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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2018-03-02 08:09, farzaneh badii
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          style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">ok let me know we need
          to send it to ICANN staff before the meeting.</div>
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              <div><font face="verdana, sans-serif">Farzaneh </font></div>
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        <div class="gmail_quote">On Fri, Mar 2, 2018 at 8:07 AM,
          Stephanie Perrin <span dir="ltr"><<a
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              <p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Looks fine. 
                    Sponsors are the accredited registrars, so will make
                    "or" an "and" on that slide<span class="HOEnZb"><font
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                    2018-03-01 22:45, farzaneh badii wrote:<br>
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                        <div class="gmail_default"><font face="verdana,
                            sans-serif">I have made it a bit brief. here
                            are the changes I made:</font></div>
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                        <div class="gmail_default"><font face="verdana,
                            sans-serif">I removed page 3 (relevant
                            privacy laws). Page five, I just added a
                            brief definition of WHOIS and deleted the
                            rest of what you had. I am not sure about
                            keeping slide 7. It is long and very
                            complicated. If you think you can make a
                            brief remark about the long struggle then
                            good idea. But going to thick whois and thin
                            whois too much will be confusing.  I removed
                            some of the principles or made them shorter.
                            Removed : </font></div>
                        <div class="gmail_default"><font face="verdana,
                            sans-serif">•Notice of data breach within 72
                            hours</font></div>
                        <div class="gmail_default"><font face="verdana,
                            sans-serif">•Right to be forgotten</font></div>
                        <div class="gmail_default"><font face="verdana,
                            sans-serif">But you are the expert so
                            correct me if I am wrong.</font></div>
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                        <div class="gmail_default">Here: 
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                              face="arial, helvetica, sans-serif">•<span
                                style="color:black">Tiered access means
                                accreditation and authorization </span><span
                                style="color:black">…</span><span
                                style="color:black">no
                                self-certification, we need standards
                                and independent audit</span></font></div>
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                        style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">In the
                        newest ICANN  model there is no self
                        certification but reliance on GAC! We need to
                        mention this.</div>
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                        style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">In the
                        following, Why are we jumping the queue about
                        legitimate purpose?  "Cybercrime fighting is a
                        legitimate reason to disclose but it needs to be
                        on an accredited basis, anonymized data
                        analytics, etc."  Lets emphasize we have to
                        first agree on the purpose of WHOIS then we can
                        get into legitimate interest etc. </div>
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                        style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Also we
                        should mention that we want data minimization
                        (get rid of Thick WHOIS as much as possible) </div>
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                        style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Thanks
                        for doing this. we will have 45 minutes to go
                        through your slides and ask questions and then
                        ICANN staff (Theresa and Akram) will be with us
                        and we can discuss the new ICANN model. </div>
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                        style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I also
                        made your background less interesting. Sorry :)</div>
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                        style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Best </div>
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                        style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Farzaneh </div>
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                      <div class="gmail_quote">On Thu, Mar 1, 2018 at
                        7:38 PM, Stephanie Perrin <span dir="ltr"><<a
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                                  Grande">cheers Steph</font></font><br>
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