<div dir="ltr">Hi,<div><br></div><div>thanks, Stephanie for sharing this draft.</div><div>indeed all those gating questions are of concerns and will impact the EPDP progress. Adding the accredited access model to the EPDP defacto make it longer than planned even if the team delivers the first final report for the temporary spec part. That goes beyond the planned 6 months and I don't think it is doable or can be acceptable to have an intense team like the envisioned EPDP to be asked to figure out the access model too. I don't know if the same volunteers or participants have the same background and knowledge on the 2 different issues.</div><div>that should be treated by a separate team while we can argue about the gating questions and which can be treated by the EPDP team. We can suggest that the staggered phase can be started with some conditions TBD and not automatically. those questions and responses can be approved separately from the rest of other recommendations in the 1st final report.</div><div><br></div><div>Best,</div><div><br></div><div>Rafik</div><div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr">Le mar. 10 juil. 2018 à 05:38, Stephanie Perrin <<a href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca">stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca</a>> a écrit :<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<p>I am not very happy with the "small team" efforts. My comments
are being ignored (surprise surprise) and the BC/IPC is being
permitted to do back room drafting with staff, after coming in at
the last minute (7 minutes to our meeting time) with new
language. I wanted that paragraph thrown out wholesale....</p>
<p>And the questions are not all legit, and if the answers to the
gating questions are not approved by the community, no matter, we
go on regardless.</p>
<p>please take a minute to think about this mess, we are being
driven by artificial deadlines to finish and agree.</p>
<p>steph<br>
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<td>Updated scope section document + notes from today's EPDP
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<td>Caitlin Tubergen <a class="m_6389885195010698452moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:caitlin.tubergen@icann.org" target="_blank"><caitlin.tubergen@icann.org></a></td>
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<td>Drazek, Keith <a class="m_6389885195010698452moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com" target="_blank"><kdrazek@verisign.com></a>, Susan
Kawaguchi <a class="m_6389885195010698452moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:susankpolicy@gmail.com" target="_blank"><susankpolicy@gmail.com></a>,
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<a class="m_6389885195010698452moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" target="_blank"><rafik.dammak@gmail.com></a>, Heather Forrest
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Marika Konings <a class="m_6389885195010698452moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org" target="_blank"><marika.konings@icann.org></a></td>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Hi Team, <u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><u></u> <u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Following
our call today, Donna and I have been working on the Google
Doc from this morning’s EPDP Scope call. <u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><u></u> <u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Here are the
changes we made:<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> <u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0in"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Based on the
comments from Paul and others regarding the difficulty of
tracking comments in Google docs to the text, I inserted
proposed text into the body of the document where the
commenter is proposing it should go. All proposed text is
denoted by <i><span style="background:yellow">italics
and highlighted in yellow</span></i> for ease of
reference. I’m hoping that will make it easier to discuss
on the call by zeroing in on highlighted text. <u></u><u></u></span></li>
<li class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0in"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">I have removed
references to phases and inserted references to gating
questions. This text has been highlighted in <span style="background:yellow">yellow</span>
to note that it has been changed. <u></u><u></u></span></li>
<li class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0in"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Proposed gating
questions have their numbering highlighted in <span style="background:lime">green</span>.
There may be other gating questions, but I highlighted the
originally-proposed gating questions as a starting point.<u></u><u></u></span></li>
<li class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0in"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Donna and I
added some comments on what the group appeared to converge
on during today’s call. <u></u><u></u></span></li>
<li class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0in"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Lastly, I
attached the notes from today’s call in case you find
these helpful as you’re going through the document. <u></u><u></u></span></li>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> <u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Here is the
link to the Google Doc: <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TlcnfYuRhrCKVB28Rvb_ra6mCIWvjUDnJyJhSjbG5_Q/edit" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TlcnfYuRhrCKVB28Rvb_ra6mCIWvjUDnJyJhSjbG5_Q/edit</a><u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><u></u> <u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Thank you,
and please let me know if there is anything I can do to
assist in your review of the document.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><u></u> <u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Kind
regards,<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><br>
Caitlin<u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><u></u> <u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span><u></u> <u></u></span></p>
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