<div>Thanks Rafik. I have now shared the comment on the NCSG Discuss list for further community input. </div>
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<div>Despite being shared on our list for six weeks it is disappointing some people subscribed to this list waited until the very moment it went to the Discuss list to raise their concerns with the comment. </div>
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<p>Okay, the clocks start ticking for me - 23 hours.
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