<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Stephanie</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Do you mean that the SP edits were not incorporated in Keith's doc (I don't have Keith's doc on 15 July, only 14)? and why on earth are all the IPC questions incorporated but Darcy's clarification was not? </div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Stephanie, you probably need to comment on this doc on behalf of NCSG and not just SP edits. </div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">And this small group has two members from IPC/BC and you and Keith? </div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Does this final draft go to the council for discussion? </div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div><font face="verdana, sans-serif">Farzaneh </font></div></div></div></div><br></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr">On Sun, Jul 15, 2018 at 9:31 AM Stephanie Perrin <<a href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca">stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<p>I am forwarding this new version received from Keith yesterday.
Please do not edit the documents he sent. I also attach my edits
on his document...hard to keep track of this document, I found a
bunch of new things to object to, and cannot tell anymore whether
I already commented and was ignored, or what. It is called July 15
version, v2spedits. Please get back to me asap with further
comments, Keith is working on it today....</p>
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<p>Cheers Steph<br>
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<td>Updated Scope for Review</td>
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<td>Drazek, Keith <a class="m_-1245605103516673548moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com" target="_blank"><kdrazek@verisign.com></a></td>
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<a class="m_-1245605103516673548moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:haforrestesq@gmail.com" target="_blank"><haforrestesq@gmail.com></a>, <a class="m_-1245605103516673548moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" target="_blank">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Hi Paul, Stephanie and Susan,<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Attached is the updated scope document for
your review. I have attached a redline version, a clean
version, and the two sets of comments received from Stephanie
and Darcy, both of which I’ve attempted to incorporate.<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><br>
The one comment from Darcy that I did not incorporate was a
request to be more explicit about the timing of initiating
discussions on an Access Model – to be at the time of
publication of the Initial Report, rather than a less explicit
trigger of answering the gating questions. You can see her
comments in the attached. <u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Otherwise, I think the edits are good and
do not substantially or materially impact the previous draft.
Please note any concerns, issues or suggested edits ASAP so we
can send the final stable draft to the DT by Sunday night.<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">I’m hoping this is our last pass at this!<u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thanks in advance,<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Keith<u></u><u></u></p>
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