<div dir="ltr">Hi Ayden,<div><br></div><div>I don't know which edits not reinstated but when checking the google doc (EDPD Leadership Comments Table based on what you forwared) right now I can see edits you made. unless you mean another document?</div><div><br></div><div>Best,</div><div><br></div><div>Rafik<br><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr">Le ven. 6 juil. 2018 à 14:41, Ayden Férdeline <<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com">icann@ferdeline.com</a>> a écrit :<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div>No, I think they were not reinstated. </div>
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<div>I don’t see how this is easier for anyone. I haven’t reviewed all of the documents to see if others edits were rejected, too — but I do think we should be marking up the text instead, as it is this easier for everyone to know what proposal is
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<div>All of my edits were rejected. Good luck to everyone else who spends their afternoon reviewing the 8 different Google Docs. I hope some of you edits are accepted...</div>
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<div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><strong style="font-size:13px;font-weight:bolder;color:#777">Ayden Férdeline</strong>
<p style="margin:0"><span class="notranslate" style="font-size:13px;font-weight:normal;color:#777"></span>
</p>
<div style="font-size:13px;color:#333"><span style="font-weight:bold">Replace:</span> <span style="white-space:pre-line;color:#777;font-style:italic">"in"</span> with <span style="white-space:pre-line;color:#777;font-style:italic">"on calls in their official"</span>
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<div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><strong style="font-size:13px;font-weight:bolder;color:#222">Marika Konings</strong>
<p style="margin:0"><span style="font-size:13px;font-weight:normal;color:#222"><i>Rejected suggestion</i></span>
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<div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><strong style="font-size:13px;font-weight:bolder;color:#777">Ayden Férdeline</strong>
<p style="margin:0"><span class="notranslate" style="font-size:13px;font-weight:normal;color:#777"></span>
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<div style="font-size:13px;color:#333"><span style="font-weight:bold">Delete:</span> <span style="white-space:pre-line;color:#777;font-style:italic">"ing"</span>
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<div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><strong style="font-size:13px;font-weight:bolder;color:#222">Marika Konings</strong>
<p style="margin:0"><span style="font-size:13px;font-weight:normal;color:#222"><i>Rejected suggestion</i></span>
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<div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><strong style="font-size:13px;font-weight:bolder;color:#777">Ayden Férdeline</strong>
<p style="margin:0"><span class="notranslate" style="font-size:13px;font-weight:normal;color:#777"></span>
</p>
<div style="font-size:13px;color:#333"><span style="font-weight:bold">Replace:</span> <span style="white-space:pre-line;color:#777;font-style:italic">"make it explicitly clear when he/she is"</span> with
<span style="white-space:pre-line;color:#777;font-style:italic">"channel such comments through the representatives of his or her Stakeholder Group, and to only"</span>
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<div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><strong style="font-size:13px;font-weight:bolder;color:#222">Marika Konings</strong>
<p style="margin:0"><span style="font-size:13px;font-weight:normal;color:#222"><i>Rejected suggestion</i></span>
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<div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><strong style="font-size:13px;font-weight:bolder;color:#777">Ayden Férdeline</strong>
<p style="margin:0"><span class="notranslate" style="font-size:13px;font-weight:normal;color:#777"></span>
</p>
<div style="font-size:13px;color:#333"><span style="font-weight:bold">Replace:</span> <span style="white-space:pre-line;color:#777;font-style:italic">","</span> with <span style="white-space:pre-line;color:#777;font-style:italic">";"</span>
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<div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><strong style="font-size:13px;font-weight:bolder;color:#222">Marika Konings</strong>
<p style="margin:0"><span style="font-size:13px;font-weight:normal;color:#222"><i>Rejected suggestion</i></span>
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<div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><strong style="font-size:13px;font-weight:bolder;color:#777">Ayden Férdeline</strong>
<p style="margin:0"><span class="notranslate" style="font-size:13px;font-weight:normal;color:#777"></span>
</p>
<div style="font-size:13px;color:#333"><span style="font-weight:bold">Replace:</span> <span style="white-space:pre-line;color:#777;font-style:italic">"/"</span> with <span style="white-space:pre-line;color:#777;font-style:italic">"or"</span>
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<div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><strong style="font-size:13px;font-weight:bolder;color:#222">Marika Konings</strong>
<p style="margin:0"><span style="font-size:13px;font-weight:normal;color:#222"><i>Rejected suggestion</i></span>
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<img src="https://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-tPjIMrOjo6o/AAAAAAAAAAI/AAAAAAAABAk/jecTEr_k9oA/s96-k-no/photo.jpg" style="height:48px;width:48px" alt="Ayden Férdeline">
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<div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><strong style="font-size:13px;font-weight:bolder;color:#777">Ayden Férdeline</strong>
<p style="margin:0"><span class="notranslate" style="font-size:13px;font-weight:normal;color:#777"></span>
</p>
<div style="font-size:13px;color:#333"><span style="font-weight:bold">Replace:</span> <span style="white-space:pre-line;color:#777;font-style:italic">"/"</span> with <span style="white-space:pre-line;color:#777;font-style:italic">"or"</span>
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<img src="https://ssl.gstatic.com/s2/profiles/images/silhouette96.png" style="height:48px;width:48px" alt="Marika Konings">
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<div style="display:inline-block;padding:0 15px 0 0;font-size:13px;line-height:18px;width:100%"><strong style="font-size:13px;font-weight:bolder;color:#222">Marika Konings</strong>
<p style="margin:0"><span style="font-size:13px;font-weight:normal;color:#222"><i>Rejected suggestion</i></span>
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