<div>Hi all,<br></div><div><br></div><div>Just a reminder, we have two weeks until this public comment window closes. We need to share this with members soon for their input as well. Please can you review the comment and advise when it can be shared on the NCSG list. Thanks!<br></div><div><br></div><div><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FEWgze1lVbMlB5if0EnfZE2BxGreHoQ6SKaj6ya7sZY/edit?usp=sharing" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FEWgze1lVbMlB5if0EnfZE2BxGreHoQ6SKaj6ya7sZY/edit?usp=sharing</a><br></div><div><br></div><div>Best,</div><div><br></div><div class="protonmail_signature_block"><div class="protonmail_signature_block-user"><div>Ayden <br></div></div><div class="protonmail_signature_block-proton protonmail_signature_block-empty"><br></div></div><div><br></div><div>‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐<br></div><div> On 18 June 2018 4:30 PM, Dr. Tatiana Tropina <t.tropina@mpicc.de> wrote:<br></div><div> <br></div><blockquote type="cite" class="protonmail_quote"><p>Thanks Rafik and Ayden,<br></p><p>I will go through the document in the next 23 hours (that's what
left from suggested 24h) :-) I might propose some edits, I see
that the document is, indeed, different from what is used to be a
week ago, but may be some surgery is still required (not a major
one, but I would love to soften the language a wee bit bit in
parts - Ayden hope you forgive me! :)) <br></p><p>Okay, the clocks start ticking for me - 23 hours.<br></p><p>Cheers,<br></p><p>Tanya <br></p><div><br></div><div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 18/06/18 16:04, Ayden Férdeline
wrote:<br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div>Thanks, Rafik; please note that I have reviewed and edited
the Google Doc in order to resolve many of the comments that had
been left already. So it might not be the same version that you
reviewed a week or two ago. So please take a look when you can;
I would like to get this out to NCSG members for their input
sooner rather than later.<br></div><div><br></div><div class="protonmail_signature_block"><div class="protonmail_signature_block-user"><div>Best wishes, Ayden <br></div></div><div class="protonmail_signature_block-proton
protonmail_signature_block-empty"><br></div></div><div><br></div><div>‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐<br></div><div>On 18 June 2018 4:01 PM, Rafik Dammak <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com"><rafik.dammak@gmail.com></a> wrote:<br></div><div><br></div><blockquote class="protonmail_quote" type="cite"><div dir="ltr"><div>Hi Ayden,<br></div><div><br></div><div>I would like to defer sharing this for 24 hours, I think
there were several edits and we can review again. after that
24 horus passed, we can share the draft to NCSF list.<br></div><div><br></div><div>Best,<br></div><div><br></div><div><div>Rafik<br></div><div><br></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr">Le lun. 18 juin 2018 à 22:56, Ayden
Férdeline <<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com">icann@ferdeline.com</a>> a
écrit :<br></div><blockquote style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc
solid;padding-left:1ex" class="gmail_quote"><div>Hi<br></div><div><br></div><div>Are there any objections to sharing this on the
NCSG-Discuss list? I presume not as it is just a
draft, and not final, but if we share it today we can
give members four weeks to look over it and
potentially comment, before the PC needs to review the
final version.<br></div><div><br></div><div class="m_-4161354734566626228protonmail_signature_block"><div class="m_-4161354734566626228protonmail_signature_block-user"><div>Thanks, Ayden <br></div></div><div class="m_-4161354734566626228protonmail_signature_block-proton
m_-4161354734566626228protonmail_signature_block-empty"><br></div></div><div><br></div><div>‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐<br></div><div>On 12 June 2018 2:55 AM, Rafik Dammak <<a target="_blank" href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>>
wrote:<br></div><div><br></div><blockquote type="cite" class="m_-4161354734566626228protonmail_quote"><div dir="ltr"><div>Hi Ayden,<br></div><div><br></div><div>Thanks again for the draft.<br></div><div>as there are several comments and edits, I
think it should be tidy-up first before as second
round of review or comments.<br></div><div>after that, we can share it in NCSG list.<br></div><div><br></div><div>Best,<br></div><div><br></div><div><div>Rafik<br></div><div><div><br></div><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr">Le mar. 12 juin 2018 à 02:33,
Ayden Férdeline <<a target="_blank" href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com">icann@ferdeline.com</a>>
a écrit :<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px
#ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div>I have made further edits to the draft
comment now. Unfortunately I did not
realise until half-way through that I was
not in 'suggestion' mode, but all my
substantive, non-grammatical edits are in
suggestion mode. The comment is in good
shape now, I think. Unless there are any
concerns I think we could share this with
the NCSG list?<br></div><div><br></div><div class="m_-4161354734566626228m_1753831977167339608protonmail_signature_block"><div class="m_-4161354734566626228m_1753831977167339608protonmail_signature_block-user"><div>-Ayden <br></div></div><div class="m_-4161354734566626228m_1753831977167339608protonmail_signature_block-proton
m_-4161354734566626228m_1753831977167339608protonmail_signature_block-empty"><br></div></div><div><br></div><div>‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐<br></div><div>On 10 June 2018 3:32 PM, Ayden
Férdeline <<a target="_blank" href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com">icann@ferdeline.com</a>>
wrote:<br></div><div><br></div><blockquote class="m_-4161354734566626228m_1753831977167339608protonmail_quote" type="cite"><div>Thanks Kathy, great edits!<br></div><div><br></div><div class="m_-4161354734566626228m_1753831977167339608protonmail_signature_block"><div class="m_-4161354734566626228m_1753831977167339608protonmail_signature_block-user"><div>Ayden <br></div></div><div class="m_-4161354734566626228m_1753831977167339608protonmail_signature_block-proton
m_-4161354734566626228m_1753831977167339608protonmail_signature_block-empty"><br></div></div><div><br></div><div>‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐<br></div><div>On 10 June 2018 3:23 PM, Kathy
Kleiman <<a target="_blank" href="mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com">kathy@kathykleiman.com</a>>
wrote:<br></div><div><br></div><blockquote class="m_-4161354734566626228m_1753831977167339608protonmail_quote" type="cite"><p>My edits now added. Kudos to all
leading this for working so far ahead!<br></p><div><br></div><div class="m_-4161354734566626228m_1753831977167339608moz-cite-prefix">On
6/9/2018 6:32 PM, Ayden Férdeline
wrote:<br></div><blockquote type="cite"><div>I've added some text to our
comment on the proposed Community
Travel Support Guidelines:<br></div><div><br></div><div><a target="_blank" href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FEWgze1lVbMlB5if0EnfZE2BxGreHoQ6SKaj6ya7sZY/edit?usp=sharing">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FEWgze1lVbMlB5if0EnfZE2BxGreHoQ6SKaj6ya7sZY/edit?usp=sharing</a><br></div><div><br></div><div>The deadline for submission of
this comment is still six weeks
away, but please can you review this
rough draft and add your
comments/edits so that we can share
this with members soon (this week
ideally).<br></div><div><br></div><div>Best wishes, Ayden<br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><pre>_______________________________________________
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