<div>I do like the idea of getting some document control in place; ie the publication / approval date, and logging any later corrections (if applicable).</div>
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<div>However I am not a fan of a letterhead / branding template for comments. I think that would look a bit odd. I worry it couod be seen as style over substance. </div>
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<div>Personally I like comments on white paper, Times New Roman size 12, with numbered paragraphs so that arguments can easily be cited. Clean, simple, and everyone and all word processing programs are able to create documents like this too... :-)</div>
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<div class="gmail_extra">thanks for the proposal, I started my review there.</div>
<div class="gmail_extra">I thought we can use BC template but I think we can have better. maybe something we can add is tracking and versioning in the document. but since we are using google doc and not word doc, it may be not necessary. We can also may add some
letterhead with NCSG logo and Name but that is quite optional :)</div>
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