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    <p>All,</p>
    <p>Sorry for weighing in later -- first family holidays this year
      and then last minute travels. This letter required more attention
      than I had due to my limited bandwidth. <br>
    </p>
    <p>I agree with those suggesting removing the last para. I am not
      even talking about how we would look with the threat of
      enforcement or whether it is politically right. <br>
    </p>
    <p>What I can say here as a lawyer, that unless we are 100% sure
      when and how we procedural are going to enforce this threat *and*
      unless we are 100% sure that we are going to do this -- it
      shouldn't be there. <br>
    </p>
    <p>I am not even sure how procedurally this issue can be addressed
      by us in the EU courts (DPAs - yes). </p>
    <p>Waving the legal threats should be possible only if we are going
      to do this immediately after getting a negative answer. Taking
      into account the GDPR implementation timeline, we can easily be
      ignored by ICANN legal. Furthermore, the threats could water down
      our main messages. <br>
    </p>
    <p>We can continue the discussion about legal tools to pursue our
      position though. But for now the letter is great without the last
      para. Ayden, thank you so much for your impressive work on
      drafting it. <br>
    </p>
    <p>Cheers,</p>
    <p>Tanya <br>
    </p>
    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 16/10/17 08:50, Matthew Shears
      wrote:<br>
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      <p>Hi all</p>
      <p>I would like to suggest that the letter minus the last para be
        submitted (I am proposing one or two other edits in the text). 
        There are many important points in the remaining text that make
        it a valuable contribution (thank you Ayden and others for the
        drafting) - particularly reinforcing the importance of outside
        counsel's input.  The possibility of a campaign, as well as how
        we build a solutions oriented approach to GDPR as noted below by
        Rafik, should be discussed face to face in Abu Dhabi - these are
        very important issues, and should be given appropriate time and
        space to address in person rather than over e-mail.<br>
      </p>
      <p>Matthew<br>
      </p>
      <br>
      <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 16/10/2017 00:42, Rafik Dammak
        wrote:<br>
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cite="mid:CAH5sThmxyrfQeZkuAChNuLQvbPhw=g5qcZ1OfDf2gtkKgnx80w@mail.gmail.com">
        <div dir="ltr">
          <div class="gmail_extra">Hi Ayden,</div>
          <div class="gmail_extra"><br>
          </div>
          <div class="gmail_extra">Thanks for your response and
            points taken.</div>
          <div class="gmail_extra">as I suggested we should go gradually
            into escalation and leave space for ICANN and staff to
            respond to our requests. We are enough assertive at this
            stage and we can be more later on. it also gives us more
            time to think about our strategy and get a plan
            (implementation) for the campaign and the resources needed
            for that. it is not empty words and we shouldn't put a
            threat what we don't have as a group a clear idea and
            support how we will do so. </div>
          <div class="gmail_extra"><br>
          </div>
          <div class="gmail_extra">I am really looking for discussion(s)
            in Abu Dhabi and we should organize several meetings for
            that to get an action plan and clear idea what we will do
            and how. if people are ok with this, we can organize
            informal breakfast meetings to work on that (unfortunately
            it is too late to book room). </div>
          <div class="gmail_extra"><br>
          </div>
          <div class="gmail_extra">From other discussions in RDS skype
            channel, I understand there is a question on what we can
            propose solutions, way to go forward and sharing our
            positions, and Stephanie volunteered to draft that. I
            proposed that we discuss GDPR at meeting with Board but that
            didn't get enough attraction.</div>
          <div class="gmail_extra"><br>
          </div>
          <div class="gmail_extra">we should finalize the letter by
            tomorrow. and I really ask the rest of Policy Committee
            members to respond and comment. it is an improtant topic for
            us as group.</div>
          <div class="gmail_extra"><br>
          </div>
          <div class="gmail_extra">Best,</div>
          <div class="gmail_extra"><br>
          </div>
          <div class="gmail_extra">Rafik</div>
          <div class="gmail_extra"> <br>
            <div class="gmail_quote">2017-10-16 0:33 GMT+09:00 Ayden
              Férdeline <span dir="ltr"><<a
                  href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" target="_blank"
                  moz-do-not-send="true">icann@ferdeline.com</a>></span>:<br>
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                <div>Hi Rafik,<br>
                </div>
                <div><br>
                </div>
                <div>Thanks for your comments.<br>
                </div>
                <div><br>
                </div>
                <div>I think we need to be explicit with what we are
                  asking, clear that our words are not an empty threat,
                  and definitive that consequences will follow if ICANN
                  does not meet its obligations under the GDPR.<br>
                </div>
                <div><br>
                </div>
                <div>I am happy for us to send the attached letter with
                  Martin's revisions, though I think it does now sound
                  like an empty threat. The ambiguity sounds to me like
                  we do not know what our course of action will be, when
                  that is incorrect. In the previous draft we were very
                  clear: if ICANN does not comply with European data
                  protection law, we will evail ourselves next May of
                  the Data Protection Commissioners and if necessary,
                  see you in Court. But we have spent a week trying to
                  get comments on this letter and speaking only for
                  myself, my motivation is now fading. We have other
                  comments to write; so if there is consensus on this
                  letter as attached, we might as well send it. If we do
                  not, let's not.<br>
                </div>
                <div><br>
                </div>
                <div>I have tried multiple times over the past two weeks
                  to have a conversation around next steps. I have tried
                  on the policy call, on this list, on Skype channels to
                  talk campaigns. We all have our own interests at ICANN
                  and follow different topics; I get that. This is
                  something I am following so I have more time for it.
                  And it is for that reason that I say, we are not going
                  to get allies like AccessNow or EDRi if we ourselves
                  cannot take the time to discuss a path forward. And I
                  feel very strongly that if we reach out to others, we
                  should not be asking for much more than a signature on
                  a letter. It needs to be a part of a campaign that we
                  are leading. We cannot expect them to take the lead
                  here. We are in the ICANN working groups, being
                  ignored and observing ICANN's non-compliance, and our
                  civil society members have their own priorities which
                  I am sure they have already budgeted for for FY18. So
                  this is on us. I think a face-to-face meeting in Abu
                  Dhabi - separate from our policy committee meeting if
                  possible - is essential if we decide to take this
                  campaign forward, and I think we should.<br>
                </div>
                <div><br>
                </div>
                <div>But we might decide that we will not launch a
                  campaign next year, because we are not committed to
                  this issue. I kind of get that feeling.<span
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                    <div>Ayden<br>
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                    <div>-------- Original Message --------<br>
                    </div>
                    <div>Subject: Re: [NCSG-PC] [Draft] Letter to ICANN
                      re: BC and IPC correspondence<br>
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                    <div class="h5">
                      <div>Local Time: 15 October 2017 3:11 AM<br>
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                      <div>UTC Time: 15 October 2017 02:11<br>
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                      <div>From: <a
                          href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com"
                          target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a><br>
                      </div>
                      <div>To: Stephanie Perrin <<a
                          href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca"
                          target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">stephanie.perrin@mail.<wbr>utoronto.ca</a>><br>
                      </div>
                      <div>Martin Pablo Silva Valent <<a
                          href="mailto:mpsilvavalent@gmail.com"
                          target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">mpsilvavalent@gmail.com</a>>,
                        Ayden Férdeline <<a
                          href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com"
                          target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">icann@ferdeline.com</a>>,
                        <a href="mailto:ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is"
                          target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is</a>
                        <<a href="mailto:ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is"
                          target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is</a>><br>
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                        <div class="gmail_extra">Hi all,<br>
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                        <div class="gmail_extra"><br>
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                        <div class="gmail_extra">thanks for those
                          participating in the editing. <br>
                        </div>
                        <div class="gmail_extra">I understand the
                          concerns about using a threat language. I am
                          wondering how much we should be strategical
                          here.  We should escalate gradually (and
                          assertively) depending on the situation, but
                          putting nuclear option, in the beginning, may
                          not work. There is a sense of emergency here
                          and we have to act quickly.<br>
                        </div>
                        <div class="gmail_extra"><br>
                        </div>
                        <div class="gmail_extra">I believe we should
                          have a discussion about the strategy we should
                          follow and if we want to go into the campaign
                          path, getting media attention and so we would
                          need to have a clear plan, get allies and
                          experienced folks to support us.  As I shared
                          in RDS channel, there was some effort during
                          Privacy/Proxy service public comments and we
                          can learn from that.  I brought that
                          experience because it let many outsiders be
                          aware of the situation and send their
                          comments. I understand that is a different
                          context but we can start by leveraging our
                          membership: EDRi,  EFF, Accessnow and many
                          others, I volunteer with others to reach them.<br>
                        </div>
                        <div class="gmail_extra"><br>
                        </div>
                        <div class="gmail_extra">
                          <div>I think we can shape a letter expressing
                            strongly our concerns and so we must
                            continue the discussion in Abud Dhabi for
                            next steps ( we will need to allocate time
                            for that on formal and informal meetings) to
                            outline a plan to follow.<br>
                          </div>
                          <div><br>
                          </div>
                          <div>let's finalize this letter, it is timing
                            will be just 2 weeks prior to Abu Dhabi
                            meeting.<br>
                          </div>
                        </div>
                        <div class="gmail_extra"><br>
                        </div>
                        <div class="gmail_extra">Best,<br>
                        </div>
                        <div class="gmail_extra"><br>
                        </div>
                        <div class="gmail_extra">Rafik<br>
                        </div>
                        <div class="gmail_extra">
                          <div><br>
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                          <div class="gmail_quote">
                            <div>2017-10-15 5:21 GMT+09:00 Stephanie
                              Perrin <span dir="ltr"><<a
                                  href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca"
                                  target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">stephanie.perrin@mail.<wbr>utoronto.ca</a>></span>:<br>
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                                      Grande"">Very nice edit.</span></span><br>
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                                    <p><span
                                        style="font-size:undefinedpx"
                                        class="m_-3486001290855872059size"><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059font" style="font-family:"Lucida
                                          Grande"">Stephanie.</span></span><br>
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                                      class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493moz-cite-prefix">On
                                      2017-10-14 13:39, Martin Pablo
                                      Silva Valent wrote:<br>
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                                          <div
style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;text-align:justify"><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059font" style="font-family:Arial"><span
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                                                style="font-size:11pt">I
                                                won’t mess the document,
                                                so I put it here: I
                                                basically took out two
                                                phrases: the one were it
                                                says we would apply to
                                                DP authorities, and the
                                                ending were it says we
                                                would go to court.</span></span><br>
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                                          <div
style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;text-align:justify"><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059font" style="font-family:Arial"><span
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style="font-size:14.6667px"></span></span><br>
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                                          <div
style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;text-align:justify"><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059font" style="font-family:Arial"><span
                                                class="m_-3486001290855872059size"
style="font-size:14.6667px">This is strong and vague enough for us to do
                                                whatever we feel
                                                necessary and we outline
                                                the hard-risk real risk
                                                of ignoring GDPR (a
                                                subtle hint if you may).</span></span><br>
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                                          <div
style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;text-align:justify"><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059font" style="font-family:Arial"><span
                                                class="m_-3486001290855872059size"
style="font-size:14.6667px"></span></span><br>
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                                          <div
style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;text-align:justify"><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059font" style="font-family:Arial"><span
                                                class="m_-3486001290855872059size"
                                                style="font-size:11pt">"As
                                                active stakeholders in
                                                the ICANN
                                                multistakeholder
                                                community, we want to
                                                participate in the
                                                policy changes which
                                                will see ICANN come into
                                                compliance with data
                                                protection law after a
                                                19-year record of
                                                sweeping it under the
                                                rug. However, if we are
                                                excluded from the
                                                process, and feel that
                                                once again certain
                                                stakeholders with
                                                everything to gain and
                                                nothing to lose from the
                                                collection of end-user
                                                data are getting the ear
                                                of senior management,
                                                whilst we get the cold
                                                shoulder, we are afraid
                                                that we will have
                                                to take all actions at
                                                our disposal
                                                regarding ICANN’s
                                                continued, 19-year
                                                streak of non-compliance
                                                with data protection
                                                law. As we are sure you
                                                are aware, the new GDPR
                                                gives individuals the
                                                right to sue the Data
                                                Protection Authorities
                                                for failure to protect
                                                end-user rights, which </span><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059size" style="font-size:14.6667px">ultimately
                                                will impact in the DNS
                                                use and ICANN itself."</span></span><br>
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                                              style="font-family:Arial"><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059size" style="font-size:11pt"></span></span><br>
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                                          <div><span
                                              class="m_-3486001290855872059font"
                                              style="font-family:Arial"><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059size" style="font-size:11pt">Cheers,</span></span><br>
                                          </div>
                                          <div><span
                                              class="m_-3486001290855872059font"
                                              style="font-family:Arial"><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059size" style="font-size:11pt">Martín</span></span><br>
                                          </div>
                                        </span></div>
                                      <div><br>
                                      </div>
                                      <div>
                                        <blockquote type="cite">
                                          <div>On Oct 14, 2017, at 1:20
                                            PM, Ayden Férdeline <<a
                                              href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com"
                                              target="_blank"
                                              moz-do-not-send="true">icann@ferdeline.com</a>>
                                            wrote:<br>
                                          </div>
                                          <div><br>
                                          </div>
                                          <div>
                                            <div>
                                              <div>Hi Martin,<br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div><br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div>Thank you very much
                                                for reviewing the draft
                                                letter. I appreciate you
                                                taking the time. Could I
                                                please ask that you edit
                                                the Google Doc directly
                                                and massage the final
                                                paragraph, so that you
                                                are happy with it? I
                                                think we do need to be
                                                forceful and punch back.
                                                I disagree that we
                                                should only go through
                                                the GAC or follow GNSO
                                                processes to be heard.
                                                We are, by design, being
                                                excluded from the
                                                conversation on this
                                                issue, and a flaw in the
                                                multistakeholder model
                                                has become apparent (at
                                                least to me). I think we
                                                should avail ourselves
                                                of all legal avenues
                                                through which we can
                                                seek a resolution to
                                                gTLD policies so to
                                                protect fundamental
                                                rights, such as the
                                                right to privacy. To box
                                                ourselves in and to
                                                forever subject
                                                ourselves only to a
                                                process flawed by design
                                                would, I think, be a
                                                mistake. Thanks again.<br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div><br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div>Best wishes, Ayden<br>
                                              </div>
                                            </div>
                                            <div><br>
                                            </div>
                                            <div
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493protonmail_signature_block">
                                              <div
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493protonmail_signature_block-protonm_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493protonmail_signature_block-empty"><br>
                                              </div>
                                            </div>
                                            <div><br>
                                            </div>
                                            <blockquote type="cite"
                                              class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493protonmail_quote">
                                              <div>-------- Original
                                                Message --------<br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div>Subject: Re:
                                                [NCSG-PC] [Draft] Letter
                                                to ICANN re: BC and IPC
                                                correspondence<br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div>Local Time: 14
                                                October 2017 4:38 PM<br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div>UTC Time: 14 October
                                                2017 15:38<br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div>From: <a
                                                  href="mailto:mpsilvavalent@gmail.com"
                                                  target="_blank"
                                                  moz-do-not-send="true">mpsilvavalent@gmail.com</a><br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div>To: Ayden Férdeline
                                                <<a
                                                  href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com"
                                                  target="_blank"
                                                  moz-do-not-send="true">icann@ferdeline.com</a>><br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div>Stephanie Perrin <<a
href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca" target="_blank"
                                                  moz-do-not-send="true">stephanie.perrin@mail.utoront<wbr>o.ca</a>>,
                                                <a
                                                  href="mailto:ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is"
                                                  target="_blank"
                                                  moz-do-not-send="true">ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is</a>
                                                <<a
                                                  href="mailto:ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is"
                                                  target="_blank"
                                                  moz-do-not-send="true">ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is</a>><br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div><br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div>To help this letter
                                                hit the spot, is already
                                                perfect, but for the
                                                last paragraph:<br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div><br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div>1) Threatening to go
                                                with a public official
                                                NCSG campaign with State
                                                agencies of Europe to
                                                hit ICANN, to force the
                                                MS model, is a very bad
                                                idea. As NCSG, we should
                                                only go to governments
                                                through the GAC and keep
                                                using our GNSO
                                                procedures to complain
                                                if we are being left
                                                out. Going berserk on
                                                ICANN with borrowed
                                                state power breaks the
                                                whole model, something
                                                that is way beyond what
                                                we need to do in this
                                                case. It’s a dangerous
                                                precedent. Why Europe?
                                                What about other
                                                jurisdictions? other
                                                states? We can still
                                                coordinate with the GAC,
                                                and as non-commercial
                                                activists we can do
                                                public campaigns and
                                                state claims in defense
                                                of our rights, but it
                                                should not be an NCSG
                                                action. We have
                                                procedures to escalate
                                                the problem inside the
                                                model, let’s use them
                                                fearless. Let’s call the
                                                ombudsman, keep writing
                                                to the board, fill the
                                                open mic, massively go
                                                into working group
                                                coordinating our
                                                members, etc (we have
                                                councilors!). Asking
                                                data protection agencies
                                                to put pressure for us,
                                                in NCSG name, outside
                                                the process we set for
                                                ourselves is not ok, is
                                                a pandora box of
                                                precedent.<br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div><br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div>2) Even if we all
                                                agree that NCSG should
                                                ask a governmental
                                                agency to put it’s nose
                                                in the GNSO process,
                                                which I am NOT saying we
                                                do, the paragraph hits a
                                                big brick wall of
                                                rhetoric problems. If
                                                you read the letter, the
                                                letter is perfect, is
                                                reasonable, is harsh, it
                                                makes you blush to think
                                                the issue is at such a
                                                poor situation. Is
                                                backed by other
                                                stakeholder, opposite to
                                                you. Once you read the
                                                threat you loose all the
                                                communication bridges
                                                you build before in the
                                                letter. Anyone with some
                                                knowledge of the GNSO
                                                will stop thinking on
                                                the ICANN problem of
                                                addressing GDPR, they
                                                will read that NCSG is
                                                threatening, to go to EU
                                                to force ICANN, and the
                                                multistakeholder model. <br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div><br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div>3) The letter is
                                                perfect, we do need a
                                                punch in the last
                                                paragraph that states
                                                both our level of
                                                concern, alert and the
                                                demand to be heard. But
                                                we should threaten to
                                                use either specific
                                                tools of the ICANN
                                                Process, or a vague
                                                thing that allows us to
                                                afterward choose the
                                                best tool.<br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div><br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div><br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div>Cheers,<br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div>Martín<br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div><br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div><br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div>
                                                <blockquote type="cite">
                                                  <div>On Oct 13, 2017,
                                                    at 6:55 PM, Ayden
                                                    Férdeline <<a
                                                      href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com"
                                                      target="_blank"
                                                      moz-do-not-send="true">icann@ferdeline.com</a>>
                                                    wrote:<br>
                                                  </div>
                                                  <div><br>
                                                  </div>
                                                  <div>
                                                    <div>Hi Martin,
                                                      thank you very
                                                      much for this
                                                      feedback. I take
                                                      it on board and
                                                      hear what you are
                                                      saying. However, I
                                                      am afraid that I
                                                      do disagree. I
                                                      think we need to
                                                      be forceful. From
                                                      what I understand
                                                      we have been
                                                      ignored and
                                                      sidelined for 19
                                                      years. I think it
                                                      is important we
                                                      punch back and let
                                                      ICANN know that we
                                                      are serious about
                                                      being able to
                                                      input into this
                                                      conversation, or <i>we
                                                        will</i> avail
                                                      ourselves of
                                                      alternative
                                                      mechanisms. To
                                                      that end, we will
                                                      need to start
                                                      thinking about
                                                      campaign tactics
                                                      too -- that is
                                                      something I have
                                                      been thinking
                                                      about for next
                                                      year; what are the
                                                      next steps, when
                                                      do we launch, and
                                                      what do we need? I
                                                      think the time for
                                                      diplomacy was a
                                                      year ago (or
                                                      longer), and now
                                                      is the time for
                                                      action.<br>
                                                    </div>
                                                    <div><br>
                                                    </div>
                                                    <div
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493protonmail_signature_block">
                                                      <div
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493protonmail_signature_block-user">
                                                        <div>Warm
                                                          wishes, Ayden <br>
                                                        </div>
                                                      </div>
                                                      <div
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                                                      </div>
                                                    </div>
                                                    <div><br>
                                                    </div>
                                                    <blockquote
                                                      class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493protonmail_quote"
                                                      type="cite">
                                                      <div>--------
                                                        Original Message
                                                        --------<br>
                                                      </div>
                                                      <div>Subject: Re:
                                                        [NCSG-PC]
                                                        [Draft] Letter
                                                        to ICANN re: BC
                                                        and IPC
                                                        correspondence<br>
                                                      </div>
                                                      <div>Local Time:
                                                        13 October 2017
                                                        10:49 PM<br>
                                                      </div>
                                                      <div>UTC Time: 13
                                                        October 2017
                                                        21:49<br>
                                                      </div>
                                                      <div>From: <a
                                                          href="mailto:mpsilvavalent@gmail.com"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">mpsilvavalent@gmail.com</a><br>
                                                      </div>
                                                      <div>To: Ayden
                                                        Férdeline <<a
href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">icann@ferdeline.com</a>><br>
                                                      </div>
                                                      <div>Stephanie
                                                        Perrin <<a
                                                          href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">stephanie.perrin@mail.utoront<wbr>o.ca</a>>,
                                                        <a
                                                          href="mailto:ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is</a> <<a
href="mailto:ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is" target="_blank"
                                                          moz-do-not-send="true">ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is</a>><br>
                                                      </div>
                                                      <div><br>
                                                      </div>
                                                      <div>I’ve been
                                                        following the
                                                        doc, it looks
                                                        great. I would
                                                        be much more
                                                        mellow and
                                                        diplomatic in
                                                        the las
                                                        paragraph, not
                                                        threaten things,
                                                        like going
                                                        public with a
                                                        campaign with
                                                        data protection
                                                        agencies. I
                                                        think we
                                                        shouldn’t
                                                        promote agencies
                                                        as policeman of
                                                        ICANN, I
                                                        understand we
                                                        are waiving that
                                                        in the event the
multi-stakeholder model fails to include as as stakeholder, yet, I
                                                        wouldn’t set
                                                        that as
                                                        precedent and I
                                                        do not recommend
                                                        to make it
                                                        before the
                                                        actual exclusion
                                                        of the process
                                                        happen, much
                                                        less by  by
                                                        written official
                                                        letter. <br>
                                                      </div>
                                                      <div><br>
                                                      </div>
                                                      <div>I do believe
                                                        that we have to
                                                        talk about
                                                        alternative
                                                        strategies, but
                                                        not in a letter
                                                        like this, is a
                                                        very big threat
                                                        with deep
                                                        implication, I
                                                        wouldn’t
                                                        recommend to go
                                                        with that nor
                                                        sign it as
                                                        official NCSG
                                                        position.
                                                        Reminder: ONLY
                                                        ABOUT THE LAST
                                                        PARAGRAPH, the
                                                        rest looks
                                                        amazing and I
                                                        still think we
                                                        should make
                                                        clear the point
                                                        we must be taken
                                                        in account. Just
                                                        take away the
                                                        threat. <br>
                                                      </div>
                                                      <div><br>
                                                      </div>
                                                      <div>Cheers,<br>
                                                      </div>
                                                      <div>Martín<br>
                                                      </div>
                                                      <div><br>
                                                      </div>
                                                      <div>
                                                        <blockquote
                                                          type="cite">
                                                          <div>On Oct
                                                          13, 2017, at
                                                          6:42 PM, Ayden
                                                          Férdeline <<a
href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">icann@ferdeline.com</a>>
                                                          wrote:<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>
                                                          <div
style="font-family:Helvetica;font-size:12px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px">Thanks
                                                          Stephanie, I
                                                          tend to agree.
                                                          I have
                                                          attached a
                                                          copy of the
                                                          letter which
                                                          includes the
                                                          Chair's name.<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div
style="font-family:Helvetica;font-size:12px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px"><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div
style="font-family:Helvetica;font-size:12px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px"
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                                                          <div
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493protonmail_signature_block-user">
                                                          <div>Ayden <br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div
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                                                          </div>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div
style="font-family:Helvetica;font-size:12px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px"><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <blockquote
style="font-family:Helvetica;font-size:12px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;letter-spacing:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:0px;text-transform:none;white-space:normal;word-spacing:0px"
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493protonmail_quote"
                                                          type="cite">
                                                          <div>--------
                                                          Original
                                                          Message
                                                          --------<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>Subject:
                                                          Re: [NCSG-PC]
                                                          [Draft] Letter
                                                          to ICANN re:
                                                          BC and IPC
                                                          correspondence<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>Local
                                                          Time: 13
                                                          October 2017
                                                          10:33 PM<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>UTC Time:
                                                          13 October
                                                          2017 21:33<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>From:<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><a
href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca" target="_blank"
                                                          moz-do-not-send="true">stephanie.perrin@mail.ut<wbr>oronto.ca</a><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>To: Ayden
                                                          Férdeline <<a
href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">icann@ferdeline.com</a>><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div><a
                                                          href="mailto:ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is</a><span
                                                          class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><<a
href="mailto:ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is" target="_blank"
                                                          moz-do-not-send="true">ncsg-pc<wbr>@lists.ncsg.is</a>><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <p><span
                                                          class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493size"><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493font">It should be
                                                          signed by the
                                                          Chair on
                                                          behalf of, in
                                                          my view.</span></span><br>
                                                          </p>
                                                          <p><span
                                                          class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493size"><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493font">cheers Steph</span></span><br>
                                                          </p>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div
                                                          class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493moz-cite-prefix">On
                                                          2017-10-13
                                                          17:27, Ayden
                                                          Férdeline
                                                          wrote:<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <blockquote
                                                          type="cite">
                                                          <div>Hi all,<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>I have
                                                          done some
                                                          final
                                                          polishing to
                                                          the letter,
                                                          and have
                                                          attached a
                                                          proposed final
                                                          draft. I hope
                                                          we may be able
                                                          to reach
                                                          agreement soon
                                                          on sending
                                                          this letter.
                                                          Also - I was
                                                          wondering,
                                                          should it
                                                          carry a name,
                                                          perhaps of the
                                                          Chair, or is
                                                          it okay to be
                                                          signed 'NCSG'?<br>
                                                          </div>
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                                                          <div>Many
                                                          thanks,
                                                          Ayden  <br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493protonmail_signature_block-protonm_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493protonmail_signature_block-empty"><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <blockquote
                                                          type="cite"
                                                          class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493protonmail_quote">
                                                          <div>--------
                                                          Original
                                                          Message
                                                          --------<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>Subject:
                                                          Re: [NCSG-PC]
                                                          [Draft] Letter
                                                          to ICANN re:
                                                          BC and IPC
                                                          correspondence<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>Local
                                                          Time: 13
                                                          October 2017
                                                          7:59 PM<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>UTC Time:
                                                          13 October
                                                          2017 18:59<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>From:<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><a
href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com"
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493moz-txt-link-abbreviated"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">icann@ferdeline.com</a><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>To:
                                                          Stephanie
                                                          Perrin<span
                                                          class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><a
href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca"
                                                          class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493moz-txt-link-rfc2396E"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true"><stephanie.perrin@mail.<wbr>utoronto.ca></a>,<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><a
href="mailto:ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is"
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493moz-txt-link-abbreviated"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">ncsg-pc@lists.nc<wbr>sg.is</a><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>I think
                                                          it is the
                                                          perfect tone
                                                          for this
                                                          letter. As we
                                                          saw in Hong
                                                          Kong this
                                                          month,
                                                          our public
                                                          silence is
                                                          being
                                                          manipulated
                                                          and used to
                                                          make the false
                                                          claim that we
                                                          are being
                                                          consulted with
                                                          and are an
                                                          integral part
                                                          of ICANN's
                                                          efforts to
                                                          comply with
                                                          the GDPR, when
                                                          we are
                                                          not. Thanks
                                                          for these
                                                          edits
                                                          Stephanie. We
                                                          need to
                                                          reshape the
                                                          narrative and
                                                          get it all
                                                          documented. <br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>
                                                          <div>Ayden
                                                          Férdeline<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>Sent from
                                                          ProtonMail
                                                          Mobile<br>
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                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>On Fri,
                                                          Oct 13, 2017
                                                          at 7:14 pm,
                                                          Stephanie
                                                          Perrin <<a
href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca" target="_blank"
                                                          moz-do-not-send="true">stephanie.perrin@mail.utoront<wbr>o.ca</a>>
                                                          wrote:<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <blockquote
                                                          class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493protonmail_quote"
                                                          type="cite">
                                                          <p><span
                                                          class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493size"><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059font" style="font-family:"Lucida
                                                          Grande"">I
                                                          jumped in
                                                          today
                                                          (apologies for
                                                          being
                                                          anonymous,
                                                          always forget
                                                          my google
                                                          password) and
                                                          made quite a
                                                          few changes. 
                                                          I like the
                                                          idea, but I
                                                          think we
                                                          should be a
                                                          bit more
                                                          specific.  In
                                                          terms of
                                                          informing the
DPAs....Swineheart is trying to get people to the IWGDPT meeting in
                                                          Paris, I think
                                                          everyone has
                                                          been briefed
                                                          at the data
                                                          commissioners
                                                          meeting in
                                                          Hong kong
                                                          (remember a
                                                          whole crew
                                                          from ICANN
                                                          went) that
                                                          there is a
                                                          draft
                                                          statement
                                                          coming. So
                                                          they know we
                                                          have been
                                                          briefing them
                                                          for two years,
                                                          we need to
                                                          sharpen that a
                                                          bit.</span></span><br>
                                                          </p>
                                                          <p><span
                                                          class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493size"><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059font" style="font-family:"Lucida
                                                          Grande"">Let
                                                          me know if you
                                                          think it was a
                                                          bit too
                                                          strong.  I
                                                          will confess,
                                                          I am losing my
                                                          patience with
                                                          this lot. 
                                                          They spend
                                                          gobs of money
                                                          gadding around
                                                          trying to
                                                          nullify end
                                                          user rights. 
                                                          Totally ignore
                                                          us.  Ought to
                                                          be ashamed of
                                                          themselves.</span></span><br>
                                                          </p>
                                                          <p><span
                                                          class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493size"><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059font" style="font-family:"Lucida
                                                          Grande"">Stephanie</span></span><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </p>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div
                                                          class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493moz-cite-prefix">On
                                                          2017-10-13
                                                          07:05, Rafik
                                                          Dammak wrote:<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <blockquote
                                                          type="cite">
                                                          <div dir="ltr">
                                                          <div
                                                          class="gmail_extra">hi,<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div
                                                          class="gmail_extra"><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div
                                                          class="gmail_extra">reminder
                                                          for everyone
                                                          to review the
                                                          letter and
                                                          share
                                                          comments.<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div
                                                          class="gmail_extra"><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div
                                                          class="gmail_extra">Best,<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div
                                                          class="gmail_extra"><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div
                                                          class="gmail_extra">
                                                          <div>Rafik<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div
                                                          class="gmail_quote">
                                                          <div>2017-10-11
                                                          4:28 GMT+09:00
                                                          Ayden
                                                          Férdeline<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><span
                                                          dir="ltr"><<a
href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">icann@ferdeline.com</a><wbr>></span>:<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <blockquote
                                                          style="margin:0px
                                                          0px 0px 0.8ex"
class="gmail_quote">
                                                          <div>Also - I
                                                          have now
                                                          revised this
                                                          letter again
                                                          taking into
                                                          account the
                                                          helpful
                                                          feedback that
                                                          was received
                                                          over the past
                                                          48 hours;
                                                          moving
                                                          forward,
                                                          please feel
                                                          free to edit
                                                          the document
                                                          directly if
                                                          you have any
                                                          changes you'd
                                                          like to see
                                                          made. Thanks!<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493HOEnZb"><span
                                                          class="m_-3486001290855872059colour"
style="color:rgb(136,136,136)"></span></span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <span
                                                          class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493HOEnZb"><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059colour" style="color:rgb(136,136,136)">
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493m_2124695277728767332protonmail_signature_block">
                                                          <div
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493m_2124695277728767332protonmail_signature_block-user">
                                                          <div>Ayden <br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493m_2124695277728767332protonmail_signature_block-protonm_2124695277728767332protonmail_signature_block-empty"><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          </span></span>
                                                          <blockquote
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493m_2124695277728767332protonmail_quote"
                                                          type="cite"><span>
                                                          <div>--------
                                                          Original
                                                          Message
                                                          --------<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>Subject:
                                                          Re: [NCSG-PC]
                                                          [Draft] Letter
                                                          to ICANN re:
                                                          BC and IPC
                                                          correspondence<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          </span>
                                                          <div>
                                                          <div
                                                          class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493h5">
                                                          <div>Local
                                                          Time: 10
                                                          October 2017
                                                          7:44 PM<span
                                                          class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>UTC Time:
                                                          10 October
                                                          2017 18:44<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>From:<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><a
href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">icann@ferdeline.com</a><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>To: Rafik
                                                          Dammak <<a
href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" target="_blank"
                                                          moz-do-not-send="true">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>ncsg-pc
                                                          <<a
                                                          href="mailto:ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is</a>><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>Hi Rafik,<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>
                                                          <div>Thank you
                                                          very much for
                                                          your comments.<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>It would
                                                          be great if we
                                                          could finalise
                                                          this letter by
                                                          Friday and
                                                          perhaps even
                                                          send it out
                                                          that day. I
                                                          very much
                                                          welcome edits
                                                          directly to
                                                          the Google
                                                          Doc; everyone
                                                          on this list,
                                                          please help
                                                          write it and
                                                          shape its
                                                          contents!<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>I would
                                                          also like to
                                                          propose that
                                                          we write a
                                                          monthly letter
                                                          to ICANN on
                                                          this topic
                                                          until May
                                                          2018, when
                                                          enforcement of
                                                          the GDPR comes
                                                          into effect.
                                                          That way we
                                                          can document
                                                          for the data
                                                          protection
                                                          authorities
                                                          that we have
                                                          been informing
                                                          ICANN in
                                                          excess of six
                                                          months of
                                                          their need to
                                                          comply with
                                                          this
                                                          regulation.<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>The
                                                          feedback from
                                                          Nick Shorey on
                                                          the PC call
                                                          today - that
                                                          we need to
                                                          help engineer
                                                          a conversation
                                                          between the
                                                          DPAs and their
                                                          GAC
                                                          representatives
                                                          - is an
                                                          interesting
                                                          one, and one
                                                          which seemed
                                                          to have
                                                          support in the
                                                          chat. How
                                                          would we go
                                                          about this,
                                                          however? Do we
                                                          write to the
                                                          GAC? Do we
                                                          express this
                                                          desire to them
                                                          in Abu Dhabi
                                                          during our
                                                          face-to-face
                                                          with them?<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>
                                                          <div>Best
                                                          wishes,<span
                                                          class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>Ayden <span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493m_2124695277728767332protonmail_signature_block">
                                                          <div
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493m_2124695277728767332protonmail_signature_block-protonm_2124695277728767332protonmail_signature_block-empty"><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <blockquote
                                                          type="cite"
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493m_2124695277728767332protonmail_quote">
                                                          <div>--------
                                                          Original
                                                          Message
                                                          --------<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>Subject:
                                                          Re: [NCSG-PC]
                                                          [Draft] Letter
                                                          to ICANN re:
                                                          BC and IPC
                                                          correspondence<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>Local
                                                          Time: 10
                                                          October 2017
                                                          5:33 AM<span
                                                          class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>UTC Time:
                                                          10 October
                                                          2017 04:33<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>From:<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><a
href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" target="_blank"
                                                          moz-do-not-send="true">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>To: Ayden
                                                          Férdeline <<a
href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">icann@ferdeline.com</a>><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>ncsg-pc
                                                          <<a
                                                          href="mailto:ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is</a>><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
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                                                          class="gmail_extra">Hi
                                                          Ayden,<span
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                                                          class="gmail_extra">Thanks
                                                          for the draft,<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
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                                                          <div
                                                          class="gmail_extra">it
                                                          is important
                                                          we make a
                                                          point to voice
                                                          our concerns
                                                          and influence
                                                          the process.
                                                          as we
                                                          discussed
                                                          before here
                                                          and on the
                                                          last call we
                                                          got 2 problems
                                                          1- our
                                                          representatives
                                                          in taskforce
                                                          not being
                                                          informed 2-
                                                          the last Data
                                                          protection
                                                          conference
                                                          (that is
                                                          already
                                                          passed)<span
                                                          class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
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                                                          <div
                                                          class="gmail_extra">for
                                                          the current
                                                          letter, indeed
                                                          we should
                                                          tweak the
                                                          language there
                                                          ;) while we
                                                          keep the
                                                          substance.
                                                          reading IPC
                                                          letter, it
                                                          seems they
                                                          reject the use
                                                          case matrix
                                                          and I
                                                          understood
                                                          from previous
                                                          comments you
                                                          think that
                                                          doesn't include
                                                          our
                                                          perspective. I
                                                          add few
                                                          comments but I
                                                          think we can
                                                          add more, in
                                                          particular,
                                                          our concerns
                                                          in general
                                                          regarding the
                                                          process and
                                                          not just
                                                          responding to
                                                          BC and IPC
                                                          requests.<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
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                                                          <div
                                                          class="gmail_extra">I
                                                          ask other PC
                                                          members to
                                                          review the
                                                          letter and
                                                          share their
                                                          thoughts. I
                                                          put the GDPR
                                                          as a
                                                          discussion
                                                          item for today
                                                          call. We need
                                                          a deadline to
                                                          get this done
                                                          and prior to
                                                          Abud Dhabi
                                                          meeting if we
                                                          may want to
                                                          continue the
                                                          discussion
                                                          there and
                                                          depending on
                                                          how things go
                                                          with the
                                                          cross-community
                                                          session. I
                                                          propose that
                                                          we reach a new
                                                          version by
                                                          this Friday.<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
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                                                          class="gmail_extra">Best,<span
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                                                          class="gmail_extra">Rafik <span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
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                                                          <div>2017-10-08
                                                          23:07
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                                                          Ayden
                                                          Férdeline<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><span
                                                          dir="ltr"><<a
href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">icann@ferdeline.com</a><wbr>></span>:<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
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class="gmail_quote">
                                                          <div>Hi,<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>I have
                                                          drafted a
                                                          letter to
                                                          ICANN in
                                                          response to
                                                          the recent
                                                          correspondence
                                                          received from
                                                          the BC and the
                                                          IPC.<span
                                                          class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><a
href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/13ujYOpJFL0eNvjQCiNmsduFFbiUPQC5Wmbe9wHC2K6Q/edit?usp=sharing"
                                                          title="You can
                                                          read/edit it
                                                          here."
                                                          rel="nofollow"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">You can read/edit it here.</a><span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span>I
                                                          know the
                                                          language is
                                                          provocative
                                                          (intentionally
                                                          so), but this
                                                          is a first
                                                          draft -- and
                                                          if you
                                                          disapprove
                                                          please provide
                                                          alternative
                                                          language.<span
class="m_-3486001290855872059m_-781158460057476493Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>
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                                                          <div>Best,
                                                          Ayden<span
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