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<p>I am not very happy with the "small team" efforts. My comments
are being ignored (surprise surprise) and the BC/IPC is being
permitted to do back room drafting with staff, after coming in at
the last minute (7 minutes to our meeting time) with new
language. I wanted that paragraph thrown out wholesale....</p>
<p>And the questions are not all legit, and if the answers to the
gating questions are not approved by the community, no matter, we
go on regardless.</p>
<p>please take a minute to think about this mess, we are being
driven by artificial deadlines to finish and agree.</p>
<p>steph<br>
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<td>Updated scope section document + notes from today's EPDP
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<td>Mon, 9 Jul 2018 20:08:28 +0000</td>
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<td>Caitlin Tubergen <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:caitlin.tubergen@icann.org"><caitlin.tubergen@icann.org></a></td>
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<td>Drazek, Keith <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com"><kdrazek@verisign.com></a>, Susan
Kawaguchi <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:susankpolicy@gmail.com"><susankpolicy@gmail.com></a>,
<a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca">stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca</a>
<a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca"><stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca></a>, Donna Austin
<a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:donna.austin@team.neustar"><donna.austin@team.neustar></a>, <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>
<a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com"><rafik.dammak@gmail.com></a>, Heather Forrest
<a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:haforrestesq@gmail.com"><haforrestesq@gmail.com></a>, <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org">gnso-secs@icann.org</a>
<a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org"><gnso-secs@icann.org></a>, Paul McGrady (Google Docs)
<a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:d+MTE3MzIyNzA1MjYyOTU3ODM2OTY2-MTE1MTM1NDA5ODg5NTEyMTUyMzA5@docs.google.com"><d+MTE3MzIyNzA1MjYyOTU3ODM2OTY2-MTE1MTM1NDA5ODg5NTEyMTUyMzA5@docs.google.com></a>,
Marika Konings <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org"><marika.konings@icann.org></a></td>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Hi Team, <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Following
our call today, Donna and I have been working on the Google
Doc from this morning’s EPDP Scope call. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Here are the
changes we made:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0
level1 lfo1"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Based on the
comments from Paul and others regarding the difficulty of
tracking comments in Google docs to the text, I inserted
proposed text into the body of the document where the
commenter is proposing it should go. All proposed text is
denoted by <i><span
style="background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">italics
and highlighted in yellow</span></i> for ease of
reference. I’m hoping that will make it easier to discuss
on the call by zeroing in on highlighted text. <o:p></o:p></span></li>
<li class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0
level1 lfo1"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">I have removed
references to phases and inserted references to gating
questions. This text has been highlighted in <span
style="background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">yellow</span>
to note that it has been changed. <o:p></o:p></span></li>
<li class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0
level1 lfo1"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Proposed gating
questions have their numbering highlighted in <span
style="background:lime;mso-highlight:lime">green</span>.
There may be other gating questions, but I highlighted the
originally-proposed gating questions as a starting point.<o:p></o:p></span></li>
<li class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0
level1 lfo1"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Donna and I
added some comments on what the group appeared to converge
on during today’s call. <o:p></o:p></span></li>
<li class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0
level1 lfo1"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Lastly, I
attached the notes from today’s call in case you find
these helpful as you’re going through the document. <o:p></o:p></span></li>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Here is the
link to the Google Doc: <a
href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TlcnfYuRhrCKVB28Rvb_ra6mCIWvjUDnJyJhSjbG5_Q/edit"
moz-do-not-send="true">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TlcnfYuRhrCKVB28Rvb_ra6mCIWvjUDnJyJhSjbG5_Q/edit</a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Thank you,
and please let me know if there is anything I can do to
assist in your review of the document.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Kind
regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><br>
Caitlin<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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