<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class="">I am reading it now, but between Kathy and Ayden’s work, it looks good to go. I’ll add my comments if any. So far, my full support.<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Cheers,</div><div class="">Martín<br class=""><div><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On 3 Apr 2018, at 20:38, Ayden Férdeline <<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" class="">icann@ferdeline.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><div class="">Hi,</div>
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<div class="">I have reviewed the document now and put forward some suggested edits. Some are substantive changes but all are in the same spirit of the original text. </div>
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<div class="">The formatting looks a bit odd; I hope the text alignments can be corrected prior to submission. </div>
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<div class="">I think the conclusion lacks punch; but can’t think of what it is missing at the moment...</div>
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<div class="">P.S. Thanks to those who drafted it </div>
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</div>On Wed, Apr 4, 2018 at 01:24, Rafik Dammak <<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" class="">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</div>
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<div class="">thanks for this.</div>
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<div class="gmail_quote">2018-04-04 6:57 GMT+09:00 farzaneh badii <span dir="ltr" class=""><<a href="mailto:farzaneh.badii@gmail.com" target="_blank" class="">farzaneh.badii@gmail.com</a>></span>:
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<div dir="auto" class="">Im on a plane so let me know if the link below is correct. Kathy has written a response on ipc bc </div>
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<div dir="auto" class="">We need to go through it asap and send it before their meeting. </div>
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<div dir="auto" class="">Please comment quickly and make sure you are on suggestion mode (i set it that way not sure it went through) </div>
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