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<div>I have reviewed the document now and put forward some suggested edits. Some are substantive changes but all are in the same spirit of the original text.  </div>
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<div>The formatting looks a bit odd; I hope the text alignments can be corrected prior to submission. </div>
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<div>I think the conclusion lacks punch; but can’t think of what it is missing at the moment...</div>
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<div>Best wishes,</div>
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<div>P.S. Thanks to those who drafted it </div>
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        </div>On Wed, Apr 4, 2018 at 01:24, Rafik Dammak <<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" class="">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</div>
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                        <div>thanks for this.</div>
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                        <div dir="auto">Im on a plane so let me know if the link below is correct. Kathy has written a response on ipc bc </div>
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                            <div dir="auto">We need to go through it asap and send it before their meeting. </div>
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                            <div dir="auto">Please comment quickly and make sure you are on suggestion mode (i set it that way not sure it went through) </div>
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