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<p>There is, unfortunately, precedent for this conduct... we've seen
it before and fought it before. Tx you for fighting it now. <br>
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<p>Kathy<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 7/10/2018 5:51 AM, Ayden Férdeline
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<div>This is outrageous; when Stephanie submits a redlined
document, it is too difficult for ICANN staff to consider and
she must start a fresh, adding the comments manually into the
Google Doc that didn't exist in the first place and necessitated
making the comments in Word (because Marika refused initially to
enable comments on the Google Doc, despite repeated requests
from Rubens, as she wanted to be the gatekeeper). Now the IPC
sends in a redlined document and every single comment is added
by staff into the document. My edits were all rejected by Marika
last week. This is not fair, and I think we should formally
complain about this. We need to start documenting staff bias.<br>
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<div> On 9 July 2018 10:38 PM, Stephanie Perrin
<a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca"><stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca></a> wrote:<br>
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<p>I am not very happy with the "small team" efforts. My
comments are being ignored (surprise surprise) and the BC/IPC
is being permitted to do back room drafting with staff, after
coming in at the last minute (7 minutes to our meeting time)
with new language. I wanted that paragraph thrown out
wholesale....<br>
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<p>And the questions are not all legit, and if the answers to
the gating questions are not approved by the community, no
matter, we go on regardless.<br>
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<p>please take a minute to think about this mess, we are being
driven by artificial deadlines to finish and agree.<br>
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<p>steph<br>
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<td>Updated scope section document + notes from today's
EPDP scope call<br>
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<th nowrap="nowrap" valign="BASELINE" align="RIGHT">Date:<br>
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<td>Mon, 9 Jul 2018 20:08:28 +0000<br>
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<td>Caitlin Tubergen <a
href="mailto:caitlin.tubergen@icann.org"
class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" moz-do-not-send="true"><caitlin.tubergen@icann.org></a><br>
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<td>Drazek, Keith <a href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com"
class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" moz-do-not-send="true"><kdrazek@verisign.com></a>,
Susan Kawaguchi <a
href="mailto:susankpolicy@gmail.com"
class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" moz-do-not-send="true"><susankpolicy@gmail.com></a>,
<a href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca"
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moz-do-not-send="true">stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca</a>
<a href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca"
class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" moz-do-not-send="true"><stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca></a>,
Donna Austin <a
href="mailto:donna.austin@team.neustar"
class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" moz-do-not-send="true"><donna.austin@team.neustar></a>,
<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com"
class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated"
moz-do-not-send="true">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a> <a
href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com"
class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" moz-do-not-send="true"><rafik.dammak@gmail.com></a>,
Heather Forrest <a
href="mailto:haforrestesq@gmail.com"
class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" moz-do-not-send="true"><haforrestesq@gmail.com></a>,
<a href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org"
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moz-do-not-send="true">gnso-secs@icann.org</a> <a
href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org"
class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" moz-do-not-send="true"><gnso-secs@icann.org></a>,
Paul McGrady (Google Docs) <a
href="mailto:d+MTE3MzIyNzA1MjYyOTU3ODM2OTY2-MTE1MTM1NDA5ODg5NTEyMTUyMzA5@docs.google.com"
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Marika Konings <a
href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org"
class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" moz-do-not-send="true"><marika.konings@icann.org></a><br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span class="size"
style="font-size:11pt">Hi Team, </span><br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span class="size"
style="font-size:11pt">Following our call today, Donna
and I have been working on the Google Doc from this
morning’s EPDP Scope call. </span><br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span class="size"
style="font-size:11pt">Here are the changes we made:</span><br>
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<li style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"
class="MsoNormal"><span class="size"
style="font-size:11pt">Based on the comments from Paul
and others regarding the difficulty of tracking
comments in Google docs to the text, I inserted
proposed text into the body of the document where the
commenter is proposing it should go. All proposed
text is denoted by <i><span class="highlight"
style="background-color:yellow">italics and
highlighted in yellow</span></i> for ease of
reference. I’m hoping that will make it easier to
discuss on the call by zeroing in on highlighted
text. </span><br>
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<li style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"
class="MsoNormal"><span class="size"
style="font-size:11pt">I have removed references to
phases and inserted references to gating questions.
This text has been highlighted in <span
class="highlight" style="background-color:yellow">yellow</span>
to note that it has been changed. </span><br>
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<li style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"
class="MsoNormal"><span class="size"
style="font-size:11pt">Proposed gating questions have
their numbering highlighted in <span class="highlight"
style="background-color:lime">green</span>. There
may be other gating questions, but I highlighted the
originally-proposed gating questions as a starting
point.</span><br>
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<li style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"
class="MsoNormal"><span class="size"
style="font-size:11pt">Donna and I added some comments
on what the group appeared to converge on during
today’s call. </span><br>
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<li style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"
class="MsoNormal"><span class="size"
style="font-size:11pt">Lastly, I attached the notes
from today’s call in case you find these helpful as
you’re going through the document. </span><br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span class="size"
style="font-size:11pt">Here is the link to the Google
Doc: <a
href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TlcnfYuRhrCKVB28Rvb_ra6mCIWvjUDnJyJhSjbG5_Q/edit"
moz-do-not-send="true">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TlcnfYuRhrCKVB28Rvb_ra6mCIWvjUDnJyJhSjbG5_Q/edit</a></span><br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span class="size"
style="font-size:11pt">Thank you, and please let me know
if there is anything I can do to assist in your review
of the document.</span><br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span class="size"
style="font-size:11pt">Kind regards,</span><br>
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Caitlin</span></p>
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