<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Text is not missing. I just copy-pasted the text from ICANN document and turned out to be weird which I will fix and try to finalize it more assertively. </div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">The staggering review is a very bad idea. there is a risk that ICANN org and Board will pick and choose. It does not allow more than two reviews concurrently and if an organization or a group is really in need of being reviewed it will be postponed and checks and balances against them wont be in place. mind you that if reviews of a group is ongoing they are mindful about their accountability. Like NomCom review became essential in changing NomCom behavior. </div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I suggest adding timing criteria for the reasons I stated in the public comment. </div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Best </div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div><font face="verdana, sans-serif">Farzaneh </font></div></div></div></div><br></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr">On Tue, Jul 10, 2018 at 9:11 AM Kathy Kleiman <<a href="mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com">kathy@kathykleiman.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<p>Hi All, Agree with Ayden that there is text missing from this
comment -- and it means that I (others?) don't (won't) understand
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<p>The following recommendation of ICANN.org, I think, makes sense:
"Staggering the reviews to have no more than one Specific Review
and two Organizational Reviews running concurrently." Given two
PDP Working Groups, one EPDP, and much more taking place in ICANN
and the GNSO, I think this staggering makes sense and will help us
in finding good people to join these reviews. <br>
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maybe it is my device (I am on a train and trying to view and
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