<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default"><div class="gmail_default"><font face="verdana, sans-serif">I have made it a bit brief. here are the changes I made:</font></div><div class="gmail_default"><font face="verdana, sans-serif"><br></font></div><div class="gmail_default"><font face="verdana, sans-serif">I removed page 3 (relevant privacy laws). Page five, I just added a brief definition of WHOIS and deleted the rest of what you had. I am not sure about keeping slide 7. It is long and very complicated. If you think you can make a brief remark about the long struggle then good idea. But going to thick whois and thin whois too much will be confusing. I removed some of the principles or made them shorter. Removed : </font></div><div class="gmail_default"><font face="verdana, sans-serif">•Notice of data breach within 72 hours</font></div><div class="gmail_default"><font face="verdana, sans-serif">•Right to be forgotten</font></div><div class="gmail_default"><font face="verdana, sans-serif">But you are the expert so correct me if I am wrong.</font></div><div class="gmail_default"><font face="verdana, sans-serif"><br></font></div><div class="gmail_default">Here: <div style="margin-top:20pt;margin-bottom:0pt;margin-left:0.51in;text-align:left;direction:ltr;unicode-bidi:embed;word-break:normal"><font face="arial, helvetica, sans-serif">•<span style="color:black">Tiered access means accreditation and authorization </span><span style="color:black">…</span><span style="color:black">no self-certification, we need standards and independent audit</span></font></div>
</div></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">In the newest ICANN model there is no self certification but reliance on GAC! We need to mention this.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">In the following, Why are we jumping the queue about legitimate purpose? "Cybercrime fighting is a legitimate reason to disclose but it needs to be on an accredited basis, anonymized data analytics, etc." Lets emphasize we have to first agree on the purpose of WHOIS then we can get into legitimate interest etc. </div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Also we should mention that we want data minimization (get rid of Thick WHOIS as much as possible) </div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Thanks for doing this. we will have 45 minutes to go through your slides and ask questions and then ICANN staff (Theresa and Akram) will be with us and we can discuss the new ICANN model. </div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I also made your background less interesting. Sorry :)</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Best </div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Farzaneh </div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br clear="all"><div><div class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div><font face="verdana, sans-serif">Farzaneh </font></div></div></div></div>
<br><div class="gmail_quote">On Thu, Mar 1, 2018 at 7:38 PM, Stephanie Perrin <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca" target="_blank">stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">cheers Steph</font></font><br>
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