do-not-send="true">Epdp-dt@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Epdp-dt] EPDP Scope<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Colleagues,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">We have travelled a long
distance together, and the small group has worked
almost non-stop on the scope for nearly 2 weeks
now, up against work and family pressures and the
tantalising photos of others' summer family
holidays. The weight of the task is pushing us to
our limits, and it kills me to see the significant
efforts at compromise from Panama and the two
weeks since come undone in the final 3 days.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">We've said many times - but
I'll repeat it here as now it's urgent and very
real - that the community's perception of the
Council's ability to deliver on its Bylaws mandate
by running this EPDP is at stake on Thursday. If
we are unable to agree on the charter, there is a
live risk that Pandora's box opens. <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">We had a text that was fairly
stable as of Sunday, based on the timeline that we
agreed in the DT call last Wednesday. We need to
resist the temptation of usurping the work of the
EPDP Team. If language is redundant, they will
work around it. If it is not perfect, we will
empower them to refine, and come back to Council
with questions where necessary. Let's get this
team started, and see if these last minute issues
are truly obstacles to their work. If we do not
get them started, we may never find out. If you
are willing to work with the text we have as per
Keith's Sunday email and let the Team push
forward, now is the time to speak up.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Best wishes,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Heather<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Tue, Jul 17, 2018 at 8:21
AM, Pam Little <<a
href="mailto:pam.little@alibaba-inc.com"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">pam.little@alibaba-inc.com</a>>
wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Hi
Paul, </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Thank
you for the feedback. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black;background:white">To
me, the goal of the Temp Spec and this
EPDP effort is very simple: to comply with
the law. </span>"Avoid the fragmentation
of WHOIS" or <span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black;background:white">the
idea of harmonization </span>as a premise
or goal is fundamentally flawed. As you
know, there is already fragmentation of
WHOIS in the cc world. As far as I know, .JP
does not even have a WHOIS service. <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal">More importantly, I would
like to point out the latest guidance<span
style="font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif"> </span>regarding
Codes of Conduct and Accreditation in <span
style="font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">the EDPB letter </span><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black;border:none

windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0in">(see page 6 </span><span
style="font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif"><a
href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.icann.org_en_system_files_correspondence_jelinek-2Dto&d=DwMFaQ&c=MOptNlVtIETeDALC_lULrw&r=CwipU91YB6EkpFXK9ynnT_QUef4yC5p7jpsDm8cU97g&m=wQW2DCZFumEvcBcjrLYjWHhNX_WnA3nWfj5ZdnjZDak&s=rZ0OyCS9JwuSdabv4b6EZcmL-H0wrXCUaiB5LqM6zRI&e="
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;color:purple">https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/correspondence/jelinek-to</span></a></span><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black;border:none

windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0in">-</span><span
class="m1143864745865829759spellchecktypo"><span
style="font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">marby</span></span><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black;border:none

windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0in">-05jul18-en.</span><span
class="m1143864745865829759spellchecktypo"><span
style="font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">pdf</span></span><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black;border:none

windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0in">).
Specifically: </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">1.
<span
class="m1143864745865829759spellchecktypo">Cer</span></span>tification
and/or accreditation are voluntary measures,
not mandatory.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal">2. T<span
style="font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">he
responsibility for designing a model that
will provide the assurance [of compliance
with the GDPR] is, in the first instance,
up to the data controllers.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black;background:white">The
previous langauge and your latest
suggested language pre-suppose there
should be a "</span><span
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Light",sans-serif;color:black;border:none
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1.0pt;padding:0in;background:white">community-wide
model for access or similar framework"</span><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black;border:none

windowtext

1.0pt;padding:0in;background:white">,
which in my view, is inconsistent with the
above guidance.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">I
hope this explains my thinking for my
proposed edits.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Kind
regards,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Pam</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Sender:Drazek,
Keith <<a
href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">kdrazek@verisign.com</a>></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Sent
at:2018 Jul 17 (Tue) 01:58</span><o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black"><a
href="mailto:To%3APMcGrady@winston.com" target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">To:PMcGrady@winston.com</a>
<<a
href="mailto:PMcGrady@winston.com"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">PMcGrady@winston.com</a>>;
PAMELA LITTLE <<a
href="mailto:pam.little@alibaba-inc.com"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">pam.little@alibaba-inc.com</a>>;
<a href="mailto:Epdp-dt@icann.org"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">Epdp-dt@icann.org</a>
<<a href="mailto:Epdp-dt@icann.org"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">Epdp-dt@icann.org</a>>;
<a
href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">marika.konings@icann.org</a>
<<a
href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">marika.konings@icann.org</a>></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Subject:RE:
[Epdp-dt] EPDP Scope</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Hi
Pam and Paul,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Attached
is an updated version incorporating
Pam’s edits and responding to her
questions. I incorporated Paul’s
suggested language below for Section
J. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Keith<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><b>From:</b>
McGrady, Paul D. <<a
href="mailto:PMcGrady@winston.com"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">PMcGrady@winston.com</a>>
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, July 16, 2018
7:37 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Pam Little <<a
href="mailto:pam.little@alibaba-inc.com"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">pam.little@alibaba-inc.com</a>>;
<a href="mailto:Epdp-dt@icann.org"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">Epdp-dt@icann.org</a>;
<a
href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">
marika.konings@icann.org</a>;
Drazek, Keith <<a
href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">kdrazek@verisign.com</a>><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [EXTERNAL] RE:
[Epdp-dt] EPDP Scope<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D">Hi Pam,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D">Thank you for
your proposed edits. However, I do
think that they eliminate an
important concept that we were
trying to get at and would prefer
the question revert to its previous
formulation.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D">If the DT
decides to eliminate the concept of
reconciliation/avoiding an
unharmonized approach, I still think
your proposed changes need some
work.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D">If we change
to “Can the obligation to provide
“reasonable access” be clarified or
defined…” I think that leads us down
the wrong path. J1 already focuses
on clarifying and defining
reasonable access. I think we could
ask “Can the obligation to provide
“reasonable access” be further
clarified and/or better defined
through the implementation of a
community-wide model…” We lose the
idea of harmonization, which was the
purpose of the question in the first
place, but ultimately those working
on the answer will hopefully take
into account issues that would tend
to bring a discordant result and try
to avoid those outcomes.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D">So, Keith, we
would prefer that the question
revert. If we can’t get that, we
would be OK with:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D">“Can the
obligation to provide “reasonable
access” be further clarified and/or
better defined through the
implementation of a </span><span
style="font-family:"Calibri

Light",sans-serif">community-wide
model for access or similar
framework which takes into account
at least the following elements:”</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D">Best to all,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D">Paul</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><b>From:</b>
Epdp-dt [<a
href="mailto:epdp-dt-bounces@icann.org"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">mailto:epdp-dt-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Pam Little<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, July 16, 2018
1:50 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a
href="mailto:Epdp-dt@icann.org"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">Epdp-dt@icann.org</a>;
<a
href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">marika.konings@icann.org</a>;
Drazek, Keith <<a
href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">kdrazek@verisign.com</a>><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Epdp-dt] EPDP
Scope<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Hi
Keith</span><o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Many
thanks to you and the small
drafting team for the "final"
draft. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Because
of time zone differences, I have
not had an opportunity to
discuss this with my RrSG
councillors or RrSG members but,
in the interest fo time, I have
made some suggested edits and
queries to the final draft. Most
of them are intended to correct
minor errors or add more clarity
and consistency so I hope they
are not controversial, except
perhaps </span>my proposed
change to J2 below:<o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
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<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;line-height:12.75pt;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start"><span
style="font-size:11.5pt;color:black">"J2) Can the obligation to provide
“reasonable access” be </span><span
style="font-size:11.5pt;color:red">clarified or defined</span><span
style="font-size:11.5pt;color:black"> <s>reconciled
with the objective of
avoiding, to the extent
possible, an unharmonized
approach to third-party access
to registration data, ,</s>
without the implementation of a
community-wide model for access
or similar framework which takes
into account at least the
following elements:"</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;background:white"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">It
seems to me neither the
langauge in the previous draft
(re <span style="border:none
windowtext

1.0pt;padding:0in">fragmentation </span>of
WHOIS) nor the final draft was
helpful hence my proposed
change to try to make it more
neutral. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">I
also have a question regarding
the last paragraph in the final
draft:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start"><em><span
style="font-size:11.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">"The
EPDP Team shall respect the </span></em><span
class="m1143864745865829759spellchecktypo"><i><span
style="font-size:11.5pt;color:black">timelines</span></i></span><em><span
style="font-size:11.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">
and deliverables as outlined
in Annex A and A-1 of the
ICANN Bylaws and the EPDP
Manual. As per the GNSO EPDP
Working Group Guidelines, the
EPDP Team shall develop a work
plan that outlines the
necessary steps and expected
timing in order to achieve the
milestones of the EPDP as set
out in Annex A and A-1 of the
ICANN Bylaws and the EPDP
Manual and submit this to the
GNSO Council. Any significant
updates to the work plan are
expected to be communicated in
a timely manner to the GNSO
Council with an explanation as
to why the work plan needed
adjustment." </span></em><o:p></o:p></p>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">The
final draft Charter has set <span
class="m1143864745865829759spellchecktypo">timelines</span> for <span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black;background:white">Deliverable
2. Is the EPDP Team expected to
develop a work plan for all
three deliverables? </span><o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Kind
regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
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<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Pam<o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
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<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">------------------------------------------------------------------</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Sender:Drazek,
Keith via Epdp-dt <<a
href="mailto:epdp-dt@icann.org"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">epdp-dt@icann.org</a>></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Sent
at:2018 Jul 16 (Mon) 13:08</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black"><a
href="mailto:To%3AEpdp-dt@icann.org" target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">To:Epdp-dt@icann.org</a>
<<a
href="mailto:Epdp-dt@icann.org"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">Epdp-dt@icann.org</a>>;
<a
href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">marika.konings@icann.org</a>
<<a
href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">marika.konings@icann.org</a>></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:black">Subject:[Epdp-dt]
EPDP Scope</span><o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Hello
again everyone….<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Now
attached is the final draft of the
EPDP WG Charter scope section for
your review and our vote on the 19<sup>th</sup>.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">I
have attached the redline version
(against the version circulate to
the DT last Wednesday) and the clean
version.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Thanks
for your patience and for the
constructive input of all parties.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Keith<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><b>From:</b>
Drazek, Keith <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Sunday, July 15,
2018 10:28 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Drazek, Keith <<a
href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com" target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">kdrazek@verisign.com</a>><br>
<b>Cc:</b> <a
href="mailto:Epdp-dt@icann.org"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">Epdp-dt@icann.org</a>;
<a
href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">marika.konings@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [EXTERNAL]
[Epdp-dt] EPDP Scope<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Hi
all. Please wait before reviewing.
I may have jumped the gun and we
may have more suggested edits
incoming from NCSG.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Keith<o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
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<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;margin-bottom:12.0pt"><br>
On Jul 15, 2018, at 8:44 AM,
Drazek, Keith via Epdp-dt <<a
href="mailto:epdp-dt@icann.org"
target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">epdp-dt@icann.org</a>>
wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Hi
all,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">As
discussed on <span
class="m1143864745865829759spellchecktypo">Wednesday’s</span>
EPDP Drafting Team call, attached
is the final draft of the EPDP
charter scope section. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">I
received a few suggested edits
from Stephanie and <span
class="m1143864745865829759spellchecktypo">Darcy</span>
and did my best to
incorporate/address them. The
small group has reviewed and
agreed this is ready for approval
at the 19 July Council meeting.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Thanks
to everyone for your contributions
to this effort.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"> <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Keith<o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><Updated
Scope Section 15 July 2018 --
Consolidated Edits.<span
class="m1143864745865829759spellchecktypo">docx</span>><o:p></o:p></p>
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<div>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><Updated
Scope Section 15 July 2018 --
Consolidated Edits CLEAN.<span
class="m1143864745865829759spellchecktypo">docx</span>><o:p></o:p></p>
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