<div dir="ltr">Hi everyone,<div><br></div><div>At present I cannot support submission of the previous draft, so please see attached updated document with comments and edits.</div><div><br></div><div>Key points:</div><div><br></div><div>- The document should be restructured to put the summary recommendations at the start;</div><div>- Need to be clearer in our assessment of whether this proposed solution should be implemented (or not);</div><div>- Where possible, keep our responses based upon facts;</div><div>- I'm really uncomfortable with some of the paragraphs (2,3,5) in the Tiered Access Models section. Just sounds like a rant;</div><div>- Be clearer in our views on GAC oversight of accreditation, bypassing of MLAT and our recommendation for cross-community expert group.</div><div><br></div><div>Kind regards,</div><div><br></div><div>Nick</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br clear="all"><div><div class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><b>Nick Shorey</b><div>Phone: +44 (0) 7552 455 988</div><div>Email: <a href="mailto:lists@nickshorey.com" target="_blank">lists@nickshorey.com</a></div><div>Skype: nick.shorey</div><div>Twitter: @nickshorey</div><div>LinkedIn: <a href="http://www.linkedin.com/in/nicklinkedin" target="_blank">www.linkedin.com/in/nicklinkedin</a></div><div>Web: <a href="http://www.nickshorey.com" target="_blank">www.nickshorey.com</a></div></div></div></div></div></div>
<br><div class="gmail_quote">On Sun, Mar 11, 2018 at 3:18 PM, Stephanie Perrin <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca" target="_blank">stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Yet if you did either
the PIA or the HRIA you would get this outcome Milton....I am
reluctant to lose it. Possibly just pull it back into a more
neutral statement.</font></font></p>
<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">cheers SP</font></font><br>
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<div class="m_8503510382803827664moz-cite-prefix">On 2018-03-11 11:08, Mueller, Milton L
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Another thing I forgot to mention. I was boarding a flight. I
think the paragraph about abiding by all data protection laws in
the world should also be struck. Of course we agree with that in
some sense but on the other hand it’s overkill. Trying to get them
to except a little of privacy they already don’t want, I don’t
think it makes a lot of sense to demand the entire world of them
in that statement<br>
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<div id="m_8503510382803827664AppleMailSignature">Milton L Mueller
<div>Professor, School of Public Policy</div>
<div>Georgia Institute of Technology</div>
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On Mar 11, 2018, at 09:14, Stephanie Perrin <<a href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca" target="_blank">stephanie.perrin@mail.<wbr>utoronto.ca</a>>
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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">I am really
happy to delete that paragraph Milton, you have put your
finger on the risk. I will change it to a strong
statement on model three being the only choice compliant
with law until a professional, MS accreditation system
(that contains audit and oversight) has been developed.</font></font></p>
<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Cheers Stephanie</font></font><br>
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<div class="m_8503510382803827664moz-cite-prefix">On 2018-03-11 05:46, Mueller,
Milton L wrote:<br>
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On the whole it is a very strong letter. I have one very
strong objection and would ask you to delete this
paragraph:
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<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;line-height:21.600000381469727px">
<span style="line-height:21.600000381469727px;background-color:rgba(255,255,255,0)"> </span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;line-height:21.600000381469727px">
<span style="background-color:rgba(255,255,255,0)"><span class="m_8503510382803827664s5" style="line-height:13.199999809265137px"><span class="m_8503510382803827664bumpedFont15" style="line-height:19.799999237060547px">A small
group of</span></span><span class="m_8503510382803827664s5" style="line-height:13.199999809265137px"><span class="m_8503510382803827664bumpedFont15" style="line-height:19.799999237060547px"> expert</span></span><span class="m_8503510382803827664s5" style="line-height:13.199999809265137px"><span class="m_8503510382803827664bumpedFont15" style="line-height:19.799999237060547px"> community
members that can work with </span></span><span class="m_8503510382803827664s5" style="line-height:13.199999809265137px"><span class="m_8503510382803827664bumpedFont15" style="line-height:19.799999237060547px">the </span></span><span class="m_8503510382803827664s5" style="line-height:13.199999809265137px"><span class="m_8503510382803827664bumpedFont15" style="line-height:19.799999237060547px">GAC
might be a better way to come up with a tiered
access </span></span><span class="m_8503510382803827664s5" style="line-height:13.199999809265137px"><span class="m_8503510382803827664bumpedFont15" style="line-height:19.799999237060547px">system </span></span><span class="m_8503510382803827664s5" style="line-height:13.199999809265137px"><span class="m_8503510382803827664bumpedFont15" style="line-height:19.799999237060547px">before
the law </span></span><span class="m_8503510382803827664s5" style="line-height:13.199999809265137px"><span class="m_8503510382803827664bumpedFont15" style="line-height:19.799999237060547px">comes into effect</span></span><span class="m_8503510382803827664s5" style="line-height:13.199999809265137px"><span class="m_8503510382803827664bumpedFont15" style="line-height:19.799999237060547px">. </span></span></span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;line-height:21.600000381469727px">
<span style="line-height:21.600000381469727px;background-color:rgba(255,255,255,0)"> </span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;line-height:21.600000381469727px">
<span style="line-height:21.600000381469727px;background-color:rgba(255,255,255,0)">This is
asking for trouble. Anything that happens in the next
two months is going to be sloppy and biased toward
what GAC wants. As Farzy suggested we should insist on
them adopting model 3 until tiering methods and
criteria are worked out. </span></p>
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<div id="m_8503510382803827664AppleMailSignature">Milton L Mueller
<div>Professor, School of Public Policy</div>
<div>Georgia Institute of Technology</div>
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On Mar 10, 2018, at 18:02, Stephanie Perrin <<a href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca" target="_blank">stephanie.perrin@mail.<wbr>utoronto.ca</a>>
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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Ok
folks, here is the letter as currently
drafted. COmments welcome. Thanks to Ayden
for many useful comments<br>
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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Stephanie</font></font><br>
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<div><March 8 ICANN gdpr modelncsg4.docx></div>
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