<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_extra">Hi all,</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">the deadline for submission is this Friday. I attached the clean version for review. I understand that Matt, Poncelet, Stephanie support the comment. we need to hear from other PC members.</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">Best,</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br></div><div class="gmail_extra">Rafik<br>
<br><div class="gmail_quote">2017-08-07 23:24 GMT+09:00 Stephanie Perrin <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca" target="_blank">stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca</a>></span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
  
    
  
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    <p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">I think that is a
          really good idea, as these are important procedures, and we
          need to be able to amend if required.  Hard to anticipate
          everything, in my view...</font></font></p><span class="HOEnZb"><font color="#888888">
    <p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">SP</font></font><br>
    </p></font></span><div><div class="h5">
    <br>
    <div class="m_-3970700719362368518moz-cite-prefix">On 2017-08-07 08:49, farzaneh badii
      wrote:<br>
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      <div dir="ltr">
        <div style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Hi</div>
        <div style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br>
        </div>
        <div style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I was on the DT group.
          I don't have the time to go through every single change and
          see if they accord with what we agreed on. If you want in the
          public comment we should ask that if later on during
          implementing the operating procedures we find out that
           changes recommended by  DT   for some reason are not
          reflected in the new  GNSO operating procedures, GNSO should
          follow the DT advice in those circumstances and allow for the
          mistake to be corrected.  </div>
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            <div dir="ltr">
              <div><font face="verdana, sans-serif">Farzaneh </font></div>
            </div>
          </div>
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        <br>
        <div class="gmail_quote">On Mon, Aug 7, 2017 at 8:41 AM,
          Stephanie Perrin <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca" target="_blank">stephanie.perrin@mail.<wbr>utoronto.ca</a>></span>
          wrote:<br>
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            <div text="#000000" bgcolor="#FFFFFF">
              <p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">It looks
                    fine to me.  I don't have knowledge of or time to do
                    the research on the issues at the moment, so I hope
                    that those who do can catch things that need
                    changes.</font></font></p>
              <p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">cheers
                    Stephanie</font></font><br>
              </p>
              <div>
                <div class="m_-3970700719362368518h5"> <br>
                  <div class="m_-3970700719362368518m_2785540258694958688moz-cite-prefix">On
                    2017-08-07 02:07, Rafik Dammak wrote:<br>
                  </div>
                  <blockquote type="cite">
                    <div dir="ltr">
                      <div class="gmail_extra">Hi,</div>
                      <div class="gmail_extra"><br>
                      </div>
                      <div class="gmail_extra">the comment is quite
                        straightforward and supporting the changes
                        outlined in the public consultation.</div>
                      <div class="gmail_extra">we can have as the
                        deadline for review and endorsement the 9th
                        August. I urge councilors, in particular, to
                        review the changes since it concerns the
                        operating procedures.</div>
                      <div class="gmail_extra">Thanks, Matt again for
                        the draft. I resolved the edits made by Ayden.
                        ant proof-reading and review would be helpful.</div>
                      <div class="gmail_extra"><br>
                      </div>
                      <div class="gmail_extra">Best,</div>
                      <div class="gmail_extra"><br>
                      </div>
                      <div class="gmail_extra">Rafik<br>
                        <br>
                        <div class="gmail_quote">2017-08-05 6:33
                          GMT+09:00 Ayden Férdeline <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" target="_blank">icann@ferdeline.com</a>></span>:<br>
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                            <div>Hi all,<br>
                              <br>
                              I have made some minor alterations to
                              style, but added nothing of substance. I
                              hope someone with more knowledge of this
                              issue will be able to contribute to our
                              comment. Submissions are due in six days
                              time. Thanks!<br>
                              <br>
                              Best wishes, Ayden <br>
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                                  <div>-------- Original Message
                                    --------<br>
                                  </div>
                                  <div>Subject: Re: [NCSG-PC] NCSG
                                    Comment on GNSO operating procedures
                                    change<br>
                                  </div>
                                  <div>Local Time: August 1, 2017 5:35
                                    PM<br>
                                  </div>
                                  <div>UTC Time: August 1, 2017 4:35 PM<br>
                                  </div>
                                  <div>From: <a href="mailto:matthew@intpolicy.com" target="_blank">matthew@intpolicy.com</a><br>
                                  </div>
                                  <div>To: <a href="mailto:ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is" target="_blank">ncsg-pc@lists.ncsg.is</a>,
                                    farzaneh badii <<a href="mailto:farzaneh.badii@GMAIL.COM" target="_blank">farzaneh.badii@GMAIL.COM</a>><br>
                                  </div>
                                  <div><br>
                                  </div>
                                  <div> <br>
                                  </div>
                                  <p>Hi all<br>
                                  </p>
                                  <p>Wanted to get this back at the top
                                    of the list of to-do's as time is
                                    running out.<br>
                                  </p>
                                  <p>Appreciate the comments from some
                                    of the PC members but would welcome
                                    additional inputs, thoughts, etc.<br>
                                  </p>
                                  <p>See google doc below.<br>
                                  </p>
                                  <p>Thanks.<br>
                                  </p>
                                  <p>Matthew<br>
                                  </p>
                                  <div><br>
                                  </div>
                                  <div class="m_-3970700719362368518m_2785540258694958688m_2944817719784776093moz-cite-prefix">On
                                    27/07/2017 03:08, Martin Pablo Silva
                                    Valent wrote:<br>
                                  </div>
                                  <blockquote type="cite">
                                    <div>Matt, <br>
                                    </div>
                                    <div><span class="m_-3970700719362368518m_2785540258694958688m_2944817719784776093Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre-wrap"></span>I
                                      don’t have any comment to do, I
                                      agree with the statements and the
                                      wording. Let me know if I can do
                                      anything specific to help. Other
                                      than that you have my support.
                                      Thanks!<br>
                                    </div>
                                    <div><br>
                                    </div>
                                    <div>Cheers,<br>
                                    </div>
                                    <div>Martín<br>
                                    </div>
                                    <div>
                                      <div><br>
                                      </div>
                                      <div>
                                        <blockquote type="cite">
                                          <div>On Jul 25, 2017, at 8:22
                                            PM, Rafik Dammak <<a rel="noreferrer nofollow
                                              noopener" href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com" target="_blank">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>>
                                            wrote:<br>
                                          </div>
                                          <div><br>
                                          </div>
                                          <div>
                                            <div dir="ltr">
                                              <div class="gmail_extra">Hi,<br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div class="gmail_extra"><br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div class="gmail_extra">the
                                                deadline for the public
                                                comment is the 10th of
                                                August, we have to
                                                finish consulting with
                                                NCSG members, review and
                                                endorsement prior to
                                                that. I suggest 8th
                                                August as our internal
                                                deadline.<br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div class="gmail_extra"><br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div class="gmail_extra">Best,<br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div class="gmail_extra"><br>
                                              </div>
                                              <div class="gmail_extra">
                                                <div>Rafik<br>
                                                </div>
                                                <div> <br>
                                                </div>
                                                <div> <br>
                                                </div>
                                                <div class="gmail_quote">
                                                  <div>2017-07-25 23:28
                                                    GMT+09:00 Stefania
                                                    Milan <span dir="ltr"><<a rel="noreferrer
                                                        nofollow
                                                        noopener" href="mailto:stefania.milan@eui.eu" target="_blank">stefania.milan@eui.eu</a>></span>:<br>
                                                  </div>
                                                  <div> <br>
                                                  </div>
                                                  <blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
                                                    <div dir="auto">
                                                      <div>
                                                        <div>Hi Matt,
                                                          thanks. What's
                                                          the deadline
                                                          for this? I am
                                                          in transit
                                                          (and in fact,
                                                          on holiday),
                                                          witch sketchy
                                                          internet
                                                          access and the
                                                          doc doesn't
                                                          open for me
                                                          today (might
                                                          be the poor
                                                          connection...)<br>
                                                        </div>
                                                        <div> <br>
                                                        </div>
                                                        <div> Sent from
                                                          my iPhone<br>
                                                        </div>
                                                      </div>
                                                      <div>
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                                                          <div>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div>On Jul
                                                          25, 2017, at
                                                          9:17 AM,
                                                          Matthew Shears
                                                          <<a rel="noreferrer
                                                          nofollow
                                                          noopener" href="mailto:matthew@intpolicy.com" target="_blank">matthew@intpolicy.com</a>>
                                                          wrote:<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div> <br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <blockquote type="cite">
                                                          <div>
                                                          <p>Let me
                                                          qualify the
                                                          last sentence
                                                          - ICANN staff
                                                          are not adding
                                                          new items in
                                                          addition to
                                                          the work of
                                                          the DT, but
                                                          rather adding
                                                          references to
                                                          work done
                                                          previously.<br>
                                                          </p>
                                                          <div><br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div class="m_-3970700719362368518m_2785540258694958688m_2944817719784776093m_1568197107399290511moz-cite-prefix">On
                                                          25/07/2017
                                                          16:05, Matthew
                                                          Shears wrote:<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <blockquote type="cite">
                                                          <div>Calling
                                                          all PCers<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div> <br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div class="m_-3970700719362368518m_2785540258694958688m_2944817719784776093m_1568197107399290511moz-forward-container">
                                                          <p>I have
                                                          started on the
                                                          above public
                                                          comment but am
                                                          still going
                                                          through the
                                                          consultation
                                                          docs. 
                                                          However, time
                                                          marches on and
                                                          we need to get
                                                          this one
                                                          underway.  <br>
                                                          </p>
                                                          <p>So, please
                                                          review the
                                                          consultation
                                                          docs here:<br>
                                                          </p>
                                                          <p><a rel="noreferrer
                                                          nofollow
                                                          noopener" class="m_-3970700719362368518m_2785540258694958688m_2944817719784776093m_1568197107399290511moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://www.icann.org/public-comments/gnso-op-procedures-2017-06-19-en" target="_blank">https://www.icann.org/public-c<wbr>omments/gnso-op-procedures-201<wbr>7-06-19-en</a><br>
                                                          </p>
                                                          <p>And make
                                                          comments in
                                                          the google doc
                                                          here:<br>
                                                          </p>
                                                          <p><a rel="noreferrer
                                                          nofollow
                                                          noopener" href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gydCJ3IFGsptk8BTYa8aQ5lF-ddk_Q9DWja7bZIgsiY/edit" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/docume<wbr>nt/d/1gydCJ3IFGsptk8BTYa8aQ5lF<wbr>-ddk_Q9DWja7bZIgsiY/edit</a><br>
                                                          </p>
                                                          <div>Note that
                                                          ICANN staff
                                                          have used this
                                                          opportunity to
                                                          include other
                                                          changes that
                                                          the DT did not
                                                          discuss.<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div> <br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div> Many
                                                          thanks.<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div> <br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div> Matthew<br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div> <br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div> <br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <div> <br>
                                                          </div>
                                                          <pre class="m_-3970700719362368518m_2785540258694958688m_2944817719784776093m_1568197107399290511moz-signature" cols="72">-- 
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                                                          <pre class="m_-3970700719362368518m_2785540258694958688m_2944817719784776093m_1568197107399290511moz-signature" cols="72">-- 
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</pre>
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                                                        <div>
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