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<p>Hi All, my edits added. I changed to "should" to "must" in many
areas of the text (not the titles/subtitles) because "should" is
sometimes interpreted as "may" instead of "must." What you have
identified is critical and not optional - a must, not a may. Tx
you!</p>
<p>Best, Kathy<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 5/4/2018 6:35 PM, farzaneh badii
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this one:
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<div class="gmail_quote">On Fri, May 4, 2018 at 6:28 PM,
Stephanie Perrin <span dir="ltr"><<a
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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">I just
commented on the earlier one. Largely grammatical,
but I hope it is not too late....</font></font></p>
<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">cheers STeph</font></font><br>
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2018-05-04 18:23, farzaneh badii wrote:<br>
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what am I doing ... blame it on Friday ... here
is the comment: <a
href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lBL_xRnYeIzQYXjK4nw0P8b7_cEOOuZVNouzdp3uvgU/edit"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">https://docs.google.<wbr>com/document/d/1lBL_<wbr>xRnYeIzQYXjK4nw0P8b7_<wbr>cEOOuZVNouzdp3uvgU/edit</a> </div>
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the previous one .</div>
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6:21 PM, farzaneh badii <span dir="ltr"><<a
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this one is different Rafik, this one is
the guidance to NomCom for the qualities
of the board memember. But I'd be grateful
if you also look over the guidance doc
quickly so that we send it off.</div>
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<div class="gmail_default"
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thanks for reminding me. I have resolved
all the comments on both accountability
and NomCom review.</div>
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review public comment: <a
href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PZPz-oevLrFvxsvpAJuQHPc-R0nDhCr-vbbvOyh_ZpQ/edit"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">https://docs.google.c<wbr>om/document/d/1PZPz-oevLrFvxsv<wbr>pAJuQHPc-R0nDhCr-vbbvOyh_ZpQ/<wbr>edit</a></div>
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2018 at 6:17 PM, Rafik Dammak <span
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<div>Thanks Farzaneh,
<div dir="auto">Request to PC
members to review the comment
asap. The deadline for
submission is the 7th May.
Edits and comments from
members were resolved. </div>
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4, 2018, 11:08 PM
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soon. Please comment
so that we can
finalize. </div>
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