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    <p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">I jumped in today
          (apologies for being anonymous, always forget my google
          password) and made quite a few changes.  I like the idea, but
          I think we should be a bit more specific.  In terms of informing
          the DPAs....Swineheart is trying to get people to the IWGDPT
          meeting in Paris, I think everyone has been briefed at the
          data commissioners meeting in Hong kong (remember a whole crew
          from ICANN went) that there is a draft statement coming. So
          they know we have been briefing them for two years, we need to
          sharpen that a bit.</font></font></p>
    <p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Let me know if you
          think it was a bit too strong.  I will confess, I am losing my
          patience with this lot.  They spend gobs of money gadding
          around trying to nullify end user rights.  Totally ignore us. 
          Ought to be ashamed of themselves.</font></font></p>
    <p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Stephanie</font></font><br>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2017-10-13 07:05, Rafik Dammak
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        <div class="gmail_extra">reminder for everyone to review the
          letter and share comments.</div>
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        <div class="gmail_extra">Best,</div>
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        <div class="gmail_extra">Rafik<br>
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          <div class="gmail_quote">2017-10-11 4:28 GMT+09:00 Ayden
            Férdeline <span dir="ltr"><<a
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              <div>Also - I have now revised this letter again taking
                into account the helpful feedback that was received over
                the past 48 hours; moving forward, please feel free to
                edit the document directly if you have any changes you'd
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                      <div>Ayden <br>
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                  <div>-------- Original Message --------<br>
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                  <div>Subject: Re: [NCSG-PC] [Draft] Letter to ICANN
                    re: BC and IPC correspondence<br>
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                    <div>Local Time: 10 October 2017 7:44 PM<br>
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                    <div>UTC Time: 10 October 2017 18:44<br>
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                    <div>From: <a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com"
                        target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">icann@ferdeline.com</a><br>
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                    <div>To: Rafik Dammak <<a
                        href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com"
                        target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>><br>
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                    <div>ncsg-pc <<a
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                        target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is</a>><br>
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                    <div>Hi Rafik,<br>
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                      <div>Thank you very much for your comments. <br>
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                      <div>It would be great if we could finalise this
                        letter by Friday and perhaps even send it out
                        that day. I very much welcome edits directly to
                        the Google Doc; everyone on this list, please
                        help write it and shape its contents!<br>
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                    <div>I would also like to propose that we write a
                      monthly letter to ICANN on this topic until May
                      2018, when enforcement of the GDPR comes into
                      effect. That way we can document for the data
                      protection authorities that we have been informing
                      ICANN in excess of six months of their need to
                      comply with this regulation.<br>
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                    <div>The feedback from Nick Shorey on the PC call
                      today - that we need to help engineer a
                      conversation between the DPAs and their GAC
                      representatives - is an interesting one, and one
                      which seemed to have support in the chat. How
                      would we go about this, however? Do we write to
                      the GAC? Do we express this desire to them in Abu
                      Dhabi during our face-to-face with them?<br>
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                      <div>Best wishes,<br>
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                      <div>Ayden <br>
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                      <div>-------- Original Message --------<br>
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                      <div>Subject: Re: [NCSG-PC] [Draft] Letter to
                        ICANN re: BC and IPC correspondence<br>
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                      <div>Local Time: 10 October 2017 5:33 AM<br>
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                      <div>UTC Time: 10 October 2017 04:33<br>
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                      <div>From: <a
                          href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com"
                          target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a><br>
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                      <div>To: Ayden Férdeline <<a
                          href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com"
                          target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">icann@ferdeline.com</a>><br>
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                      <div>ncsg-pc <<a
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                          target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is</a>><br>
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                        <div class="gmail_extra">Hi Ayden,<br>
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                        <div class="gmail_extra">Thanks for the draft,<br>
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                        <div class="gmail_extra">it is important we make
                          a point to voice our concerns and influence
                          the process. as we discussed before here and
                          on the last call we got 2 problems 1- our
                          representatives in taskforce not being
                          informed 2- the last Data protection
                          conference (that is already passed)<br>
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                        <div class="gmail_extra">for the current letter,
                          indeed we should tweak the language there ;)
                          while we keep the substance. reading IPC
                          letter, it seems they reject the use case
                          matrix and I understood from previous comments
                          you think that doesn't include our
                          perspective. I add few comments but I think we
                          can add more, in particular, our concerns in
                          general regarding the process and not just
                          responding to BC and IPC requests.<br>
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                        <div class="gmail_extra">I ask other PC members
                          to review the letter and share their thoughts.
                          I put the GDPR as a discussion item for today
                          call. We need a deadline to get this done and
                          prior to Abud Dhabi meeting if we may want to
                          continue the discussion there and depending on
                          how things go with the cross-community
                          session. I propose that we reach a new version
                          by this Friday.<br>
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                        <div class="gmail_extra">Best,<br>
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                        <div class="gmail_extra">Rafik <br>
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                            <div>2017-10-08 23:07 GMT+09:00 Ayden
                              Férdeline <span dir="ltr"><<a
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                              <div>Hi,<br>
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                              <div>I have drafted a letter to ICANN in
                                response to the recent correspondence
                                received from the BC and the IPC. <a
href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/13ujYOpJFL0eNvjQCiNmsduFFbiUPQC5Wmbe9wHC2K6Q/edit?usp=sharing"
                                  title="You can read/edit it here."
                                  rel="nofollow" target="_blank"
                                  moz-do-not-send="true">You can
                                  read/edit it here.</a> I know the
                                language is provocative (intentionally
                                so), but this is a first draft -- and if
                                you disapprove please provide
                                alternative language.<br>
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                              <div>Best, Ayden<br>
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