<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_extra">Thanks all, I will try to resolve the comments and taking into account the suggestion to shorten the NCAP comment<br> those who didn't review yet, please do asap.</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br>Rafik<br><div class="gmail_quote">2018-04-17 1:49 GMT+09:00 Farell FOLLY <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:farell@benin2point0.org" target="_blank">farell@benin2point0.org</a>></span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div style="word-wrap:break-word;line-break:after-white-space">I have reviewed the NCAP comment and I am more or less aligned with the idea that it can be brief since there is nothing substantial we are pointing out. <div><br></div><div>It seems that the penholder intends to raise an issue about Intellectual Property, but I am not getting the right point. I suggested to point out a use case to explain and we can see whether the issue is already covered in the proposed project plan or not. I can see that most of the points we’re raising in our draft are already taken into account. At the end, I made some inputs to format the document, if we were to be longer or consider adopting it in state.<div><span class=""><div>
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</span><div><div class="h5"><div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div>On 16 Apr 2018, at 09:19, Farell FOLLY <<a href="mailto:farell@benin2point0.org" target="_blank">farell@benin2point0.org</a>> wrote:</div><br class="m_7138092764261320210Apple-interchange-newline"><div><div style="word-wrap:break-word;line-break:after-white-space">Dear Rafik,<div><br></div><div>I will try and review some by today or no later than tomorrow.<br><div>
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<div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div>On 14 Apr 2018, at 03:44, Rafik Dammak <<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@GMAIL.COM" target="_blank">rafik.dammak@GMAIL.COM</a>> wrote:</div><br class="m_7138092764261320210Apple-interchange-newline"><div><div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_quote">Hi all,</div><div class="gmail_quote"><br></div><div class="gmail_quote">we have several draft comments in pipeline and they need PC review. some may need some rework.</div><div class="gmail_quote"><br><ul><li><span class="TSRSpan" id="TSRSpan_23"><img class="TSRWebRatingIcon" src="chrome-extension://cfeleongjhdjephegmmmdjgbfjiindbe/./images/webicon_green.png" style="width: 16px; height: 16px; border: 0px;"></span><a class="m_7138092764261320210external-link" href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/ncap-project-plan-2018-03-02-en" rel="nofollow" style="color:rgb(59,115,175);font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;background-color:rgb(184,234,184)" target="_blank"><font color="#3b73af" face="Arial, sans-serif"><u>Draft Project Plan for the Proposed Name Collision Analysis Project</u></font> </a> <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jwK6ik8VgMjM26QUFcSmA0y9hBASmxMAGupnvvDSe2A/edit?usp=sharing" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://docs.google.<wbr>com/document/d/1jwK6ik8VgMjM26<wbr>QUFcSmA0y9hBASmxMAGupnvvDSe2A/<wbr>edit?usp=sharing</a> , the dealdine is the 18th April<br></li><li><span class="TSRSpan" id="TSRSpan_24"><img class="TSRWebRatingIcon" src="chrome-extension://cfeleongjhdjephegmmmdjgbfjiindbe/./images/webicon_green.png" style="width: 16px; height: 16px; border: 0px;"></span><a class="m_7138092764261320210external-link" href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/board-integrity-screening-2018-03-02-en" rel="nofollow" style="color:rgb(59,115,175);text-decoration:underline;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;font-style:normal;font-variant-ligatures:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:400;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:left;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;background-color:rgb(184,234,184)" target="_blank">Uniform Board Member Integrity Screening Process</a> <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YS4ZCtcD_dOlP6va1aInp0XuS4l7tunhQBgdFzMhuqo/edit" target="_blank">https://docs.google.<wbr>com/document/d/1YS4ZCtcD_<wbr>dOlP6va1aInp0XuS4l7tunhQBgdFzM<wbr>huqo/edit</a> , the deadline is the 17th April<br></li><li><span class="TSRSpan" id="TSRSpan_25"><img class="TSRWebRatingIcon" src="chrome-extension://cfeleongjhdjephegmmmdjgbfjiindbe/./images/webicon_green.png" style="width: 16px; height: 16px; border: 0px;"></span><a class="m_7138092764261320210external-link" href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/reserve-fund-replenishment-2018-03-06-en" rel="nofollow" style="color:rgb(59,115,175);text-decoration:none;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:14px;font-style:normal;font-variant-ligatures:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:400;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:left;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px;background-color:rgb(184,234,184)" target="_blank">ICANN Reserve Fund: Proposed Replenishment Strategy</a> <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cfjgDFI7KTPmxS9_KLkIDHvtmoyRvNR6vlLsK-_l-2U/edit" target="_blank">https://docs.google.<wbr>com/document/d/<wbr>1cfjgDFI7KTPmxS9_<wbr>KLkIDHvtmoyRvNR6vlLsK-_l-2U/<wbr>edit</a> deadline is the 25th April<br></li></ul><div>I expect that all PC members to review and help finalizing the comments with due diligeance. thanks to those who did already.</div><div><br></div><div>Best,</div><div><br></div><div>Rafik</div></div></div>
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